row- first bar. wasnt feeling at all here.setup just didnt feel any cohesion wit your rapist concept... and dont get me started on the flip off of 'ray pissed'..yeah i get that he was a rapist, but he was much more widely notorious as a canibal.. so him drawing him self to associate the wordplay is original but poorly crafted....there a plenty of other connections that wouldve worked well wit your rapist, dahmer wasnt one of em.. RAY- holes in his structure concept immediately beckons me back to obey's concept in the GC semi... this is played bro, the row ink a new flow right, is a nice attempt at complext wordplay, but really reads awkward... if 'rowing canoe flow right', how does a canoe flow right? they either float or sink.. they dont flow with waves... this is lazy wording right here..setup wasnt too relavent either, your starting off wit a gay diss, then your next line is talkin bout his structure and writing technique.. stick to one idea from setup topunch.... winner here took this based on stronger attacks that were more directed at his opponent.. loser started off in the right direction wit that regard then tapered off into random hits.. fairs in. Voted: Ray Zeus /
Posted on: 2014-10-17 02:15:07

Close battle Felt like the loser had forces concepts! Normally Dude smashes it But i think he let off the vice grips wich was enough to cost a lost! Winner Was consistent through with not a superior concepts but worthy enough to pul the W gb! Fv Voted: Ray Zeus /
Posted on: 2014-10-17 02:35:02

felt one had a pretty solid structure thru out his verse without too many slip ups, co-sign wit illo bout the first bar.. both showed personal hits an swayed from them broad shits.. one major downfall was a wordplay attempt that wasnt close to soundin' how it should of, or what it could of sounded like.. originality was shown by both, but tbh it wasnt too close of a bout imo. winner got it with a more solid verse, more solid personal hits without any slip ups. fair's in. mid to high Voted: Ray Zeus /
Posted on: 2014-10-17 03:02:10

Not the best I've seen from either. My loser had some very weak punches imo. The Multis were on point and the concepts were ok but the punches just fell flat. My winner had basically the same strengths as my loser just with a couple of punches that were better executed. Shouts out to Row for finally unblocking me again. No hate fair vote all day. Voted: Ray Zeus /
Posted on: 2014-10-17 10:35:01

You've done better. I don't really need to comment, I actually read others comments beforehand. Fair vote. Sorry if I seem like I been hard on u, votings just who you feel more lyrically. Voted: Ray Zeus /
Posted on: 2014-10-18 04:17:46

Damn tight battle both dudes had bars man, one edged this in almost every aspect but the other dude was hella dope none the less, fairs tossed fellas dope battle yo Voted: Ray Zeus /
Posted on: 2014-10-18 21:09:30

good read from both lot of personal shots and few nice word plays in there..close call FV is in tho return it Voted: Ray Zeus /
Posted on: 2014-10-19 14:37:24