One had a few creative punches with nice setups and solid rhyming with inner schemes.. the other had a bunch of stretched/forced punches, and had a few too many awkward/forced multies for me. Posted on: 2012-05-14 14:26:02

Dorthys Kitchen is a soup kitchen in cali usually served in lines...seattle mariners logo is s light green...and soup lines turned into food stamps now used soup lines during the depression Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-12 12:38:47

scip flipped = pics/photos. skipping class = truant. amputee nubs are called stumps. mini-me has huge lips, sauron is the enemy in lord of the rings who coughs n spits when he talks. LB mods renamed his crew to 'Epitome of a Moron' .. i would hope the rest is pretty self explanitory. if you have questions, feel free to ask. Hell of a battle, Scip. Good luck, fam. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-13 05:38:30

dis a hard one to judge but Supreme's ideas were little bit more bright than the other no h8 both did excellent IMO Voted: Da KingPin / Phonocide
Posted on: 2012-05-13 13:48:12

i agree with tyger james Voted: Da KingPin / Phonocide
Posted on: 2012-05-13 19:01:51

Yo, to be 100 scip ur ish was one of the most stretched verses ive ever read, ur lines took wayyyyy to long from main multi set to main multi set. Try n fix that, Supreme work on that filler, some multis were just placed there, fvs in.. high to low. Voted: Da KingPin / Phonocide
Posted on: 2012-05-14 13:24:15

Fairs in fellas. Voted: Da KingPin / Phonocide
Posted on: 2012-05-14 14:43:16

very close battle Voted: Da KingPin / Phonocide
Posted on: 2012-05-14 15:40:02

Tear This Guy, “Scare ‘Em White“, Then “Watch ‘Em Run”…SNOW FLAKE! Spittin “Man Made Rivers” Your FLOWS FAKE, Dude You Lack Skill, Who Have You Battled? So Even If You Were “Applying Plates To A Bench Press” Your Bars Still Wouldn’t HOLD WEIGHT!… ^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^this was hella long bro, to materialize to the punch..plus hyphenating irrelevant words, doesnt really do much.. it woulda worked if it was an internal multi, but as it stands, you just went buck wild wit dem keys..lol.and is snowflake a horse? manmade rivers was okish, the bench press concept, was also too wordy, you need to eliminate unnecesary vocab, get your point across wit less words, remember its still a verse, multi scheme was basic as hell.. btw This Dude Couldn’t “Make The Cut”, Take A Punch N “Blood’ll Drop” Quicker Than GORY INCISIONS! “Angry Yet Hungry For More” This Bulimics Furious, This Comedic Serious? OF COURSE HE BE KIDDIN, Cuz I’ll Leave “Soup Served In Lines” Like DOROTHY’S KITCHEN!… ^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^alot of inners, you seem to be tryin to force too many concepts into one couplet, defeats the purpose, alot of irrelevant filler imo... shouldve kept it short, because your final flip(simile,meta,ana logy,punch) was actually pretty good, although, couldve said , maybe campbells or, something relating to soup, thats more universal, so you dont have to rely to heavily on the expo... Y OU SEEM DORK, So If "Money Tight", Then Really YOUR GREEN’S SHORT! The “Gun Spit” Cuz The Llama Is Live If “Problems Arise” I’ll Come To Your “Turf”, “Bang The Gavel” N “Leave The Issues Adjourned” To Prove Scip “Ruling SUPREMES COURT”!ll ^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^setup, was a decent length, then somehow ran away, cause once again, your doing too much, lower the wording, but keep the multis relevant, which you did try to do, leading up to supreme court... what wouldve been a dope flip, took too long to materialize, its like instead of going in a straight line, you decided to go sightseeing,lol …Rippin Through Your Writtens, I’m TEARING YOUR SCRIPTS DUKE, I’ll “Fan S Out The Window”, AIRING YOUR SHIT DUDE! A SQUARE THAT SCIP SHOOTS, You Got Fienes? Sike Off The Top I Know “S Green’s Light” Like The MARINERS SYMBOL!… ^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^didnt understand how,' s green light' is a diss?so this was a failed , flip in my book.. the rest of the bar, was actually the best you did so far as far as length goes.. Dog Your WACK N YOU NERDY, Actin Like You STACK N YOU SERVE B, But Burgers N Fries Are What You’re ACTUALLY SERVING! “Hands” Thrown “Clock Fool”, An “Put An End To Dudes Time” Cuz “Soup Lines Were Poppin”…BACK IN THE THIRTIES!// ^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^seems like you used the letterB, just to complete your multi, too many hyphens bro.. i know you were tryin to imply the relevancy wit cock or time references, end punch was decent, only problem is you already used that name flip , referencing soup....wit the kitchen flip.. so this is basically a redundant flip.. Voted: Da KingPin / Phonocide
Posted on: 2012-05-14 23:07:37

