cuz this time I'll be PEDO....BEAR!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-11 20:33:32

Zimmerman line was not meant to be racist Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-11 20:35:44

I wouldnt say the best, but some lines where okay and others a litle basic but all an all one had a better word play which nicked it for me Voted: Just-Kevin / buc without the k
Posted on: 2012-08-11 21:43:14

VF .. Vote back Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-11 22:04:46

dont fucking use fv vote back!!!Leave an expo or GTFO!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-11 22:06:24

not a bad lil spar here but i think there was quite a clear winner. the loser, your verse was very basic overall with no stand out punches and a lot of filler, in a 8 line battle anything that isnt a set up or a punch is a waste, so keep that in mind. at times i could glimpses of ideas comin thru but u need to work on developing those ideas to pull out something unique. it wasnt a bad effort, and practice makes perfect, so keep at it. the winner, ive read better from you 2bh. this site is quite big on cappin multis and punches, just makes them stand out better and the impact is bigger. ur flow was nice, a few lines were a bit meh, i could see the concepts you tried to pull out but i think ur wording let u down a little bit. decent effort tho, keep it up both, potential in both Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-12 08:53:37

thnx for the expo Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-12 10:06:10

OKAY! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-12 12:22:46

ok, JUST- i was feelin the agression in your bars, which was nice, but on a technical standpoint your verse was really basic.. endrhymes that you cappd were really basic, you need to maintain a consistent higher syllable count rhyme than one or two.. next your disses are fairly weak as well, no real creativity, i like that you tried to integrate metas wit the off the ledge runnin from feds, but it still comes off sounding basic.. your end lines should contain a simile, thats damaging to your opponent... BUC - what can i say, another nice verse, good schemes, multis were on point, concepts for the most part were decent.. i think you should tho capp your multis tho, its standard practice here, and you get better looks when your multis are emphasized from a 'visual' standpoint... good ish.. winner just came off more polished imo Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-12 15:55:49

ty Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-12 16:01:35

POLICYMAKERS! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-13 13:14:00

Cuz battlin rev.... Buc bit here as well. Auto win kevin.. Pm mods Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-10-19 18:16:54

http://www.letsbeef. net/battle_details.p hp?section=tb&id=127 737 Buc bit, autowin Kev. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-10-21 14:12:48