tbh.. i just liked one's punchez better. I've seen the loser do better. Always Fair. ~1~ Voted: PEBO / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-04-10 20:26:44

Fv no h8, liked his lines better Voted: PEBO / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-04-10 22:01:46

No hate Liked winners bars and rhyming was more complex and consistent. Voted: PEBO / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-04-11 18:21:25

Fv Voted: PEBO / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-04-11 18:27:55

feel both were weak in quite a few areas here. both really lacked in solid concepts, one more than the other. seen a line from both that has been played out alot. feel one was less simplistic than the other multi wise, while the other stayed more consistent with an edge in flow. both need work though. my fairs in fellas. edged.. Voted: PEBO / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-04-12 21:29:02

great wordplay by my winner and hilarious bar Voted: PEBO / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-04-13 04:45:43

Pretty weak battle all around. Winner had sum jabs and humor for the W! South Cak stand up!!! Voted: PEBO / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-04-13 11:27:02

Great battle, this was close. Although I was feeling ones flow a bit more, the other had more relevancy to his set ups and punches despite the concepts being a bit played. Both had some broken/forced multis & wordplay, no hate, I get told this often as well... just something to work on. Try to make wordplay as obvious as possible (like in audio) to the point where expos arent necessary (although its still good to drop them). Still a solid text battle where both brought game. RESPECT 2 both as always. Voted: PEBO / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-04-13 13:18:49

^^ FV in. ^^ Forgot that :) Voted: PEBO / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-04-13 13:19:30

both had punchline i liked, battle was ok... FV gb, my winner took it from the start... nohate cool Voted: PEBO / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-04-13 14:11:06

This was an overall good battle. PEBOs feedback - Nice punchlines overall but some stuff was hard to understand with the format...But it was a good drop. @Barz - Different format than your usual but the punches were good (some were jabs) but the "Victim" line is what got it for me...It was the puzzle piece that pulled away from the jabs and gave a better push. FAIR VOTE NO HATE...Both do need work on some stuff...Both have done better (not so familiar with one guy) but the other has done better, but then again Barz does like 30000 battles per day. I don't know how he can think of shit, haha. Voted: PEBO / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-04-13 14:58:30

One's wordplay was forced in a few places, multi's lacked complexity, structure was basic, punches were relatively basic and in places forced, and overall lacked complex elements. I'd advise upping your multi count and coming up with fresher & less obvious concepts loser. the winner got this by a hair, his multi's really, really lacked & here. Also, that Christian Bale line was used by Thug killer & a famous rapper recently, which took away from it's hit. Voted: PEBO / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-04-13 20:28:44

Close battle.. I feel like ones punches were just a little better.. edge the battle with the delivery Voted: PEBO / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-04-13 20:39:35

Both of you could use a lot of work... One I think had funnier 1 liners, the other had decent one liners but came more complex. My vote goes to the person that did a little of everything Voted: PEBO / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-04-13 21:05:39

lol dickridin niggas these days Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-04-14 14:30:14