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Posted on: 2013-04-19 04:10:56

Ight ma dudes lets get to this break down ... Back hands.. Bar1...soft opener for me multis very basic and a lot of filler in the bar I get the punch but should of maybe flipped the concept more 6/10 ... Bar2 ... Hmmm yeh wasn't feeling this cee lo punch just wasn't hitting fam flow was off and wasn't working for me 5/10 ... Bar3 ... Hmmm again really not hitting fam a lot of filler again and the punch just wasn't working ... Ok I've noticed you don't go with the generic bar set up you have ya own style your trying to put punches in all the time shit just ain't working for me man your flow go Eta tossed round back and forth and it of sets your main metaphors try going back to a basic bar set up structure and all the abbreviations domt help for reading and catching ya flow ya finisher I saw that line back in 07 Lexus line is mad played ... Over all imma give you 6/10 you better than this dukie .... Now Roww ... Jesus that was a long opener man punch only hit in for me where you said about row and hand shit ... Again to stretched out but the flow was there the multis where ight like the charades punch creative felt the police wordplay was forced ... Over all shit was ight 7/10 .... Word of advice to both from me get ya structures set up more and stop stretching ya bars to much it feels at times I'm reading to much before I get ya punch your both good enough to do this .... Anyway shit was a nice lil read but both can do better ... FV VBF .:X:. Voted: BvckHvndz /
Posted on: 2013-04-20 16:39:07

Row, Dope Shit... Wordplay Was Very Good, Slightly Forced.. But Not Really... It Works Enough with The Concepts Given... Nicely Worded... Best Line Was Handz Make Row Motion was prolly the best line the first read through... Jimmy Backhands... My Dude!!! you got ya shit together nice short setups work for you much better than over complex setups.. and you're ideas are nice here, couple old ones that are flipped... make sure to revise your verses before posting to correct those little mistakes like mispelled words so it doesn't take away from the readability.. overall dope battle... keep elevating famly, MONSTARZ! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-20 20:01:00

Alrightttt I had to re read a couple times because this battle was really close tbh. My winner just edged this battle w/ slightly fresher concepts which lead to some harder hitting punches. The other had a higher punch count but most of em were jabs or slightly played. Fairs in though my winner took this w/ freshness Voted: BvckHvndz /
Posted on: 2013-04-21 17:03:56

FV an damn. Voted: BvckHvndz /
Posted on: 2013-04-22 09:38:47