killer187: Off the batt, you got the concepts locked down fam.. but start usin multis that make the read smoother, instead of stickin to a rhyme scheme that you may struggle to get worda that rhyme, and then end up usin words that althouh get ya point across, they end up takin away from wat it is you actually tryin to say, and thus cuttin ya punch in half.. All ya need to do fam.. Try using simpler words, just to start off wit... an maybe 3/4 syllable multis, feel me? (no homo). UNKNOWN:(?). . You alrady know lol... openin line had a nice build up to it, and you delivered as usual.. lol dwarf line has me crackin up lmfao... camel line was a dope build up to a serious punch.. haha ending line was sick.. Overall: I think i explained it enough.. Nice bout fellas, Fair is in Posted on: 2010-04-02 07:11:10

just keyed this up whoever takes it good luck lets get to the HOTLIST~LTC~ peace Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-01 18:23:16

nice drop unknown respect dude FAIR EXPLAINED VOTES no DICK RIDING BOYZ lets see this get on the hotlist homie peace Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-01 18:30:39

both were sick. I had to read both of them twice. Killer i loved all your lyrics they were all hot. not one thing bad about them. unkown i loved yours too but found them funny, which is something i personlly like to see. Scared you both fair. big ups 2 both and propz Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-01 18:32:03

DAMN.... NIGGA KILLED DAT NIGGA....DIZ A EASY VOTE RIGHT HERE HAHAHA PUNCHES OVER MULTIES MY NIG NAH MEAN...NO HATE IT IZ WHUT IT IZ...BOTH DROPS HOT THO...PEACE Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-01 18:32:55

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Posted on: 2010-04-01 18:34:07

Eth you talk in riddles man ... lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-01 18:36:49

wut!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-01 18:40:27

an awsome dont know why u even votin you faggot lol ya lost to DISS n KUSS go jump off a bridge you fuckin homo and unethical might have been to much FOR YOU but to me sounds just fine when saying it out loud but whatever respect the vote just not that faggot that OBVIOUSLY FRONTS seeing how his name is AWSOME lol not good about your shit ass hand me down rhymes ya bitch send eight and have a good one to everyone else lol ~LTC~ Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-01 18:40:41

wow both nice drop...one just was all around better wit the punches...killer had the multies kinda need fixin like uneth said...oh yeah LOL he said "ive seen racoons write better verses" ...ALMOST DIED OF LAUGHTER WHEN I HEARD THAT SHIT...but good drop fair is in...vb Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-01 18:45:05

But you won't battle me? Lol. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-01 18:48:45

tourny qualifying .... i might snipe you ... :D Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-01 18:51:27

decent vs. dope Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-01 18:57:04

lol to uneth. lol thats pretty funny TAKE THAT YOU JERK lol right on, i respect the votes boys and sanborn if you talking to me your fucking sadly mistaken the next verse i work on will be for you if thats the case lol and throw a FAIR VOTE on this battle dont just comment dude even if i lose id like to see it go to the hotlist peace Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-01 19:06:07

Damn! Nice Battle! One of you have me blocked so I cant vote! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-01 19:06:14

WOAH!! TAKE IT EASY LIL NIGGA HAHAHA.... I VOTED FAIRLY... U ACTIN LIKE I GIVE U A MUTHAFUCKIN 2 AND GIVE HOMIE A 10!!....STOP ALL DAT HATIN BULLSHIT MY NIG REAL TALK U CANT WIN ALL THE TIME U NEEDA CHECK YO SELF LIL NIGGA FO REAL..... U REALLY THINK U SUPPOSE TO GET ALL THE VOTES??? GET THA FUCK OUTTA HERE BITCH RESPECT MY VOTE PUSSY...U ACTIN LIKE UNKOWN DONT SUPPOSE TO HAVE NO VOTES AT ALL!!... NIGGA HAD A BETTER VERSE!! THE FUCK U WANT ME DO PUSSY?? CHEAT?? FUCK OUTTA HERE WITH ALL THAT HATE TALK N SHIT MAN FO REAL..I TRIED KEEP MY VOTE SECRET BY NOT SAYIN NAMES BUT I VOTED FOR UNKOWN!!!! .... NOW U CAN GET OFF MY DICK U LITTLE CUNT AND SHUT THE FUCK UP PUSSY! LOL @ DIS NIGGA KILLA187 LOLOLOL....BE EASY NIGGA FOR REAL STOP DAT HATIN SHIT I GAVE U PROPS JUZ LOOK AT MY FIORST COMMENT BITCH I SAID "BOTH DROPS HOT"... LIKE FOR REAL LIL NIGGA BE EAZY... Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-01 19:24:08

u both suck but i gotta go wit unknown Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-01 19:46:05

deleted 5-5 vote Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-01 20:01:49

