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Length: 8 Lines

MARXM3N (21%)

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Crew: PHARAOHS

Reppin: Texas, United States

remarK (79%) WINNER

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Crew: Lost In Translation

Reppin: Queens, New York, United States

MARXM3N

welcome to the "major league" shake my HAND FAM but be warned if you"send the wrong pitch" im "swingin the stick" you an 3 homies "runnin for home" like a GRAND SLAM translation "pop fly" at the mouth an get "caught in the field" with no "chance of RUNNIN" and ya homie over there gettin "swung" on an "stretched out" like hes the next batter COMEN you aint in the "game" yo "team"? I dont even see 9 SHIRTS so if he trys to SOUND RAW haha thats a "GROUND BALL" i bet he SLIDE FIRST so be4 i "throw a fast 1" get "tiped up" dont "block my shine" like a SUN VISOR otherise my homie will be "masked up" ready to "call you out" like the UMPIRE

remarK

You must'a HAD A DREAM OF THIS... lucid, waking up PANICKING n' SHIT... I mean that HAD TO SEEM LEGIT how you say you CARRY BEAMS n CLIPS until you get randomly searched & come up clean as the whistle that bitch from baywatch HAD BETWEEN HER LIPS! yuck. You couldn't rip this rapper off if you MELT THE PLASTIC when's the last to you FELT YA ASS KICKED? pay your boss respect I'm her to put the "soft to death" like a VELVET CASKET. Don't front like what HE BRINGIN' IS THAT HARD step in the ring and get put to SLEEP, THINKIN them WACK BARS won't result in you "sittin' between the ropes" like the TREE SWING IN YA BACKYARD!... light

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Battle started: May 23^rd 2016 at 03:51
Challenger joined: May 23^rd 2016 at 05:09

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2016-05-23 05:09:35).

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MARXM3N <KNEEL> Exclusive Member	Quick expo: obviously the concept is baseball but if u didnt kno theres 9 positions on the field hints the 9 shirts bar everything else self explanatory Comment Only Posted on: 2016-05-23 00:07:22
ILLoKWENT <DGAF> Hall Of Famer LBT Legend Concept Champion	nightmare.. sorry but noone can see your expo til after they vote. Comment Only Posted on: 2016-05-23 04:03:42
Illuminate <GetRight> Exclusive Member	One rapper stuck with his concept thru and thru with a solid 8. I loved my losers drop but the concepts were a bit scattered. FV gl Voted: MARXM3N / remarK Posted on: 2016-05-23 05:57:27
NotoriousOne Exclusive Member	OK So nightmare you tried scheming through your drop which was nice but weakened the impact of punchlines and many other key things in a battle where as remark had consistent haymakers and some funny shit plus cool multies also this was a better battle then I expected tbh nice work both Voted: MARXM3N / remarK Posted on: 2016-05-23 11:57:56
MARXM3N <KNEEL> Exclusive Member	Haymakers?? Really haha ok Comment Only Posted on: 2016-05-23 14:59:48
MaCc Da G0D <APECS>	Closeeeeee!!! Both had Hard Lines! Nice punches and decent deliveries. Winner just had a bit less filler and his set Ups were a bit more timely. No hate. This was A Good Beef!! 👍👌 Voted: MARXM3N / remarK Posted on: 2016-05-23 22:59:27
Pixels <D3SS>	Felt one's verse lacked in many ways, n way stretched, concepts weren't coonecting at thr right angles, excerpt for the Closer, multies sum were off too, if you gon have a long drop format lyk tat multies shudnt be in a flaw, n the other starting punch was more effective n kept it clean with gud complex ideas the fair is in.. Voted: MARXM3N / remarK Posted on: 2016-05-24 02:49:28
Execute	Going to be honest. Battle was terribly one sided. One person has an idea on how to conform and write a verse. The other had concepts and verry simple multies but everything was one giant clusterfuck. The key to writing a bar is 1) Forming a concept 2) Creating a relevant setup and then a punchline. However, that wasn't the case here. A lot of filler in the loser's verse aswell. Voted: MARXM3N / remarK Posted on: 2016-05-24 07:34:41
Turner Exclusive Member	Clear winner. My w kept the constant theme and delivered effective punches and multis to attack his opponent. Just seemed like one guy is a lot more experienced Thant the other. My L had nice rhymes but was jabbing when his opponent was throwing hooks. You were direct in your attack which I always appreciate. Good battle Voted: MARXM3N / remarK Posted on: 2016-05-24 11:08:42

Xercius <ANBU>	@Lord expo why said person won just sayin okay is not an expo...Vote and comment deleted Comment Only Posted on: 2016-05-24 17:53:46
READY_ROB	Both went in good battle no hate i want to challenge myself remark send me 8 or ill send you 8 Voted: MARXM3N / remarK Posted on: 2016-05-25 13:00:06
RiDLA Exclusive Member	Did y'all's thug thizzzle fellas Voted: MARXM3N / remarK Posted on: 2016-05-25 21:50:19


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