That MVP shit. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-07 22:42:10

EXPO..DORA THE EXPLORER, SWIPER NO SWIPING! lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-07 22:49:16

MahFuckin MVPs. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-07 23:52:03

One had me laughing out loud and that is usually all i need but my winner also had harder punches and a better use of multis and metaphors. GBFV holla holla Voted: Subreal / Phraell
Posted on: 2013-08-08 01:09:17

i felt one had more complexity, and better concepts that made their punches stronger, some filler that could be cut out, but the flows there, my loser just needs to tighten up their concepts they got some decent w/p but i feel they should try to incorporate either more relevant multies or better wording to connect their punches better, fairs in gb Voted: Subreal / Phraell
Posted on: 2013-08-08 01:13:07

sub started off with a broken multi, but other than that kept it tight throughout. there were parts that felt forced, 'whack feat diver'? ... doesnt really make sense seems like it was thrown in just to rhyme with back seat driver, which itself wasnt the strongest of punches. there were some nice ideas that were touched upon but i felt u cud have developed them further. nawkoutts verse was more complex and he has a good command of multis, had some unnessary filler which took the edge of the verse slightly. decent concepts and a pretty smooth read Voted: Subreal / Phraell
Posted on: 2013-08-08 10:31:56

aiiight, Sub, ur verse was pretty smooth except for the broken multi "presiding". just watch ur syllables. besides that ur multies were on point, however try to make it sound less force. in terms of punch wise i didn't feel it. you need to have a concept in each bars that will surprise the reader at the end of the bar with a flip in ur punch........... NAWKOUTT ARTIST, ok ur verse consists of bigger multies, seems like u focus on matching up those multies, and they are solid, however i like to see u balance ur verse up with concepts and minumise ur syllable dow to 4-6 syllables for a smoother read and less force. just an opinion but its ur call, highlight line for me would be the "throwing tips" line.. thought it could've been harder hitting though.... overall it's a good battle, one edge it in terms of attempts to throw punch... and vocabulary.... fair vote guys, no hate. Voted: Subreal / Phraell
Posted on: 2013-08-08 21:52:40

decent battle here.. 1's experience really pay'd off, it was clear from the start. my winner brought more hard hittin punches & structured his set ups more solid than his opponent. his opponent started off on the first path but while he was finishin his verse. he seemed to throw some played punches so he could just fill/waste up the remainin lines and be over wit the verse already. that really effected his chance of takin this battle. i def see potential tho, nice verse y'all.. fair's in Voted: Subreal / Phraell
Posted on: 2013-08-09 18:56:09