Both were good, but UA's rhymes worked better Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-01 20:21:30

alright lol im just a hot head dude dont like losing but i do all the time lol anyways i aint gonna hate on ya anymore AWSOME lol shouldnt get mad over a vote anyways seeing how every other one except Jfilla has voted for me lol still would be up for an eight sometime dude if interested. an yo ABF i aint got ya blocked homie but definiteley got that stupid YUNG FUCK BLOCKED LOL fuck you ya lil bitch lol aint even worth an off the dome freestyle lol WHICH I CANT DO FOR SHIT BUT WOULD MURDER YOUR WRITTENS WITH stay the fuck out these battles lil boy this grown folks talk ~LTC~ and sorry again AWSOME my bad dude Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-01 20:29:46

yo OBVIOUS CORRECTION **everyone has voted for UNKNOWN lol pretty funny that i said that though but no not even close lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-01 20:31:15

Both where good but I liked one more then the others! NO~HATE! "YNS" "VOTE BACK ON RECENT" Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-01 20:54:25

Nice from both, closer than I thought... fair Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-01 21:05:59

both sick but one had more drops, close killer lyics sick but artist had fv drops shit not only funny but sick too.no h8 Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-01 21:08:36

UA got it Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-01 21:10:08

no hate takin boys respect the votes and po i aint a hate voter....anymore lol i got banned for that shit dude but now im just sticking wit fair votes so if ya want u can unblock me dude ill vote fair ya shit is dope.. anyways nigg let me know peace Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-01 21:12:06

if i was RHYMIN LIKE YOU i'd most likely KILL MYSELF you couldn't "Dwarf" my skills with a MILLION ELVES...that says it all Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-01 23:49:48

killer was ok i guess,but u still gotta step up your game to the next level!its obvious dat Unknown just keystyled it.. but overall,GB!noh8 Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-02 02:24:29

Hoodrich!. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-02 02:45:21

NOT ONE OF UNKNOWNS BETTA VERSES BUT ENUFF FOR THE SNIPE AND WIN Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-02 07:40:18

killer came pretty dope and original, UA came with as much as he needed. good battle tho... Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-02 08:58:55

nice Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-02 09:15:38

some1 send me 8 and get ate Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-02 13:07:25

wen i read u cant dwarf my skills with amillion elves i was like wtf Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-02 13:27:04

one sided. killer: work on making your structure more readable and less decorated firstly. secondly, you need to be sure that your mulites match and that will help your flow. UA: lol OVERALL...would say "FVC Bitch"...but not so sure i'm in the club anymore lol Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-02 18:08:16

gb Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-02 19:05:47

fv vb Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-02 19:51:26

nice battle killa...vote back on my battle vs _JINX_ Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-02 21:15:19

Thesis: line for line i was intrigued with UA Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-02 21:20:41

fv Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-02 21:37:35

nice verses from both but one came just a lil harder Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-02 23:55:53

lol Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-03 04:52:19

MID 7 TO MID 8 FOR ME, THE MILLION ELVES LINE WAS SICK AND THE HOT LINES PART WAS DOPE TOO, NO H8 FV VB Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-03 09:15:05

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Posted on: 2010-04-03 09:16:11

take a CHACE WITH YA SANITY droppin the WACKEST OF RAPS AS HE thinks there's a CHANCE HE CAN HANDLE ME with basic skills and ACTUAL FAGGITRY when you couldn't "Step To This Heat" with the FLATS OF A CAMELS FEET/ i bet this homo fell and hit every BRANCH OF THE FAGGIT TREE........ niceeeeeeee!!!!! too bad one of you blokked me. fags lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-03 11:02:52

yo nice battle Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-03 12:03:14

fair dropped....vote it back.... Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-03 13:47:02

both hot FV is in Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-03 13:52:17

fv Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-03 15:42:56

fv. no h8 Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-03 18:33:38

i mean this was close, but if ya add the catz up and better all round drop .. gotta keep it concealed .. n the fair is in lo ta mid 9'z been drop .... Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-03 21:15:31

tight...vb fair on mine vs commandoxxx got h8 votes...peace no h8 Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-03 22:33:15

wtf was that Killer? you fuckin suck Noob Amityvilles got more skills then you ;) Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-04 04:05:23

both wuz good but 1 edged it no h8 fv VB Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-04 06:36:57

fv...killer is garbage...ez vote Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-04 11:54:42

good shit Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-04 12:07:34

lmfao damn good fucking battle. Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-04 14:00:15

Nice battle Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-04 14:10:37

^^^ha ha ... its crazy where the rhyme schemes on a keystyle take you some times ... lmao Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-04-04 17:13:21

both were gud, though one was more complex, and one was real funny Voted: killer187 / UNKNOWN ARTIST
Posted on: 2010-04-04 17:44:39