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Length: 64 Lines

Teek (100%) WINNER

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Teek

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Topical Battle: Teek vs. ADONiS
Topic: open Title: "Twists of Fate" (50 lines)
Pic Link: http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z81/teekidoz/hand_reaching_out_from_water_wall-t2.jpg

October blasts a feathered coat, turns into hellish match,
From vodka on the tethered boat , she hadn't felt it's wrath,
Her gate was most amusing, confusing step with time,
And feet tripped on a loose string, that sent her into flight,
But like that ancient adage, all that rises, also sinks,
She mimiced laden baggage, handrails busting, into brink,
Inhebriated, music trance, drown out her choking cries,
Then 20 Jell-O blues, ripped cramps, and left her groping sides,
Dimwit to epiphany, "Life's fucked!" , like porno mags,
For breathing, to weak Stephanie, was choked off, full of gags,
Embracing sweet serenity, Steph then, released the now,
And hoped to sleep on Peonies, in naps beneath the clouds,
The warm embrace, most comforting, though unfamiliar lands,
became torrent quake, lungs burning, pressed by disheviled hands,
Her emptied lungs and stomach, retold her savior tales,
That temptress, much to look at, had truly majored hell,
With Hobo ingenuity, the fire had been born,
"Though please excuse the nudity", he entwined her, just for warmth,
Morning crashed reality, erasing dreamful bliss,
"Who are these wrinkled hands on me?, and what's that evil stink?"
Fearful of the obvious, she fought to open eyes,
and terror struck that bodies must, have joined upon the night,
Elbows flew, at once he knew, that she had woken up,
For quick abused, his hit flesh grew, avoiding broken nuts,
"Calm yourself, now Darlin", was drowned by "WHAT THE FUCKs?!?"
As calloused tools unzipped cacoon, to unmask scarred and rough,
And almost non-chalauntly, he swaggered without care,
To put his clothes upon him, raunchy, and to stack her clothes, to wear,
He calmed her with insistance, she wasn't of his type,
Though torn by indecision, she began to trust these lies,
And then the situation, reared it's ugly head,
The boat spot, desolated, along with all her friends,
Abandoned on a doorstep, he cradled her to breast,
This comfort of a poor schlep, gently stated his intents,
He fed her, from dutch oven, and let her wash the grime,
His tenderness and loving, the first she saw in guys,
She came to learn of history, that Bob had been the man,
Executive to empires, top stocks, investment plans,
But life defers economy, and family crumbles quick,
The wife left to her family, and Bob, he tumbled sick,
No meds without insurance, no rent's a quick evict,
The streets take all endurance, when no one gives a shit,
Though hardened tough, She saw the man, indebted her life to,
So soft on rough, her paw on hand, she mentioned her nights dues,
Shrugged off as if nothing, he simply said 'we're quits',
for asking's unbecoming, avoiding last night's bliss,
So silence stayed unbroken, until a "Come with me.",
and nothing else was spoken, as she kissed upon his cheek,
And regally, she led his hand, he, now become her tow,
Her mind a race, with latest plans, with sun upon her soul,








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Black Book

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Topical Battle: Teek vs. ADONiS
Topic: open Title: "Pull It Out"
Pic Link: http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z81/teekidoz/hand_reaching_out_from_water_wall-t2.jpg




Envious of Dracula, I fear what a mirror implicates,
Yet I am depressed about what this fear indicates.
It is the pain & anger that my reflection instigates.
What is obviously visible, obviously incriminates.
They say to start with the man in the mirror.
But I want to kill the man in the mirror & cannot make this any clearer.
My blood boils more & more as the mirror gets nearer.
Finally, I can take it no more & go off the deep end.
Throwing fists towards the mirror, I seek a satisfying achievement.
But to my surprise, my fists don't shatter the mirror, instead they reach in.
They touch my reflection; I grab it blinded with anger.
Ready to rid of what had been my tiring anchor.
As I pull it out of the mirror more & more,
Its scar covered wrists bleed all over the floor.
The marks of where the many needles had been injected appear.
And it attempts to fight back, but I must persevere.
Out comes its body, covered in rags that are heavily tattered.
Out comes its head, with so many cuts, it looks like its skull was shattered.
In its eyes it looks like it knows it never mattered.
Out comes the rest of the body, it looks so battered.
How did I hate this sight? It is so pathetic.
I am looking upon a man who is in desperate need of a medic.
It was not a monster that created my pain.
I was a monster that created its pain.
And the fact that I couldn't comprehend this is driving me insane.
So I leave my battered form on the floor, and I do something drastic.
I climb on the counter, look into the mirror, and step on past it.
Stepping into the mirror, it seems like magic.
But I have come up with a clever plan.
Now the monster I've created can look into its reflection & see a better man!
 























Good luck. 
D.O.P.E.

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Battle started: October 3^rd 2012 at 13:57
Challenger joined: October 6^th 2012 at 11:12

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2012-10-06 11:12:39).

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Teek <TKe> Staff Hall of Famer	I had some things come up I had to deal with, but wanted to get this out. I would have liked to give it more, but I'll get back at you for a rematch soon enough. Good luck Bro. Appreciate the opportunity to drop w you. Comment Only Posted on: 2012-10-03 14:10:39
J u s T C <Nood>	Yo. You really need to make the thread in the topical lounge when you make these so I know to promote them. That's how Addonis Vs Enfinite got the majority of there votes. But yeah. I'll get some votes in and drop my own when I can. Comment Only Posted on: 2012-10-07 21:18:35
Apollyon <AC's>	This was definitely a dope topical battle.. I cant really say shit without swaying so i wont.. Voted: Teek / Black Book Posted on: 2012-10-08 02:50:22
Boss-MC <STC> Exclusive Member	adonis yours should have been longer! it was real nice but bits could have been added to see more clearly what you were getting at, teek i that was real nice could picture most of it. this is only the 2nd topical ive read but i definitely enjoyed it. good work both Voted: Teek / Black Book Posted on: 2012-10-08 11:05:51
Erupt da Monsta <LoD> 2x Hall of Famer Grand Champion Premier League Champion Topical Champion Tag Team Champion LBA Champion	fv, ones gave me a better picture, better imagery. storyline was better, decent battle fellas, fv is in Voted: Teek / Black Book Posted on: 2012-10-08 12:50:49
NOBLE <FITTEST> Hall Of Famer	I liked the spin you both put on this. I did feel one wrote a more complete story however. Fairness. Voted: Teek / Black Book Posted on: 2012-10-09 02:30:37


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