both came with an arsenal of punches and multies in every bar. One had a more polished flow with more syllables and relevance in his multies and build-ups while the other's flow fell off in a couple spots and had more basic syllables and some mutlies i felt were fillers. I'm leaning one way due to slightly harder punches and wordplays with more advanced multies. Peace Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-13 22:46:08

Decent punches, nameplays, and overall better verse got this. I think one had a lot of broken multies which messed the flow up, whereas the othet seemed to stay pretty much consistent in terms of his rhyme scheme.. High 7's low 8's, good battle, vote back. Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-13 22:51:30

ill came w better concepts and punches ive seen of the concepts pheonix used good shit tho pheonix is improvng ez Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-14 01:43:44

great wrrrr Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-14 02:02:43

Full Breakdown- PHEONIX- "I'll have my 'words armed and deadly' like a EROSIVE ARTICAL I'm 'sick writer' so my 'verse virulent' like a CORROSIVE ARTICLE so I'll 'rip your lines apart' like a EXPLOSIVE PARTICLE!" .....Wha ts the relation between Words Being Armed and an Erosive Artical?Spelling mistakes too lol.No punch thrown nor any diss being executed well.It was more off a flexxed bar.Concept was there but not used properly.Multiees were broken again.Corrosive and Erosive aint a multie.Here is the further breakdown..CURR-OHH- SIVE and EER-OHH-SIVE.Now see,the Ohh and Sive rhyme but nor Curr and EER.So it aint a multie.If all the syllables rhyme,then it could be called as a multie.But in this case,this aint a proper multie. "No one can be on your 'low level' even if they STRUCK A TAPPET your 'lines are terrible' you SUCK IT WHACK SHIT even your 'rhymes are pg rated' like F**K YOU FA**IT" ......What the hell is the connection between being on low level and being struck by a Tappet?Do you know what a Tappet is?Its a lever that is moved in order to tap something else.So how is it related to the "low level"?No connection there and hence it falls off.How can he SUCK a WHACK SHIT?The last line was good tho.I liked the pg concept. "You about to get 'eliminated' cause this MISSION SHAKEOUT and I'm 'taking you back to the cell' like a STIFFEN STAKEOUT so I'll have you 'losing bars' like a PRISON BREAKOUT!" ......Ok no hate but to be very honest,this bar sucked.There is no such thing as Stiffen Stakeout.The concept of "bars" relating to "prisons" is played out dude and you did the same thing here.So nothing new.Try bringing fresher concepts and metas while battling. Overall this verse was similar to the other verses of yours.The syllables didnt match.Broken multies.So you need to work hard and step your game up if you are battling a vet. ILL PHENOM- "You think this WHORE PULLIN DA TOMMY BACK?? Never, But my SWORDS WILLIN TO BODY BAG and leave him "Up For the Death" Like a MORGUE FULLA INSOMNIACS!!" ..... ..Now this was a sick bar.Dope multies but didnt dig the concept of tommy. The Up for death meta was crack fam.Certainly punched hard.Dope bar. "Got em TORN WITH LIMBS RIPPIN to put em "under the weather' and STORM THE BITCH IN IT!! Cause what he FORM IS SHIT VISIONS and we see that "Phe No Type" To be BORN WITH SICK WRITTENS!" ......Th e weather pun was okayish.Sick wordplay tho.Liked the way you played with his name lol.Last line kinda fell off cuz of filler imo. " One PUMP RIP THRU YA CASTLE beating this "Square so many times" you'd think I DUMPED CHIPS INTO SCRABBLE... But nah I'll let COME GRIPPIN THE SADDLE cause "Nix On The Plank With No Support" guess that's why he "JUMPED SHIP" IN DA BATTLE! " .....Ok multies were there. Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-14 10:02:16

Continuation cuz some of it didnt come- Ok multies were there.Dope concepts especially the Scrabble one.Again a nice nameplay and actually connected well too. Overall this was a good battle.Fairs in.No hate Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-14 10:05:08

Welcome back yo haha. I forgot about this battle lol. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-07-14 11:00:50

One took this with better multis, punches and nameplay. Fairs in Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-14 13:28:23

mediocre punches by one and i thought the multies were a little forced as well.... the other guy's verse was fluid .....solid multies with hard hitting punchlines to follow ...was a really interesting read..first battle im voting on in ages....good one guys Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-14 13:35:06

The winner imo out did his opponent here, with a more aggressive drop. If u need a full expo I will post 1 it just ask. The loser's opener seemed repetitive how ever I liked his 4th line gb over all. Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-14 16:02:17

PheoNix, you're definitely showing improvement. Phenom, that was a solid verse. I felt one was a lot more polished in this battle an his punches hit harder. Fairness. Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-14 17:38:50

Good SHhit Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-14 18:22:43

fairs in. one was simply smoother w/better punches n concepts Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-14 18:40:26

fv Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-14 22:50:04

pretty even but the name plays got my vote Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-15 16:46:11

Good battle!!! Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-15 18:32:36

fv no hate Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-15 21:37:28

fv Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-16 14:41:33

ill came wit a little bit more... Voted: Phoenix / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2012-07-16 20:03:22