Phe: Opening lines had some cool concepts, Felt the horror movie line could have been wording better. the "break down mind" line was okay, basic nameplay that was normally used but it was smooth.. Peace of mind punch was cool. Liked the "recieve a line" concept, that could have been dope, wording was off a bit. The Wizdumb punch was a nice personal attempt, but I wasn't really feeling to a nice punch level extent... "Cancer" line was kinda forced imo.. the Wordplay itself was alright, but overall concept and punch was forced into your verse... got a laugh at the "Shamu" line, rest wasn't to strong imo.. Head and Shoulders concept is mad played and what you brought wasn't so original with it, and closing punch didn't come off very strong. Overall you have alot of promise, and nice ideas, just have to stay more consistant with it.. Make sure it's all polished up before you send the final verse.... Mind: Opener was cool, thought the build up was kinda off, Wasn't feelin the piscasso build up, something was missing from it. But hte helicopter blades punch was dope... "Tripping when they Drop" post was cool, the setup was misworded a bit but after it got to "Tipping.... And so on" it was good... A little bit of filler or lack there of nice punches up until the "blossum wit Swag" punch, thought that came off nice though... "luke vader" concept was cool.. Closer was ight, could have ended a bit better IMO. I expected a lil more from both TBH. I do have a winner, as one's best punches were better than the other's best punches in his verse.. soo votes in.. Voted: Apollyon / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-06-16 11:40:47

No Sway.. but the personals took it for me. Both could have finished stronger though. No hate. RETURN THE FAVOR!!!!! Voted: Apollyon / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-06-18 08:19:56

Whoa!!! Another vote only 3 more and it'll be hotlisted like it should of been..lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-18 10:29:39

seems like mind just put it together real quick Voted: Apollyon / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-06-18 12:40:33

also, i'm just starting to vote cuz I just joined the site... so if my voting seems off it is because i'm still getting a feel for what is expected out of a 5 vote or a 10 vote and all that, so mainly just pay attention to who i gave the higher number to... but both were good Voted: Apollyon / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-06-18 12:42:46

Nice Battle, Both Had Nice Openers, One Edged On Concepts N Delivery Of His Bars. The Other Had Sum Nice Multies But I Felt It Wasn't Enough To Where I Gave Him The Decision. Fair Vote Is In. Mid/High Voted: Apollyon / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-06-19 12:27:24