good shit merkz Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-23 21:32:05

FA: A 'roses groupy' is someone who followed a band about called the Stone Roses and were known to have a lotttt of sex with them, and Gremlin is someone who dick rides his crew leader Snoopy, and aboriginals basically chase down there meals because they're like cavemen and when they was sent to Australia they were stranded on an island until they became civilized. Everything else is self explanatory Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-23 21:33:31

ahaha good one!! Voted: chavito / NoT
Posted on: 2012-08-23 22:12:30

Dirty vote that Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-23 22:13:11

Nice drop Merk I like that Syllable line. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-23 22:56:45

Gremlin don't hate vote.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-23 22:57:22

One was jus on another level, Battle wise that is Tha Hoodz Vote Voted: chavito / NoT
Posted on: 2012-08-24 06:28:51

One got the flow and was more on point. The other was basic and wasn't saying much throughout the battle. Wordplay is forced so the one who used it losses some points in my book Voted: chavito / NoT
Posted on: 2012-08-24 08:38:31

okay Voted: chavito / NoT
Posted on: 2012-08-24 08:54:41

One. Needs to cap . Merk what happened w/ that walk of shame bit .. Using same words will cost u battles Voted: chavito / NoT
Posted on: 2012-08-24 10:40:54

fv Voted: chavito / NoT
Posted on: 2012-08-25 08:01:23

chav- felt , you came off very basic scheme wise, if possible try to integrate a bit more complex endrhyme multis, its not mandatory but helps make your verse read more entertaining, also, i liked the fact you included some metas, ex, the bone thugs/ skeletons relation, but still they were very basic, i wouldve said , squad 'in 2 skeletons' like SAIAMESE BURIALS... be clever and creative in your metas fam.. merk- all i got outta your verse was multi ussage, and even then the complexity wasnt consistent, what you lacked was similes and metas, try to integrate that in each bar, makes for a more entertaining read.. fairs in fellas..... Voted: chavito / NoT
Posted on: 2012-08-26 06:01:59

Aight guys appreciate the feedback but there's just a couple lines that include things that you sayin' I din't include, 'Gremlins circling his athlete's box, it's loopy' That's talking about how Gremlin dick rides him but not only that I' m saying he's circling around a square rather than, well, squaring round a square? So I'm sayin' it's 'loopy' because I'm sayin' it crazy AND it's going round in loops, you feel me? That's on a few levels you mentioned, also the line about aboriginals saying like I'd let him run for my bait but I've already sniped him, so he's stranded cause I got him on lockdown, not only that but he's crippled so he can't move, and not only that but he's aboriginal so he's stranded on an island. There's a few more but I don't wanna have to explain my whole verse, it's cool if they flew over ya head, no long ting bro Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-26 10:16:45

Fv Vbf gb nh. Drop a Fair on my battle With TicxTac!~ -Breezzyy- Vet Vote. Voted: chavito / NoT
Posted on: 2012-08-26 20:29:09

That's fucking dirty I woulda took this if it woeren't for Gremlins hate vote, no hate to Chavito though good battle, just that demifag Gremlin Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-26 23:31:58