def pretty close to me but i liked ones punchlines alot better than his opponets but could use more multis but overrall both keep at it Posted on: 2012-04-01 19:36:08

Close battle one had good concepts wit the wordplay but forced a couple of them the other was not as good with the wordplay but had an easy to follow flow wit enough punchline power to take the win.to the one who didn't get my vote keep at it. Ur verse would have been fire if u could find a way to smooth out the word play n attach the the flow to them Voted: bkballa /
Posted on: 2012-04-01 18:47:43

fv Voted: bkballa /
Posted on: 2012-04-02 01:10:43

Gud frum both but 1 took it Voted: bkballa /
Posted on: 2012-04-02 01:35:55

-I Am Shocced!! Bk Went It!! Both Verses was Ill No Doubt But Balla just Had That Sting On His Punches and Had a Smoother Read. Fairs Are In. Close Spar. Voted: bkballa /
Posted on: 2012-04-02 07:53:31

Jimmy: opening punch wasnt creative. the punch after that was straight up forced. damn man. so are the punches after that. these are some elementary school punches now. view some battles by DaDDiO. bk: you had a lot of broken multis, a bit of filler, and like Dean had simple punches. i reccommend both look up vet battles to see how its done. fv. one had the more consistant more powerful drop. Voted: bkballa /
Posted on: 2012-04-02 10:02:07

honestly, wasnt overly impressed with either in this, and my feedback applies to both of u. punches were weak in both, try to think outside the box, and really come at ur oppenent. the punches in this battle just wernt really landing at all. a lot seemed forced, particularly in the losers. very basic ideas, like good grief said, have a look at guys that have been here a while, look at what they are doing, and what you're not doing. im basing my winner on overall strength, but theres not much in it Voted: bkballa /
Posted on: 2012-04-02 14:25:22

fair is in.. PM for an expo.. aint trying be an ass yall, g'luck ad elevate tho Voted: bkballa /
Posted on: 2012-04-02 19:08:02

One seems to have a pretty solid grasp of multi's and punz, but their wordplay and set-ups could use some work. Try and use some more creative punch concepts & try and deliver them cleaner. The other verse had a 2 syllable multis scheme the entire verse, which was hella basic & the capped words tht werent fluent w/ the scheme, which the read off. Try working on your structure, multi complexity & punch concepts and delivery to elevate. Fairs in Voted: bkballa /
Posted on: 2012-04-03 09:13:37

FV,GB Voted: bkballa /
Posted on: 2012-04-04 14:11:45

close battles guys...fv in Voted: bkballa /
Posted on: 2012-04-04 15:41:30

close battle nice drops Voted: bkballa /
Posted on: 2012-04-04 15:45:55