One's rhyme scheme was decent but the vocab was garbage.. very limited, and boring.. being brutally honest. None of the punches hit hard at all.. tons of shit was very played. I dunno what happened there. Other person, solid verse.. some witty punches and the personals were good too. Doesn't matter if they were true or not, they bullied your opponent's verse. PM me if you need a longer expo. Posted on: 2012-01-06 01:35:32

I'll be back to this... Posted on: 2012-01-06 10:06:13

Yezzir....POETS! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-04 23:09:45

EXPO!! -- He's old account was called 'Lyrical monstA' once you know that... everything else should make sense. Good shit Frankie. DPS!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-05 20:03:15

Frankie- You had some really witty lines, the Captain spot line was funny. Consistency was a major issue, some lines just didn't pack as much of a punch as your others. The business name on a map line was majorly forced. The setup was forced, the punch itself was choppy, not a great line at all, it was your worst line in the verse IMO. The following tips concept was clever, could've been executed a lot smoother though.. Verity- You opened really strong, the rhyme scheme in your opener was nice, & it flowed really nicely to the punch, &, similar to Frankie, consistency was your main problem. Some of your punches were extremely lackluster, the Defeat Matrix line was a nice attempt at a personal, but it fell short due to bad wording, and the rhyme scheme was bleh. The hot dog production gave me a nice laugh, it was the high point of your verse, nothing else really stood out IMO...Overall- One had a smoother read, more punches & much better execution more often then their opponent..fv is in. Voted: Frankie Clipz / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-06 01:03:53

DPS!! dope shit!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-06 01:29:50

SHEESH. This is one of the better battles I've seen on this site in a minute. For me it simply came down to readability and multie accuracy, the concepts and punches were neck & neck. Always 100. Voted: Frankie Clipz / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-06 18:11:18

dope boys Voted: Frankie Clipz / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-06 21:46:43

gb Voted: Frankie Clipz / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-07 04:55:19

Verity: started of great wit the openings. i thought the shrek and monsta ink shit was great but the toy story ish is played tho. the you went wit Hot Dog nameplay. played wit Frankie too. the heart shit was dope as fuck tho. then ya switche right back to hot dog shit. smh the closing lines were cool. overall some played stuff hurt you but had some shining moments. Frank: the cops thing wasnt that hard to me... but OHH SHIT!! nice personal. the map thing seemed a lil used. now the next was ite. no punchline in it. but then the 'freak a leak'. when someone is called a 'leak' what do you mean? the rest of the verse was just ite. Vote: it was a pretty cool battle. overall one had harder punches. Voted: Frankie Clipz / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-07 09:08:53

CLASSI... oops. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-07 15:42:51

Damn this was really dope i was feelin ones punches a bit more both did there things dope shit the fair is tossed!! Voted: Frankie Clipz / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-07 19:58:52

Ones verse was more creative, and also flowed better imo. I liked the personals from both, and I ain't gonna sway shit, so if an expo is needed, I'll explain. Dope battle tho, Fair Vote. Voted: Frankie Clipz / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-08 11:43:23

Solid drops by both. The personals by both of you were pretty funny, the 32 was a good choice. For me one came firing with nameplay that was fire and slightly edged because of it. No hate to either, Props to both. Fairs dropped. Voted: Frankie Clipz / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-08 13:05:50

verity took this one Voted: Frankie Clipz / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-08 13:30:40

5 - 7? I dont care that votes for me thats bullshit noone wrote a 5 ill get that ish deleted Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-08 13:32:02

FV Voted: Frankie Clipz / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-08 15:20:17

After rereadin a few t6imes, One had a standout bar or two that edged this.. G'Spar Poets :high: Voted: Frankie Clipz / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-08 19:33:13

& It was CLASSIC Rule. Voted: Frankie Clipz / IV
Posted on: 2012-01-08 19:34:48

Poets. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-08 19:48:40