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Posted on: 2012-10-15 12:56:37

both came hard but.............. Voted: Ray BaRz™ / AG_JR
Posted on: 2012-10-15 15:39:40

fv Voted: Ray BaRz™ / AG_JR
Posted on: 2012-10-15 16:22:18

hmm... i didnt really see anything above average from either. the winner had the better verse in terms of construction of bars and ideas, but even on these levels ive seen better from him. punches pretty poor from both. the loser had a lot of filler and nothing of any strength. Voted: Ray BaRz™ / AG_JR
Posted on: 2012-10-16 10:46:22

My choice had the better flow and delivery but it seems as his rhymes were all over the place. Tighten it up a bit and work on adding some inner rhymes to ya setups. The other needs to work on his rhyming as a whole...didn't see much wordplay or creative setups. FVC Approved. Voted: Ray BaRz™ / AG_JR
Posted on: 2012-10-16 11:06:11

Ray, you started off at a certain level, but I felt you kinda drifted toward the end. AR, you used some pretty played metaphors like gun clap/applaud and you had some lines that were pretty cypherish. Got my winner. Voted: Ray BaRz™ / AG_JR
Posted on: 2012-10-16 11:18:56

fv Voted: Ray BaRz™ / AG_JR
Posted on: 2012-10-16 19:37:53

Ray Voted: Ray BaRz™ / AG_JR
Posted on: 2012-10-16 19:56:53

D Voted: Ray BaRz™ / AG_JR
Posted on: 2012-10-17 00:27:59

My choice was a little better in some aspects but he needs to start executing his set-ups with more relevance... His opponent has the right ideas but needs to find some fresher concepts and work on some of the basics such as multies and consistency... Also a little complexity from both wouldnt hurt either... Voted: Ray BaRz™ / AG_JR
Posted on: 2012-10-17 10:36:51

aight RAY- you improvin alot wit your schemes and flow, first few punches were ok, although the relation between the pun to concept or flip, felt forced or weak at times.. ex. would be the dick in public, etc. relation to cocky.. very basic relations.. try to think outside the box.. the last bar was a bit sloppy multi wise.. AG- first couple bars im diggin the imagry metas wit the yawning .. rest of the puns were a bit played tho, wit the clap=applause, asyou progressed thru the verse, you kinda fell off wit basic statementish disses... my winner here a bit more consistent wit the punches.. fairs Voted: Ray BaRz™ / AG_JR
Posted on: 2012-10-18 02:05:32