Archaic: to me its not that the wordplay was fresh or not, none of it worked... Wordplay as to work both ways i.e. the line has to be in reference to both parts of the wordplay not just one... i could fill a whole 64 with wordplay that dont work... other than that the punches were ok-ish, nothing major hard hitting... nice3 use of multi's but that was about it... RiGGA.. nothing hard hitting by any means, but your improving a lot, (think grizzy showing ya the ropes n more).. your structure was simple n nice, flowed well from punch to punch n they were ok-ish punches too... 7-7 vote. Fair is in!! Posted on: 2012-01-13 06:52:51

ok...this is a tough one.....had to re-read each verse 2 times to come to a conclusion which doesnt happen often...Rigga, what turned me off of your verse was the broken multies, they crucial in TEXT (audio a differnt story), i liked the shot at wordplay in the begining BUT it wasnt massivly effective (not bad but not on a massive scale) and your verse just kind of died off in the end. Acouple tweaks to your bars and youll be flyin, my dude..... Archaic, it started off nice with the multies but then they started to disinegrate into forced which is a big no no, I liked the little wordplay you had, solid cosmetics line. Your punches were fairly simple but they hit effectivly as well.....Good battles fellas, and i see this is a tourney battle? so good luck to both of ya Voted: Archaic / RiGGA
Posted on: 2012-01-13 01:57:32

ehhhh damn this is tough to call... pretty even... and Rigga really surprised me in this one... ima hit this up again tomorrow when im fully awake... Voted: Archaic / RiGGA
Posted on: 2012-01-13 02:08:47

Arch: Honestly.. I thought the wordplay wasn't fresh at all & wasn't used correctly. "Con Sin Trait" was the name of a crew LOQ started & "Cause Medics/Cosmetics" was used by Rican in the last tourney. Over looking that, I liked the opener, as i said though, the wordplay could've been used better. same with Cosmetics line, the finishing punch was decent, so was the finisher. RiGGA: I like the opener, the wordplay was nice, so was the punch, i think it could've been set-up better though. too many fillers in the next few lines.. still a decent punch. Adore his thoughts finisher was ok, also could've been set-up better, I think you need to take more time on your verses, both of you. Both had their ups & downs here, could really go either way, gave it to the fresher verse & slightly more polished. fair's in. Voted: Archaic / RiGGA
Posted on: 2012-01-13 03:46:34

Some wordplay that didn't work, but still some nice lines, first half was dope, rest was good fell off slightly though. Other felt like the multies were in their for flow purposes, which worked... but punches and content was lacking, nice use of multies and scheme though. Overall i think one had the harder verse with stronger content. Good battle, i'll be generous with the ratings since it's a noob tourney. Well done Voted: Archaic / RiGGA
Posted on: 2012-01-13 12:18:02

One had a couple of nice lines while the other seemed a bit force through at least half the verse.Fv is in fellas Voted: Archaic / RiGGA
Posted on: 2012-01-13 14:50:00

i think its time to block swag tbh... Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-13 14:50:50

ehhh pretty even rereading it but i just felt one's a lil more... FVC vote dropped... Voted: Archaic / RiGGA
Posted on: 2012-01-13 22:48:58

well damn homie banned lmao doesn't really matter now i guess haha Voted: Archaic / RiGGA
Posted on: 2012-01-13 22:49:57

both pretty cool.someone went harder and had some more meaningful lines.im not hating no one Voted: Archaic / RiGGA
Posted on: 2012-01-14 13:22:06

good one stay battling to the both of ya'll Voted: Archaic / RiGGA
Posted on: 2012-01-14 21:15:09

idk but thats my vote Voted: Archaic / RiGGA
Posted on: 2012-01-15 12:26:28