on to supreme's verse; 'I already one/won,' you 'nothin' this shit was MEANT TO BE 'SOLO' .. Who names themself after 'NONATTENDANCE & NO SHOWS'? and your TENDANCIES? HOMO!! .. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^decent wording lenght, decent personalflip on name, nothing too spectacular, simple but effective.. ----- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- ------ So while you PRETEND TO BE 'DONO' I'll make 'Scip Do A Flip' then I'll SEND YOU THE 'PHOTOS'!! . ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^de cent nameflip again..lenght was nice..what's dono? the transition, tendancies homo, seemed irrelevant as you went on wit your bar, wouldve liked to see you build off of that instead of going a different direction...unless dono, was supposed to be the continuation, of it... ------------------ -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- ----------- . Not to MENTION YA FLOW, BRO What you've WRITTEN IS WEAK, SON.. I'm VISCIOUS & MEAN, BUT thaz not the only DIFFERENCE BETWEEN US! So just LISTEN TO ME, CUNT.. It don't matter if ya verse is BITTEN OR KEYED UP, I can 'Beat Scip Easy' like 'HITTIN A SPEED BUMP'! ! It's Tragic, Scip cant get Past-My-Wit & hes 'not gettin Half-My-Shit' like 'VICTIMS OF PRE-NUPS'!! ^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ the setup took way too long in this one..even though the wording leading up to the multi was of good length, it felt fillerish.. the end punch was solid, but lost steam because of the runon.. ------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- --- Yous a 'MIDGET' TO ME, CHUMP.. See I'm FATAL TO FAGS NEW TO ME.. Somehow you're ABLE TO LACK FLUENCY with 'FABLES' AND ACT FOOLISHLY.. Ima show 'Scip-Some-Class..' I'll 'Dip-Then-Blast' and just LABEL IT AS 'TRUANCY'!! . ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^th e concept, scip some class, had potential, wit the truancy flip, but because of the wordin, it kinda faltered a bit.. i wouldve simplified the setup, lose those 2 extra multis, because your doing an inner wit the second line.. then i wouldve wrote. ... my 'clean writs prove',they'll 'keep skip schooled' without, LABELING IT TRUANCY. or something similar....but my point is try not to over do the multi schemes.. ------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- -- . See, I CANT BEGIN TO BOTHER.. should you STAND AGAINST ME?? SLAUGHTER.. Get ya 'Head Dunked' wit 'Wet Stumps' like 'AMPUTEES IN WATER'!. ^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^this setup, to punch was much better, simple clean, and to the point, ---------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- . No wonder all ya friends leave ya 'ABANDONED'.. LIKE YA ROSTER!! You PRACTICALLY 'HACK N SPIT' with 'MASSIVELY FATTENED LIPS' like a cross between 'MINI-ME & SAURON' .. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^the transition is a mismatch multi, the minime was okish ------------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------------- -------------- The ACTUAL FACT IS THIS: the mods ACCURATELY TAGGED YA CLIQUE.. cuz FACTUALLY you ARE the "EPITOME OF a MORON!!" .. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^coming to the end of this bar, the personal on his old crew, kinda was anti climatic... Whoaa .. G'lukk playa Voted: Da KingPin / Phonocide
Posted on: 2012-05-14 23:45:24

bottom line is both had their fair share of ups and downs, but one came a bit more polished and consistent in multi schemes, structure, and punches,, both could use work, and have potential... good battle gentlemen.. fairs in Voted: Da KingPin / Phonocide
Posted on: 2012-05-14 23:47:49

real shit one had better 16 other need not run on Voted: Da KingPin / Phonocide
Posted on: 2012-05-16 01:35:39