Radec: not bad bars here. Bars were stretched out though, could do with fixing/tightening the structure up to generate a smoother flow from bar to bar. Concepts were nice...I enjoyed the breakfast one the most. Prince S-Tana: Nice opening bar. The Rad-ah-call wordplay was a good idea, but didn't work out right, so there for killed the entire opening bar. Fix your vocab/wording to as it kills the readability of your bars. Overall: this was an aiight battle from both. Feel one was more complex/attempted a more complex approach than the other. Fairs in, Q's out. Posted on: 2013-03-11 11:01:47

RELLZ vote removed, Obvious reason. Posted on: 2013-03-11 15:41:40

Goon.Zoo .. lets get it! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-08 14:30:04

not voting..yal sparing for positions er sumthin..yal should save the beef for the streets..i turned down MFs invite to the crew..been solo to long..but nice drops yall.PEEPSbeen wack on the votes..since educated voters normally VETS, and they self centered and don't wanna help one improve(BEEF site) understood, but still..wut the challenge in keepin pupils ignorant..its not challenging for the teacher..hmmm Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-08 15:49:41

GOoN.ZOo! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-08 18:18:18

ones on another level tho... keep it up Goonz. if either of u want a detailed expo....Holla. Tha Hoodz Vote. Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-08 18:27:34

fv Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-08 19:23:03

this was a very educated battle, I loved how each punch landed nice...The winner really only won from Getting one more punchline in and if y'all want to read a full expo give me a pm and i'll gladly explain this is a Fair Vote...Respect It Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-08 21:17:58

i like both talents but one level of wordplay stood out more. honest vote Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-08 21:52:04

fv Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-08 23:26:22

Jesus christ Radec could have one the tourney with that verse. punch after punch after punch, i'd be surprised if he doesn't catch time for domestic abuse. Good fucking battle. Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-09 01:11:52

Felt tanas punches more like it was more directed better or somethin.. niice battle famo's noh8 fairs in... peace Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-09 10:56:39

Good battle. Can y'all vote on mine?http://www.lets beef.com/battle_deta ils.php?section=tb&i d=456480 Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-09 19:02:06

Good Battle. My fairs in Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-09 19:06:12

fv Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-09 19:43:06

Rad, you got a nice multie game and solid flow. You just need to work on developing your concepts with better setups and you could be a problem. Not a bad drop at all. Your improving pretty well. Prince, you didn't do too bad. Some of your wording could have been better but it wasn't too bad. Your concepts were hit and miss, though. The consistency wasn't up where it should be... Not a bad battle. One got it though. Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-09 22:55:41

fv.. lol Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-10 06:27:51

i didnt really see anythin too memorable on either side. Rad, your got the multi game on lock, but your concepts were pretty weak or non existent. you need to work on setting up ur punches better with a relevant build up and throwing some originatlity in there. Tana - i thought u had some wording issues, it wasnt the easiest drop to read. you made more of an effort with the concepts but they didnt always land. im leaning 1 way slightly but i think both can come harder than this Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-10 18:37:07

Vb Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-10 18:48:13

Radec- Considering that this is a 16, you don't have much room to be talking about yourself. The verse would have played alot better had you consistently kept punching. Even still, the punches you had were very played and not hardhitting. (She's in hot water like hydrotherapy, I wouldn't say that concept is played but you could've set that up alot better to be more effective) Another thing to remember is that the most important lines of a battle are the openers and the closers and both of those in your verse were lacking, plus you contradicted yourself. Lastly, based on not only this battle but your tourney battle, you seem to rely pretty heavily on a consistent multi scheme which is valuable in averse but you also need to incorporate hardhitting punches to to get that 'oomph' Tana- Pretty good verse, you matched and exceeded Radec in multies. You had some decent jabs here and there but the bigges flaw I saw here was your hit and miss wordplay. You had decent flips but for example that 'rad ah call/radical' Radical doesn't really fit in there as wordplay. Your wording was a little off at times as well, wording that could've made your punches alot farther reaching. Not bad here. Overall decent battle. My winner is edgin it with a more structered and direct verse. Fair's in. Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-10 20:23:06

I got one edging this with slightly stronger execution.. I felt neither were all that consistent with strong punches and neither really had too good of concepts but both had a decent flow and multies... I felt my choice's set-ups could have been more relevant to their punches while their opponent could have worded their set-ups better.. Overall close battle.. Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-11 02:05:31

Radec the hydrotherapy line was fresh to me. Thought the go off line was nice haha funny shit - it hit cuz of ya wording. Some spots the rhymes went on for a little too long before we got to a punch but u already know that so i digress. Nice read. As for Tana, more complex in places but the wordplay has got to work both ways otherwise it won't get props from me. U know this u've been on shortbar sites so i expected better as far as that goes. An example is the Rah Digga wordplay. Ur saying Ra Dig a a deeper ditch. The two a's hurt the line cuz it doesnt technically make sense u feel? Same with 'Radical the feds'. In all I think aesthetically it looks like one has the better verse and looks more complex but that isn't the case when it's broke down. The more cohesive and better executed verse won here for me. Fairs in Voted: Shezso Eu /
Posted on: 2013-03-11 12:19:30

i chose any body just wanted a credit Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-11 13:35:43

&& ban him so he won't do that in other battles. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-11 13:56:40

**GOoN.ZOo** Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-11 14:50:36

good battle fam. hella close! GOoN.ZOo Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-11 17:58:31