Scheme: PRISON RAPE FANTASY Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-02-16 01:22:45

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Posted on: 2016-02-16 01:23:03

really disappointing battle on both fronts tbh. jordan u seemd to hold up fairly decently wit the scheme, at least most of it read naturally.. cant say the same for bleu. u had the smoother scheme work but had to sacrifice natural wording to achieve it.. ex. HIT HIS FACE, FAM AH SLEEP...?no fam.. that shit was horrible.. who the fuck says FAM AH SLEEP in conversation? also KID WAS GAVE ?shouldnt it be KID WAS GIVEN AMNESTY..?easy fixes if u takin more time on ya verse.. again MIDGET MADE HAMMOKS BE...should be MIDGET MADE HAMMOCKS.... you didnt need BE..at the end, alot of noobish miatakes here, which shouldnt be here... now in the punch dept. again wasnt too 8mpressed..jordan alot of played flips, ex.shit in the bag=anything with pampers diapers is played bro.L's=anything to do wit weed and ganja=PLAYED.. rest was weak, liquor chase flip , basically executed, just wasnt feelinem this time..bleu, your concepts to flips were executed better, but forced to shit a couple ofem. slay in ya reign dere?are u calling jordan dear?shits terribly forced .. and doesnt work both ways. it should be slay with ya reindeer.. you cant slay 'in' ya reindeer.. anyway this comes down to better exection punch wise and bleu edges this barely... Voted: S O U L R I T E /
Posted on: 2016-07-25 01:02:09

:p Y'all both had some fire in there. But one of ya did have a better flow and delivery. Voted: S O U L R I T E /
Posted on: 2016-07-25 01:02:50

oh an INTERSTATE FAMILIES aint even a real adjective.. FAMILIES ON THE INTERSTATE is grammatically correct.. but it wouldnt have worked with your scheme, which again is an example of you sacrificing natural wording for the sake of carrying the multi... which is a noobish move..very rusty fam Voted: S O U L R I T E /
Posted on: 2016-07-25 02:17:03

This was an alright battle nothing really jumped out at me out..but still a decent showing...Both had their mistakes in areas but I felt one was more complex with concepts and the execution...I got one the fairs in Voted: S O U L R I T E /
Posted on: 2016-07-25 12:03:09

Both had some instances of weird wording...waist pampers arent a thing, 'that's a liquor chase' isnt a question, saw the word 'jeez' in a strange place and 'interstate families' was kinda a stretch. Both had good stuff too....I think Bleu started stronger and Jordan ended stronger but overall one was more consistent with the punches from start to finish. Voted: S O U L R I T E /
Posted on: 2016-07-26 21:10:33

Nice litle batle here both did there thing. i got my winner but good luck to both! Voted: S O U L R I T E /
Posted on: 2016-07-26 22:26:47

Apart from the punches a scheme battle should flow well with the scheme in question. I didn't even realise my loser was scheming until my winners verse gave it away. Some good moments but a pretty fairgone conclusion here. Fv Voted: S O U L R I T E /
Posted on: 2016-07-27 10:57:48

it was a landslide victory for the JORDAN RIVER while the BLEU IN THE FACE rapper drowned in the wave of bars. punches- jordan, mulits- jordan, everything - jordan. Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-07-27 14:00:23

Decent Read Jordan~i felt you're Verse was Pretty Basic no Strong Punches just jabs here and there Bleu~I'm kind of Dissapointed with you're Verse Also for a big Hitter but you had a Smoother verse and a Couple Dope Punches Creativity Overall giving it to Bleu fv no hate~ Voted: S O U L R I T E /
Posted on: 2016-07-27 23:59:25