Ray Rice the former running back of the Baltimore (B-more) Ravens (ravin') was caught on video punching his fiancee in an elevator. Marvin the Martian had an assistant who was a monster and a dog named k9. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-09 14:17:22

Alright, good battle. ET, you had some nice ass schemework and setups, leading in to punches that had slightly played ideas behind them (elevate/elevator), but they were executed in such a fresh manner that it didn't matter. You've really gotten back in form. The one thing I didn't like about your verse is that you used too many words between scheme instances, filling up space and weakening flow. For example, "Don't START WITH THE BARKIN' cause dog, you ain't a 'monster' plus you don't have the HEART TO BE SPARKIN' just watch me 'break down your craft' like you need PARTS FOR A STARSHIP and I bet you won't even show your face like MARVIN THE MARTIAN!!!" You didn't need the words "cause," "just," or "and I bet" in there. From a purely grammatical perspective, it makes sense to use them, but this is a rap battle, not a Ph.D. thesis. Everyone will understand what is being said without them. Evolution, your schemework was very simplist compared to E.T.'s. Your punches and concepts didn't measure up, and were played. Unlike your opponent's, they weren't executed in a clean enough fashion to get by with the played-ness. What you did have on your opponent was a slightly nicer flow, with less space between hits. Overall, one got this for me with better readability, complexity, and freshness. Fair's in. Voted: ET the Refugee / Evolution
Posted on: 2014-09-12 00:05:46

winner took my vote with concepts and multi use..one line really set me off, and raised the bar for the loser to which in my opinion he wasn't able to come back from. the loser's concepts were basic, and he had no real hard hitting punches. like I said it was really one bar that did the most damage, and I was waiting for something hard hitting for the loser to counter but everything fell short. no hate good battle. Voted: ET the Refugee / Evolution
Posted on: 2014-09-12 00:08:44

I felt one was just smoother overall and had nicer ideas when it came to executing punches. Other needs to work on creativity and more complete concepts overall. Fairs dropped Voted: ET the Refugee / Evolution
Posted on: 2014-09-12 00:30:24

One elevated crazy since last time I saw em, this was pretty obvious, went for the smoother verse. Voted: ET the Refugee / Evolution
Posted on: 2014-09-12 07:10:16

Pretty nice battle here. Both had a nice flow, multis were nicely laid out and punches were fairly descent. The winner got this for me with the better structured scheme. Tho his bars were stretched from set up to punch, they did hit decently. My loser didn't get too complex with his scheme work which took power out of the punches imo. Descent battle tho boys, Fairs in.. Keep Elevatin' Voted: ET the Refugee / Evolution
Posted on: 2014-09-12 10:41:22

I just like my winner's scheme's a lot more. Voted: ET the Refugee / Evolution
Posted on: 2014-09-12 11:28:35

#KeepGrindin' Voted: ET the Refugee / Evolution
Posted on: 2014-09-12 19:37:30

I felt one stayed consistent more overall, I don't have nothing bad to say. Great battle here. One just took it by a hair. Voted: ET the Refugee / Evolution
Posted on: 2014-09-13 05:03:03

Thought one wa loosing till the end of his verse fairs in Voted: ET the Refugee / Evolution
Posted on: 2014-09-13 12:20:24

Both were good but my winner had the overall better structured and punches fv no hate~ Voted: ET the Refugee / Evolution
Posted on: 2014-09-13 13:33:31

How do u judge this battle one emcee had two scheming punches that took forever to hit. The other started nice but endin was eehh as the rebuttal no way you let both those punches go by with out 1 gettin flipped good battle tho Voted: ET the Refugee / Evolution
Posted on: 2014-09-13 17:42:10

Thats a great battle... slight advantage on one side though but respect to both Voted: ET the Refugee / Evolution
Posted on: 2014-09-13 19:49:53

Aiiight it's been a while but here it is.... I've battled both emcees in the past maybe more recent with one than the other but both excelled in terms of skills. Maybe the one improved more than the other. First emcee had some nice ideas and 1 or two lines worked for me in terms of delivery. Scheme was tight so was the flow. Second emcess had nice flow and a different form of punch which I feel is live battle like however lacking some creativity when judging this as a text battle. Also more basic in terms if rhyme scheme. worth the read. Generous rate in. Good battle guys fair vote no hate. Voted: ET the Refugee / Evolution
Posted on: 2014-09-13 21:09:56

Good battle ET. Apparently my punches were played.. though I never heard them before so they were original to me.. lol but I'll suck it up and take the L like a man. I'm involved in another tournament right now, but when it's over, I would like to challenge you to a re-match, and I'll send. GB bro. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-13 21:50:24

both nice .. GB Voted: ET the Refugee / Evolution
Posted on: 2014-09-14 00:29:15

fair vote Voted: ET the Refugee / Evolution
Posted on: 2014-09-14 15:13:38

Looks like some voters need to attend the school of vp. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-14 15:32:08

VP is stupid as hell, one vote shouldn't count more than another persons. But that's just my opinion. GB tho man, i'll send shortly. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-16 00:35:32