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Length: 16 Lines

ViTRiOL

(100%) WINNER

Scheme Champion

Ranked #-- This Season

Crew: G.O.A.T.

Reppin: United Kingdom

John Dos (0%)

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Ranked #-- This Season

Reppin: Jacksonville, Florida, United States

ViTRiOL

Honest to god… you used to be “packin-dimes”, now what you've WRITTEN IS THE POOREST DROP? Tsch, and you biting Huey's swag: You really "didn’t-need-the-change" like BUSINESSMEN IN CORNER SHOPS. He's just ANOTHER ONE'THA FAGGOTS, gittin a-HUMP ON THE MATTRESS in the-'SLUMS' OF THE CAMPUS: We thought Dose'd "given-up-the-dope-but" he thought "spittin-an-open" would RE-BUFFER HIS SWAG YET ... he failed to “avoid-shooting-himself-in-the-foot” like a RECOVERING ADDICT ... re-DISCOVERING HABITS. Nowadays? I'm ABOVE WITH THIS RAP SHIT but dude, your 'box' “desperately-needs-attention” like the-CUNT OF A FAT CHICK. I don’t claim to have a-GUN IN MY JACKET, I utilise more PUNISHING TACTICS: I'll call for trucks-of-raw-vandals armed with TRUNCHEONS N MALICE to rupture-this-damsel, but no gay love story when you gettin BUMMED IN THE 'PARISH', just this 'kid' gettin "fucked-from-all-angles" like HUNDREDS OF CATHOLICS HUDDLED IN MASSES "shoving-it-down-your-throat" W/O TOUCHIN A PAMPHLET! It's over, you got no chance of "bringing-fire-to-the-plate" like a HUNTER IN PRACTICE holdin the PUMP WITH A BAD GRIP so you must be "tripping-to-approach-this-beast" eating NOTHING BUT CACTUS somewhere ROUGH IN THE ATLAS?! … and that's WON ME THE MATCH BITCH...

John Dos

Don't get hot headed or talk stupid rook. i got fo' fives and hammas out that'll leave ya 'bow tied' italian style with ya top shredded and 'noodle' cooked.see,i'm on a different wave length than this lame snake,i blaze 8ths then put on my game face..i'm the "best on deck" like a spade ace,i put my cock to ya dames face.i got crazy and left welts-on-that and had the slut missin-me-yellin..since i got her 'on lock' she hittin-my-cell-n sayin "well- come-back!"like my names Mase.i got with ya girl, did like Michael and got to "Rockin her world" she thought she was cool with me when i gave her that neck jewelery and lined it with pearls. you're such a fucking homo. you think ya rep is respected cuz you grew up stressed n neglected with holed clothes? think i'll pity-you and wont grip-the-tool and put bullets into-you- like "hold those"? let shots 'Bam, b'... with that cpld chrome i'll take ya broke mothers 'dear child' so even if she had money? when that Thumper hittin? now she has no doe. you think ya got a cold flow? bro...No. i read ya rhymes like "whoa, whoa"..."how the fuck did anyone go vote for this chomo?!" when you free, that noise is weak. all i see is poopie, like toilet seats. (poo, pee). you could be that boy dupri and still not even be So So.

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Battle started: April 7^th 2012 at 18:28
Challenger joined: April 7^th 2012 at 18:31

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2012-04-07 18:31:02).

Staff Comments

54 Óðinn <....> The Peoples Champ Topical Champion Tag Team Champion	both had some nice concepts... ones were stronger and better executed from start to finish. Fairs in, Fuels out!! Posted on: 2012-04-08 11:11:08
14 Phroxen <LoD> Hall Of Famer I am Him 2x Grand Champion One Bar Legend Cypher Champion Scheme Champion Concept Champion One Bar Champion	Seen better from Vit & never heard of Dos. I wasn't too impressed by this. In either verse, all the punches were predictable or soft.. I saw that, if one line were worded differently, it would have been crazy creative.. I thought thats how it read, but when i looked again, it wasnt. Bummer. Not much else to say.. mids. Posted on: 2012-04-08 13:54:29

