My wins line connected really well, both were good! Mine was structured better in my opinion and flowed better! But I enjoyed reading both! Good battle Fv Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-04 15:07:23

nice battle here, just going with the harder hitting punches here. one's verse also had a more clever approach which helped the punches hit harder. loser had some broken multis, advise em to work on that and on settin up punches the right way. my vote is in pals. Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-04 22:57:41

I felt ones approach was a little off with the opener being soft and not hittin hard then hos very next line he seemed like he was applauding his opponent on how his chick looked rather than dissin him, the winner didnt come w the best verse either but he did enough to catch the w, polish that wordplay up tho, the fairest from the king, 1 Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-05 07:45:42

One was much more original and edged it with decent setups. Sub, work on having multies that aren't choppy. It throws the reader off a bit. Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-05 12:17:17

fairs, no hate Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-05 19:53:26

nich, that whole subculture shit didn't work Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-06 12:15:37

Both were quite good...but one hit it better and had nicer concept imo Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-06 15:39:43

Zombie apocalypse LOL Baker Street FTW Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-06 16:23:53

Fv! Vb! Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-08-07 07:41:37