In my youth i bodied rappers like GAT WARS WHILE YA TWIRLED! Talentless n curious maybe try the CATWALK TYPE'A WORLD! Ya rap is more ass then twerkin FAT WHORE KINDA GIRL! Eh bar, 4/10. A lot of broken multi's and a played punch, but not too bad. Would have been okay for a snipe. ya flow and RHYMIN SWIRLS mines tidal wave RIPPIN, u'l be RUBBIN LAMPS N WISHIN u never JUMPED INA MANS POSITION! Another 'eh' bar, 6/10. Once again broken multi's & no punchline. Pussy havin bitch return to the SPOT YA FIT IN with the POTS IN KITCHEN! id let flairs POP IN MY VISION be4 readin your SLOP OF A WRITTEN, & id rather knife my ears than COPPIN A LISTEN to ROT THATYA SPITTIN! join the KID ROCK DIVISION & take the OPTION OF QUITTIN Or i'l force your pen to stop JOTTEN YA FICTION by havin ya fingers CHOPPED OFF & HIDDEN! I loved this bar, 8/10. Nice multi's with no real punch but ever other aspect was on point, mostly you need to work on punchlines. But not bad. Voted: Killer Cole /
Posted on: 2013-06-28 06:27:19

I seen him on that pedophile show when the CAMERA WAS DETECTING this MAN OF SEXING you got choked and pucked, but personally how many hoes you fucked? Oh your crew ANSWERS THAT QUESTION!!(mybad) pretty bad bar, 3/10. Not one thing rhymed with another in this bar "CAMREA WAS DETECTIN'" is six syllables, "MAN OF SEXING" is 4, and "ANSWERS THAT QUESTION" is 5. Tryna follow in my foot steps, I gotta leave you DONE WRONG HOMES after I get this crowd WON AND OWNED, I'ma show you that "ya just a square under this see" another SPONG BOB CLONE..I can Okay bar, 4/10. At least something rhymed with that one, the "under this see" part didn't make much since. Woulda been better as "This square sweet as pineapple so when I put him under the sea" then the punch. fuck you up WITH DEEDS OF BEAMS but when you say you can fuck with me, you thinking BETWEEN THE SHEETS? You can DIE FROM A EAGLE when i clap from a Mack that's the SIZE OF MY EGO!! Idk what you were thinking with these two, the first one makes no sense at all, what does "DEEDS OF BEAMS" even mean? I know what you were trying to get at but it was poorly executed, as for the last part it didn't make much sense either tbh, I understand what you try and get it with your bars but please work on execution. Voted: Killer Cole /
Posted on: 2013-06-28 06:33:10

All in all I guess this was an okay battle, looks like one tried to snipe but got sniped in return to me. Both should work on wording & delivery, and KC please work on some punches. (PM if you need help, I'll happily do so) Voted: Killer Cole /
Posted on: 2013-06-28 06:34:44

both clever i liked the first one though had more fire. Voted: Killer Cole /
Posted on: 2013-06-28 11:35:44

Just like what crysis said.I won't do a breakdown for this one tho. Voted: Killer Cole /
Posted on: 2013-06-28 12:40:48

ok battle, fv Voted: Killer Cole /
Posted on: 2013-06-29 16:26:45

Both were sorta broken at places but one excelled in his wording and ended it strongly.. fv is in. Voted: Killer Cole /
Posted on: 2013-06-29 20:51:38