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Posted on: 2013-04-02 10:19:58

Trill came w/ a light open drop but lucky a lightweight attempted o snipe him. Multies were ok, Punches were average, flow was there and vocab was ok. Seen much much better. Low 6. Major had a good flow from beginning to end and had some nice metaphors, the complexity wasnt there taking away from some of your bars. Flow was on point but multie game and structure needs work. Low 5. Unlucky attempt. Fv In - Go Hard or Go Home Voted: ItzNDaSawce / Rsanist
Posted on: 2013-04-02 11:23:55

Major just didn't seem to put the effort in on this battle. I can see why though. Voted: ItzNDaSawce / Rsanist
Posted on: 2013-04-02 15:47:15

east giigy styff Voted: ItzNDaSawce / Rsanist
Posted on: 2013-04-04 00:26:40

one came light but still got tha jub done, keep elevating tho. Tha Hood Vote. Voted: ItzNDaSawce / Rsanist
Posted on: 2013-04-05 08:57:02

Pretty one sided even though the winner went pretty light he did enough damage. Trill- The main problem I felt I your verse was formatting. Because you used in-rhyming your lines tended to drag on but because you didn't make an emphasis on your in rhyming besides the quotes it made it somewhat hard for me to follow. I would advise using hyphens instead of quotes for in rhyming to make it more noticeable and to make your flow seem less choppy and more natural. You had mostly jabs but it did what it needed to do. Major- you need to up your syllabics and concepts. Your verse was kind of all over the place. Also don't put a slash after every line. Overall my winner showed more conceptuality and better structure fairs in. Voted: ItzNDaSawce / Rsanist
Posted on: 2013-04-05 10:19:36

got worked. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-05 12:15:38