Member Comments

Incoded Exclusive Member	NO H8 FAIRS N..VB Voted: ViTRiOL / John Dos Posted on: 2012-04-07 20:21:02
MeTa-FoRcEz <OVERTIME> Live Battler	Fair in Voted: ViTRiOL / John Dos Posted on: 2012-04-07 20:49:35
John Dos Live Battler	READ BOTH VERSES!! Comment Only Posted on: 2012-04-08 11:04:17
Tony The TYGER Live Battler	GOOD BATTLE Voted: ViTRiOL / John Dos Posted on: 2012-04-08 12:21:46
ViTRiOL <DGAF> Scheme Champion	John, I was gonna say, Bandana Billy. He voted for the opposite last night, haha. Dude has been caught flat-out. Comment Only Posted on: 2012-04-08 13:07:22
AfterThought <CHALKLINED>	Definitely not the best i've seen from both, but it seemed like one put more thought in his verse, with slightly better wording. Fair's in. Voted: ViTRiOL / John Dos Posted on: 2012-04-08 14:52:59
IV <Androidz> Live Battler	Okaaaaaaay Vit; nice multies, punches and concepts all the way through but I think your punches would have more impact if you tied one concept into a couple lines and had relevant multies building up to the overall punch, right now you're like... concept... JAB... new concept JAB... new concept JAB JAB it would be cool to see you try concept.. mutlie, concept build up multie.. concept K.O punch. John; i like that you've said 'fuck you' to letsbeef style but i think it works better if your material is really really solid. I think the readability was really really good, a few new concepts and hard enough punches were thrown but nothing REALLY real stand out in either. My vote is in. Realistic ratings. No hate. Voted: ViTRiOL / John Dos Posted on: 2012-04-08 15:01:58
Phoenix	Good battle tho seen better from both....and john I guess u lil rusty. Voted: ViTRiOL / John Dos Posted on: 2012-04-08 15:03:48
Phracture <DPS> Grand Champion	I Will Be Back To Vote In The Morning . Comment Only Posted on: 2012-04-09 03:26:26
John Dos Live Battler	yo on some real shit i thought both verses were on point...this is more of a live battle verse from both IMO...i dont worry too much about being a "textcee" on this shit...most bars i see that ppl consider dope would sound shitty in real life...but hey, everyone has their personal preferences so it's cool Comment Only Posted on: 2012-04-09 19:08:51
V3numb	"Only exclusive members can vote in the Exclusive arena."............. . idk man was gonna drop a vote when this came up Voted: ViTRiOL / John Dos Posted on: 2012-04-09 19:20:11
V3numb	nvm... aight one just got this all-way around.. i seen better from both to be fairly honest but one needa work on set-ups a bit while other try not to force ir bro Voted: ViTRiOL / John Dos Posted on: 2012-04-09 19:23:05
TalkSick <MFD.> Grand Champion Tag Team Champion	Sorry fellas, this is an exclusive battle, cant vote. Thanks for stopping by the thread though. Voted: ViTRiOL / John Dos Posted on: 2012-04-09 20:59:20
TalkSick <MFD.> Grand Champion Tag Team Champion	Whoa trippy, just said it was exclusive and wouldnt let me vote. Ok well this was a good battle (Tip for Jon, please cap your multies it makes your read easier to folllow and judge). I gott go with the one with an overall smoother verse that worked well in most cases. There was one line that absolutly killed it for me in Jons verse though (Poopie line). After that it was sold to Vit, Sorry for the sway but its my job. Fairs in the mix. Good luck to both of you. Voted: ViTRiOL / John Dos Posted on: 2012-04-09 21:04:11
MaCc Da G0D <APECS>	-Whoa. Expected. Fairs Are in.!!. Voted: ViTRiOL / John Dos Posted on: 2012-04-09 21:41:03
venomosity Basic Member	gb gb.. i found one to be slightly intact more then the other in regards to style and nothing less. for everything else i recon came equal from both. just distinct the important from irrelevant when lacing pieacs that dont contain basic essentials. everything else is aight. hall in them caps homey Voted: ViTRiOL / John Dos Posted on: 2012-04-10 03:38:47
ViTRiOL <DGAF> Scheme Champion	^ LOL at the caps reference. Comment Only Posted on: 2012-04-10 08:52:50
mobiangod Basic Member	nice Voted: ViTRiOL / John Dos Posted on: 2012-04-10 14:38:54


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