Nice dude. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-09-07 13:29:41

im best at taking peoples words and turning em. but your shits creative for a start. keep on keepin on its all practice god knows i still need more haha. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-09-07 16:58:02

Yeah that's why I'm hear, just to learn some shit. N that's what i think you should do in a battle is turn the other persons words around n i rarely see it happen like that. it's like people just talk shit and it could have been used on anyone. like someone could just have a bunch of shit already typed up n just copy n pastes it. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-09-07 23:39:15

the best thing to learn about is multies. and vocabulary. i read a dictionary in my free time when i can and try and learn at least one new word a day. yeah i see a lot of newbs here and i would say your off to a way better start then most of them. i always try and leave the opponents girl out of it or mom cause i hear it and read it day after day your bitch your mom shes mine blah blah blah its just kinda boring unless it something really clever of course. but thats shit i try and stay away from or at least not focus on. i see dudes with whole verses about that and its just boring and never good. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-09-08 16:21:27

Yeah i hear ya bout the mom thing... even though i did a mom thing. cuz yeah i do see it a lot. n thanks. I'm tryin to work on multis... i need some defitinte improvement on my vocab. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-09-08 17:06:00

yeah im still workin on the multies too haha that shit rapes my brain. looks like no ones ever gonna vote just ahve to have a tie haha Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-09-09 16:20:40

lol i guess we gonna have to. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-09-09 17:43:15

Ok. The winner had a couple solid but basic flips. I saw a comment about multis.. The intent of a multi is to keep the flow going without breaking the idea or concept. Take what youd like to say and without adding or forcing words into the sentence.. Find words that sequentially match that. Its tough at first but stay at it. Overall the battle was ok. Bretty basic and lacking in creativity. Sucks that nobody is voting. Here's a fair. Voted: BL8N / ThePreacher
Posted on: 2011-09-10 18:37:00

Fair's in.. much potential. Voted: BL8N / ThePreacher
Posted on: 2011-09-10 19:17:27

Ehhh. Yall need to read some vets battles and get a better feel for punches, flow, etc. Ive read worse, but both need work in several catagories. Did feel one barley took this.. Fvz In Voted: BL8N / ThePreacher
Posted on: 2011-09-10 20:11:45