be BACK to this* Posted on: 2011-12-21 15:13:17

I had a lot of fun reading this.. honestly the best battle I've seen on the site so far. Props to both of you before I break this down, and I'm sure it's going to be pretty close. *Wigsplit* : Retarded kids fart line was slightly funny. All of the setup between the stabbing and bumblebee lines was pretty sick.. very nice rhyme scheme and imagery. The gay jokes and mom jokes were decent, but didnt' hit as hard as the first part of the verse, but the Jesus/Easter punch was pretty solid. The shit from peter to reefer was filler.. the corn maze and thomas light were soft punches, but punches nonetheless. The aggressive lines after that, followed by field of dreams was pretty nice. That's where your verse tapered off for me.. no other real punches afterwards. *STEE LO*: I really enjoyed reading your verse.. it was actually intelligent with a lot of clever punches. The div code frame punch was excellent.. I don't think many people will understand it though, because not many people can code HTML, lol... the word up bar had too long of a setup to hit hard. The Ben Bailey punch was sick.. and the setup was perfect. The presence/ toy game was another dope punch that landed and the setup was good again. The Carrie weight/ bloody bitch was a decent concept but the punch took too long to setup again. Wack / slap bass was kind of clever, but didn't really hit as a punch against an opponent.. just as a clever line as itself. Drinks / Solo punch was pretty sick, again with another solid setup of multies. Woo a broad, lmao.. clever again. The test dummies and tommy punches were good as well.. Roman tombstones was hot.. all in all, this verse was more polished and clever, and came with a greater variety of harder punches. Good luck to both. Posted on: 2011-12-23 03:44:38

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Posted on: 2011-12-21 15:21:53

Dead Poets Society. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-12-21 15:23:22

wow. i'll return 4 dis in a min Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-21 15:47:22

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Posted on: 2011-12-21 15:59:26

damn my eyes hurt now.. lol... on the real boys this battle was ill... both of you went off.. close call but one of you get an extra point for creativity... Wigsplit my vote on this... but again.. was a close call.. big up both yourselves Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-21 16:12:55

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Posted on: 2011-12-21 16:48:22

ok, honestly, this was a super long read, so u both get 10s for this stuff....both were dope, tbh, one to me was more hilarious, and creative....i lol'd the whole way through....could go either way Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-21 18:26:55

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Posted on: 2011-12-21 19:00:26

ummm...def a dope battle gents...both dropped nice...and both are my brodys...but i think 1s direct lines hit harder here. culd go either way but to me it goes dis way fv dropped...hmu for further expo Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-21 19:31:39

dimes on both thought wigsplits was more entertaining and a little more humerous. Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-22 00:40:01

humorous* Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-22 00:40:20

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Posted on: 2011-12-22 11:34:57

Wig: I like the style lol, no complex punches, but damaging humorous bars. I really think since you don't use much of the (") since you dont use complexity, you should maybe add some internal rhymes, the lines just seem repetitive which fucks up the impact. Rhet: i diss on PREMISE AND FACT, your 'Cadence with LYRICS IS, WACK' like a SLAP BASS SOLO - i CLAP TREYS DOLO..if you think ya flow dope as 'Ohs of ReeFer' ya must be holdin drinks sir, but that would explain that's why your FAN BASE 'SOLO!' - you probably rock TAN-GREY POLOS w/PAN FACED MOJO you couldn't 'Wu Abroad' in China with a CLAN TAPE PROMO!! - my favourite part in your 32, lots of nice punches all the way too, there was one bar or two where the flow kinda lost me but a really solid verse. Gave this to the consistent, overall better verse. Fair's in. Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-22 14:42:24

Wigsplit- Mad basic in places. Funny ish verse... But stupid in other places. Steelo- Better verse.. Not by much. Respect my vote. its fair Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-22 15:51:54

lmfao at 10's Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-22 15:52:47

*Cough, Dicksucka* Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-12-22 16:06:45

This was a good read both did there things on this one but i was feelin ones punches and creativity abit more no hate at all dope battle the fair is always tossed!!! Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-22 18:50:00

Good on both ends long battle though Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-23 00:30:50

...Two Fuccin heaters. But Attacc And Agression took The Vote for me in This one. Fv's have been Dropped. [HATS OFF TO BOTH] Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-23 01:56:04

Nice Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-23 02:19:33

yup Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-12-23 02:33:02

First Time I Chuckled Was The Broad Line; Tombstone Line Was Awful; Semi Line Gave Me Another Chuckle And The Stock Line Was Nice; More Fun And Giggles Still Less Pun With Wiggles; Superior Flow; Rhe Up And Beaver Line Was Nice; Corn Line Was Very Corny Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-23 02:56:55

fv Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-23 04:52:27

Cough, grizz swaying again, cough Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-12-23 09:31:21

fucking good battle close Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-23 20:11:34

Yeah Re Read Both Verses. I Was A Lil Bit Harsh On You Wiggy... Prolly Cuz I Voted In A Bad Mood Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-23 23:13:05

nicely done Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-24 03:01:52

Crazy Crazy Battle, hard to judge but one just had more consistency for me while the other starting strong, started wavering then picked it bck up. Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-24 03:28:37

EPIC BATTLE!! But i gotta give it to Steelo. Steelo buildup and delivery and creativity was crazy. Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-24 03:30:07

REALLY REALLY GOOD SHIT!GB FV !!!! Voted: Wigsplit / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2011-12-24 04:44:09

Mission Complete Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-12-24 18:01:30