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Text Ranked Battle
Length: 16 Lines

jbird33069 (11%)

Basic Member

Ranked #-- This Season

Reppin: New Philadelphia, Ohio, United States

STEELO (89%) WINNER

THE SHOOTER

Ranked #-- This Season

Crew: Dead Poets Society

Reppin: Korea, North

jbird33069

Never had a problem with the money mane, you can always see me workin
In the kitchen on the stove, run up on me you goina see me merkin
You see the glock, you see the nine.always keepem by my side
In case a bitch try to slide. he mess with me he goina die.
This is jbird on the track, and the east side got my back
I got my brother dlloyd pushin weight outside tha trap
So if you try to get it twisted we goina take you off the map
Click clack, its a rap. You kno jbird makin racks
Im on the block all hours of the clock, its a strugle
gotta do what i gotta do, just so i can hustle
and you kno im gettin paid, just by lookin at the bundle
liftin pounds of the perp, you can say i got some muscle
snortin lines of tht coke, smokin blunts of tht dro
do you gota so codeine, well i gotta cup full
and im leanin all day, always keep my wallet full
my baby mama say she pregnant...well tht wonderfull

STEELO

Talkin Sick? Stop It Bitch. Supress that 'Cough In' or get LAYED IN ONE w/more 'Lazers on Shoulders in Pads' than an EIGHTY'S CLUB!! This FRICKIN GERM 'Positive he number one?' I'll play the 'Negative One' ..No INTERGER. He come to the table, watch me WHIP HIS NERVES and 'Send a Body Back' like a ForENSIC NURSE. I said 'Do Somethin' he tryina BEND THE VERBS. You'll 'Never See me Off the Top' like a NINJA PERM. Concepts SIMPLISTIC, you won't WIN DIP STICK. You work at a Bank, but still can't get a CHICK EN'TREN IN-TRE-STED? I been caged behind MEDIOCRITY. You ComPETING? NOT WITH ME.. or my brother RhetoriK STEELY COCK THEM THREES and 'Rhe-Formulate ya Philosophy' like WE BE SOCRATES!! You shouldn't have battle in the first, but don't worry, you're GETTIN SECOND PLACE! lol.. Outcha body I'll slap Cabon, ite? and leave your soul ETCHED IN SPACE! WEAPONS SPRAYED atcha WRETCHED FACE when I 'Pull Auttys' your body is 'STRETCHED IN PLACE!' I got PRESSURE COOKER BARS and I BOX BETTER!! TEST THE HOOK AND STARS'll dance withcha, you can't trot with this ..maybe you 'FOX' BETTA. This a FIRING STORM BROSKII, the 'Sell Outs' that LIKE AND ENDORSE your shit catchin BUYERS REMORSE ONLY! You AWFUL DUN, I'm Viagra ..Don't bitch to me about performance til ya 'STOCK' IS UP!!LOL

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Battle started: June 11^th 2012 at 15:37
Challenger joined: June 11^th 2012 at 16:10

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2012-06-11 16:10:26).

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STEELO <DPS> THE SHOOTER	Expo: ....:high: Comment Only Posted on: 2012-06-11 16:11:03
~SHINIGAMI~ <MvH>	one needs to advance his multies, punches, and also fill up. other took this pretty easy with better barz...and overall verse. no hate, fair vote is in. GUD SHYT WINNER! Voted: jbird33069 / STEELO Posted on: 2012-06-11 16:27:35
Snoopy316 <GodOfLyric>	Better luck next time Voted: jbird33069 / STEELO Posted on: 2012-06-11 16:59:54
Nachoo	easy fv Voted: jbird33069 / STEELO Posted on: 2012-06-11 17:16:20
J-Bear <l666I> Basic Member	No h8 fv gb Voted: jbird33069 / STEELO Posted on: 2012-06-11 17:18:13
MaCc Da G0D <APECS>	-Easy. Fairs Still Dropped. Voted: jbird33069 / STEELO Posted on: 2012-06-12 01:02:32
Metaphorsis Basic Member	No hate fv Voted: jbird33069 / STEELO Posted on: 2012-06-12 03:37:42
Ill Phenom	Bird: biggest problem here is concepts and creativity. Your verse was very very simplistic. You weren't always throwing punches throughout your lines either. But definitely work on using some better concepts towards your opponent and being creative with a set up/build up then punch... And the lines in there where you were talking about yourself or what you have, def just garbage those because they are useless in a battle. Have to just stay on the attack.... STEELO: consistant throughout this whole verse, I liked the opener and the "socrates" lines... I liked the send the body back line. Last couple of bars I didn't feel so much on the punchend compared to the rest of your verse... Vote is in. Voted: jbird33069 / STEELO Posted on: 2012-06-12 10:17:20
♕♡-B€††Ÿ~RÛGÈ®-♥♛ <TRDZ> Basic Member	one had a good concept but sounded more like Cypher material and the other just all around came stronger with battle material. FV dropped No Hate Voted: jbird33069 / STEELO Posted on: 2012-06-12 11:52:12
STEELO <DPS> THE SHOOTER	Yes, Embrace something greater than yourself :high: Comment Only Posted on: 2012-06-12 11:53:01
22 Zaicwon <....>	The winner fell off towards the end but I felt he had the better verse overall. No hate. Voted: jbird33069 / STEELO Posted on: 2012-06-12 14:12:13
Phoenix	Fair vote is in. Voted: jbird33069 / STEELO Posted on: 2012-06-12 16:03:22
DaNnY-NaPaLm Basic Member	fair vote Voted: jbird33069 / STEELO Posted on: 2012-06-12 18:28:01
Babylon	Very good battle i loved STEELO™'s Verse soley due to the multi rhyme schemes he had in almost EVERY line very impressive. good battle guys J you did good with your Basic yet impacting verse. Voted: jbird33069 / STEELO Posted on: 2012-06-13 17:39:26
Veto Basic Member	Fv. Voted: jbird33069 / STEELO Posted on: 2012-06-13 19:59:52
SKILLZZ Basic Member	tyt Voted: jbird33069 / STEELO Posted on: 2012-06-14 09:16:48


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