Overall this battle was meh from both sides... One showed some creativeness, other dude was on same level, just lacked the creative thought process... but BOTH of you need to step up your bars... Posted on: 2012-02-01 12:31:43

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Posted on: 2012-01-30 17:43:05

fran dresser is that bitch from the nanany with that horrible laugh Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-30 17:52:38

good good...Fair vote Voted: Kid-Noah / TaeeBeezy
Posted on: 2012-01-30 19:30:09

one came with punches Voted: Kid-Noah / TaeeBeezy
Posted on: 2012-01-30 19:47:15

^^^ 3 of the dumbest people on letsbeef... smh Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-30 20:12:26

one attempted more punches, the other talked about himself a lot.. enuff' said fairs in. i see potential here Voted: Kid-Noah / TaeeBeezy
Posted on: 2012-01-30 20:24:51

both taking a while to get to the punch..but not too terribly bad..keep at it yall Voted: Kid-Noah / TaeeBeezy
Posted on: 2012-01-30 20:28:20

Punches vs rhyming here. One had some swings and misses but at least attempted throwing a punch. Fair's in. Voted: Kid-Noah / TaeeBeezy
Posted on: 2012-01-31 04:35:47

[NOAH]: First line was filler, NEVER a good way to start man, but I'll let it slide. The flow was off a bit after that random rhyme scheme, but the second line & punch was actually pretty cool. The next bar had some mismatched multies, you got sloppy adding syllables here and there, and to be honest the final punchline wasn't strong enough. Focus on wording every multie perfectly; take care over them and make sure they're all relevent to the punchline. Also, try and get a bit more creative with the concepts cause that was kinda played. Last line was all over the place man. Concept was cool, but there was no flow or multies matching there so it lost a lot of impact. [TAEEE]: I didn't see any real multie game or flow throughout, be careful with that because it WILL lose you votes. A good flow and some simple multies can really do wonders to the most basic verse. Severe lack of punchlines or creativity anywhere in your verse too man, this was some very basic and underwhelming writing. Think more outside the box dude, it's as simple as that. Remember, I don't hate on verses, and anything I say is only ever harsh because I wanna help YOU GUYS elevate. Always 100, PYRO. Voted: Kid-Noah / TaeeBeezy
Posted on: 2012-01-31 14:28:51

awkward start from kid noah Voted: Kid-Noah / TaeeBeezy
Posted on: 2012-02-01 12:20:29

basically listen to Askari. real talk mans a vet at this shit ite? fv. Voted: Kid-Noah / TaeeBeezy
Posted on: 2012-02-01 21:32:15

fv Voted: Kid-Noah / TaeeBeezy
Posted on: 2012-02-02 14:20:22

Noah - i'm not sure who you are, i thought i knew but not so much anymore. I think you had a LOT of filler, a long time getting to punches and when you did they weren't great, they were 'not bad' but none the less a lot of build up for average stuff, saying that you had some nice concepts and youre pretty complex which works for you, you lost me in your rhyme scheme a bit, maybe it's an accent thing. Taee you were very basic, with not many punches, i think you need to learn from hot list battles and from advice and get the fundamentals mastered and then move on to elevating, i think you have the potential its just effort and work that's gunna make the difference. Think you had some nice concepts also, but wording etc needs improvement. Overall ima be a bit generous here... low ** - mid ** FAIR RATINGS FOR ELEVATION Voted: Kid-Noah / TaeeBeezy
Posted on: 2012-02-02 17:44:44