This one's an open. Go for it. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-29 18:37:30

EXPO on Slave morality - http://www.guardian. co.uk/commentisfree/ belief/2008/nov/03/n ietzsche-slave-moral ity-religion Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-29 18:48:43

Good Job You 2. God bless you and your families. =) Voted: Jam Jar /
Posted on: 2013-06-29 20:57:53

BODYBAG !!!! T[K0]... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-29 22:54:49

Ok, i see one's getting alil saucy..... ma winner here jus brought more to tha table. only knock on them is that their set-ups were repetitious... too many of tha puns were delivered in tha same format. but otherthan above par lil 8 from him. ma loser was simply tooooo wordy. had some decent vocab but tha puns were far apart and few. overall, this wasn that close imo. THV Voted: Jam Jar /
Posted on: 2013-06-30 02:04:13

Maybe we're looking at different battles here, but caked brought broken multies start to finish and 'Venn die a gram' makes no sense whatsoever. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-30 03:10:33

Grammar is my weed, and your's is a dodgy batch my friend. Even with that expo, Ven die a gram still make no sense. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-30 13:17:00

Ahem... yours* Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-30 13:17:49

Ven: Bars line was mehh, the tents.. at ground zero punch was pretty funny... This is a battle so the rest of your verse doens't really work, if you were trying to use the "slave mroality" to diss your opponent you didn't do a good job of it, and if you weren't then it doesn't belong in the battle anyways.. That whole part of the verse can be thrown away... Caked: Opener was mehh tbh, the concept against "bulls" is an expected one and even then the punch wouldn't have that great of a factor... I must ask what a "pair bulls" is, that makes no sense... the ac concept was okay.. venndiagram wordplay was mad forced. Only why it makes sense is "Dye a gram" then it's just stupid written that way. How do you die a gram, which wouldn't even be proper english anyways. Neither when ya'll see venn diagram is not proper either, should be when you all see "a venn diagram!! I'd just throw that line completely out.. closer wasn't much either. Winner gets my vote for just the consistant punch attempts because the other went completely off track IMO, he could argue which ever way he wants but he went off track... Either way both of you can do a much better job than these two verses... Voted: Jam Jar /
Posted on: 2013-06-30 14:30:59

got caked ahhhhhh h h h h hA h h Voted: Jam Jar /
Posted on: 2013-07-01 00:32:19

Good.battle one had stronger concepts...no hate salute both.... Send 8 and get crushed..yes thats a challenge Voted: Jam Jar /
Posted on: 2013-07-01 03:59:24

ACishhhh Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-07-01 11:36:55