Alien Piss. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-04 22:27:40

DC LB Voted: Jason / Nigga I Rap Tight
Posted on: 2013-04-04 22:30:50

Good Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-04 22:51:10

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Posted on: 2013-04-05 00:53:42

Low vote removed & vote dropped. Voted: Jason / Nigga I Rap Tight
Posted on: 2013-04-05 03:20:59

JRG ok first of all you might want to cap your punches and rhymes, it helps the voters capture your flow. A vital skill that you need to work on is the structure of your bars and setups. Your drop barely had any punches and you need to pick up a Multie game. You have potential w/concepts but they fell victim because of your structure and setups. Your vocab could use a tweak and wordplay could easily be applied if you plan to continue battling. Bigger syllable counts are also a need factor in your elevation to being a better MC. Close thing that was good was a ok flow. TIGHT your opener repeated the word "work" so it took away from your opener so be careful there. Seen better but the structure of your bars are everywhere, your Multies and syllable counts were all almost on point but i saw wayyyyyyy too much filler here . Also be careful with your concepts and structure it seems to chip at your flow, near the closer you almost went into cypher mode too so be careful even if it is a snipe or keystyle. Closer was ok but def not a strong way to finish, your punches were not good in this one either. Not a great battle at all guys. The winner just won it for me w/the better rhyme scheme. Low 3 Low 4. Fv In. Give'm The Cold Shoulder Voted: Jason / Nigga I Rap Tight
Posted on: 2013-04-06 01:19:34

lol cool Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-07 01:57:53