pretty good battle......PJ: you came with some fresh concepts and punches...Lucio: you also had some good lines and decent multis this battle will come down to preference of punches and flow....my vote is going for the punches i like the most cuz of the concepts based behind them were just a lil better imo....my votes in Posted on: 2012-01-28 18:14:24

Homophobic vet/blew doze dog... rest is simplistic..... if you aint get it.... like.... Where you been all day Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-27 18:55:18

Shake that rust off now... Voted: Reznov / James 1
Posted on: 2012-01-27 18:57:00

fv Voted: Reznov / James 1
Posted on: 2012-01-27 19:55:09

FAIR VOTE DUDE CAME HARDER MOTHERFUCKERZ KNOW HOW IT IS Voted: Reznov / James 1
Posted on: 2012-01-27 20:35:56

fv no h8 Voted: Reznov / James 1
Posted on: 2012-01-27 21:26:49

yeahhh that battle made my dick go hard Voted: Reznov / James 1
Posted on: 2012-01-28 17:27:05

One went for his opponent more and had a verse that was a lil shaky. The other better punches but went off topic a bit.. Fv Voted: Reznov / James 1
Posted on: 2012-01-28 23:12:23

Good battle fam', I enjoyed reading both of your battle entries. You both included great multi's and concepts. I'll have to fair vote. Voted: Reznov / James 1
Posted on: 2012-01-29 08:00:31

i dont know about this one... hard choice in my opinion... but like prose said one went after the opponent but didn't really have good punches... the other had pretty decent punches but was talking bout himself for too long... and since this is an 8 it only takes 2 or 3 lines for it to be too much... i think this came down to who was the better lyricist in this one... FVC vote dropped... keep at it fellas Voted: Reznov / James 1
Posted on: 2012-01-29 12:32:58

One verse was broken regarding mutlies, had a couple nice lines and concepts in there, relatively consistent/ solid verse. Other was quite up and down but closer was dope and had some hard bars throughout. after reading a second time one verse hit hard and the other one fell off. mid - mid Voted: Reznov / James 1
Posted on: 2012-01-29 14:05:20

PJ: SEMI UNTUCKED & 350 BUCKS does not rhyme in any accent I can think of. Now, I wouldn't have made an issue of it, had it been later in the verse I might have let it slide, but it sets a tone for the rest of the verse that makes me highly cynical from the beginning. The Juicy line was pretty played but it worked, too many filler multies though. The next bar [BLUE DOZE DOG] made no sense. I'm sorry amigo but that just never landed, way too forced. Gym routine line was mad played too, even if it was the best line of the verse. Harsh, but I'm trying to help you improve. Lucio: Your first line was tight, all the multies were on point and you flowed well, however the punch didn't hit that hard at the end. It seemed like a good build up to a let down, I dunno if the wording caused the anti-climax or if the concept just wasn't strong enough but it was a little deflating. Decent bar though no doubt. The [CONNECTION] line had me a little pissed off if I'm honest, at first I thought "broken multies, weak punch, boring" but then I read on and really liked the "sections on the roof" ending, very casual and narrative, quite original too. Best punch of the battle. Last line was meh. All in all both of you guys have a lot of elevating to do, but the potential is certainly there. The trick is to think long and hard about your concepts: Do they hit hard? Have you worded them in the most climatic way? Are all the multies relevant? Bear these questions in mind when writing your verse and you'll find them hitting a lot harder. The fair vote is in, respect it. PYRO, always 100. Voted: Reznov / James 1
Posted on: 2012-01-29 16:44:11

good shit thought one came harder though Voted: Reznov / James 1
Posted on: 2012-01-29 17:55:47

str8 fire!!!!!!!! Voted: Reznov / James 1
Posted on: 2012-01-30 17:25:56

both were good fv want to see more Voted: Reznov / James 1
Posted on: 2012-01-30 19:18:37

votes in, seen better from one, the other should add more complexity and a smoother read. pj try n make the multitude of rhyme skemes read smoother. the illest votes in Voted: Reznov / James 1
Posted on: 2012-01-30 19:56:52