expo: Eminem had a song called Quitter, where he dissed the fuck outta Whitey Ford aka Everlast. Dumbfoundead is a sick rap battler, Tantrum is one of the people he beat. NAS and JAY-Z had major beef before doing some collabs. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-01 15:01:16

Snipe lol. Your lines in that weren't even hard. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-01 15:05:50

I know you can write, but if I was judging I woulda given you like a 6 for that. It was poorly written and didn't punch much. I'll send you a 16 later today, I ain't hatin on you, just sayin what you wrote here was weak. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-01 15:15:12

he didnt go hard but did better than you firehead Voted: FireHead /
Posted on: 2012-06-01 15:47:22

High 7's For The Winner. His Verse Was Almost Too Deep to be Broken down and Formulated. But shows Great Creativity and Delivery. Nothing Taken From Either Mc. Definatly a Good Read. But 1-2 Syllable Rhyme Schemes Are Forbidden On LB. Fairs are in. CAN I GET SUM FAIRS BACC? thanks! Voted: FireHead /
Posted on: 2012-06-01 19:59:38

Firehead: Opener line nothing but broken multi's.. You didn't ryhme quitter with anything but capped it into your scheme and although you had some connection throughout the lines the punch level was pretty low... the 'Dumb Found Dead" line could have been good if you built it up and added a dope concept to it... Rest was the same as opener with broken multi's and low to none punch level. Def step it up and attack your opponenet. I did like the dumb found dead idea, but you have to build up some punches towards your opponent and be a little creative.... Fiji: Opener I liked the concept.. Flow was lacking a bit. Read a couple times but it just wasn't coming off that smooth to me, Thought the Garciapara wordplay was forced also.... "battleship" line was cool, kept alive punch consistancy but wasn't a heavy punch... Rest of the lines went a bit harder than first half, it didn't have much connection creativity in it but read came off smooth and the punches were threre.. Decent way to close it out.. The Votes in.. Voted: FireHead /
Posted on: 2012-06-03 18:09:49

^^^That's some bull. I don't mind losin, but you obviously dont get the punches I have in there. They are subtle, and you have to know the background behind there meaning. Quitter wasn't meant to be a part of a multi I guess I shouldn't have capped it then. It's just the title of the song that Eminen dissed everlast in. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-03 20:59:16

Fv Voted: FireHead /
Posted on: 2012-06-04 14:45:59