EXPO!! 4th line.. the big hacksaws that if you swing around they wobble! the 'student/oddgod line'.. cuz i lost to studend and he clowned me for it, but then i beat odd god.. who he lost 2.. and the last line, cuz he used to be leader.. and everyone thinks hes better then meee (Y)... but anyways... Make it fire jack.. hotlissssssst.. CLASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SSSSSSSICK! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-22 05:55:03

Sooo fucking CLASSICK!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-22 07:24:27

it was ight Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-22 07:25:47

fv no h8 Voted: FiNALWoRD /
Posted on: 2010-03-22 07:45:37

OK....Final came w/ some cool concepts and multi's hit for the most part...just a solid verse, i think the only part missing was a solid closer that wrapped it up...Jack came nice...wordplay was impressive and personals added to your verse....Closer was really hot building up but the punch was ehh...alright. Droppin a FV from the FVC...fair is in, Voted: FiNALWoRD /
Posted on: 2010-03-22 08:52:35

keep it up Jack-O- Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-22 12:42:07

5-5... 4-7... the fucks going on??? 8-8 at the very LEAST! Hahhahaha! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-22 12:52:53

Lets get those 2 votes deleted!.. no 5-5 either Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-22 14:12:37

like 'bic-lighters' i 'spit-fire' so i can TASTE ASH OCK aint a freind-of-son spits make'm drift from '10-to-1' b it AINT BLAST OFFS 'death ya catch' like a GREAT PASS CAUGHT 'cold raps/wraps' tha MAKE JACK FROST run-ya-lips ya 'mug-u'l-chip' cuz i BREAK GLASS JAWS MAKE JACK FALL n ock'll wobble like when you SHAKE HACK SAWS!- your multi skemes are dope dude, the punches worked but nothing special here.ya leaving? some-reason? its cuz 'easier' and 'Conveinent' like a LAID BACK BRAUD im heat, but i ISNT A COOKER Ugh!-ya-flow dog im up-ya-knows/nose but not PICKING A BOOGER hooo your stale flow so MIX IT WIT SUGAR but dis cats-soft so we all no 'Jack-, Off' soo "PIMP HIM A HOOKER" u aint high or HIT SPLIFFS YA ROOK 'HERB' u arent-crap my 'bars-,crack' like dey inPRISONED A PUSHER i feel like youre trying to incorporate too many punches in this line, i liked the hooker line but the bars crack line was hella played.-LAUGHING ALOT dis lame-herb justs wants his Name-heard!yup, so hes MASKING A PLOT! so it explains why you don't hit-groins or be SMASHIN DA TWAT so i guess 'kids toys' da only way JACK IN DA BOX, He be give confessions so 'directions' aint the only thing he ASKING A COP- you have what not alotta dudes have, which is good wording, the punches just arnt hitting hard, and the concepts arnt the best here.-to 'oddgod?' HE WHACKISH n i no u-is gunna clown 4 da L to student, but at LEAST i BEAT THAT PRICK 'behind u in skill?" den LEAN BACK QUICK put-in-a-booth like women-abuse how u get BEAT FAST TRICK i forgot your retirin,i dont wanna BE LAST PICK juz cuz ur 'careers on the crapper' don't MEAN JACK SHIT!- this was dope to me, the whole thing was dope, wording everything, good shit.. no pun intended lol dont Denie-it ur face look like a Pirates in a TREASURELESS SEA 4 even MENTIONIN THEE! think you so good like u a LEGEND WIT HEAT but i RECKON i aint SECOND TA HE! saying u said yu'd beat me since i ENTERED DIS TEAM, but your just 'capo now' so bein BETTA, NEVA, BEST YA EVA BE is LEVEL WIT ME! - meeh, could have thought of a better finish here. overall i thought the verse had dope multis, dope skemes, decent transitions and mediocre punches, granted the punches where there in bunches, they didnt hit too hard for the most part. JACKO-This guy's SILLY AND STUPID, You need to re-check your record because you didn't REALLY BEAT STUDENT! You just gripped his cock... And REALLY "BEAT" STUDENT!! - i liked this alot, simple yet flipped and actually made me laugh here, nice.Now have a PEEK AT MY GUAGE! I'm Serving You Harm when I SQUEEZE, AND I AIM, So Working A Farm is the only time Final 'BEYOND THE RANGE!!'- could have been flipped better but a very solid punch.Ok Final, You look like a bruise, If it grew ARMS AND LEGS! Plus you should be LOCKED AWAY, Cause you always talk about how you HARM THE GAYS... But, As far as I know it's against the LAW TO RAPE!!- wasnt feeling the punch, liked the buildup and thought i was gonna get somthing dope here lol then i s like awwwww shucks.waGo ahead, FRONT LIKE YOU'RE BRASH, Or you're STUNTIN WITH CRACK! Check the pic... He's the ONE IN THE BACK, Looking at his friend like he wants to BUST IN HIS ASS with a THRUST AND A SMACK!- solid personal.He's dark as NIGHT, AND SHEESH cut the LIGHTS AND SEE that all that SHINES IT SEEMS are his EYES AND TEETH!! You're VIOLENT? PLEEAAASSEEEE, Then why do you CRY TO ME about how you can't WRITE OR FREE? Asked for advice, Couldn't get the hang. Next thing you know... He was asking ME to TYPE FOR ME!! No paper, But this GUY'LL CREASE! My Flow's Sick though, LIKE 'DA SEAS!!' - i was diggin the about his skin color, and the flow was real smooth here, no spectacular punch or anything here.You'll get your bars soon!" FINAL RANTS, AND HE RAVES! Then I checked my inbox... And I'm disappointed, His lines are more played than FINAL FANTASY GAMES!!- meeh, wasnt feelin this.What you've WRITTEN'S A FARCE, And you're WISHIN YOU'RE SMART! But, Every INCH OF YOUR BARS were BITCH FROM THE START! So, I won't talk about how I could shoot one QUICK THROUGH YOUR HEART... I shouldn't HIT YOU THAT HARD! But if we ever step in the ring, or GET IN A SPAR? It's obvious "Dis Man'll" PICK YOU APART!!!//- buildup everything was nice, diggin the wordplay.- overall you started off dope, then fell off towards the middle, granted you had personals but they could have been flipped or somthing... though decision because one brought better skemes and the other had a few harder hitting punches... reading again.. ait so the decision is in low to mid here, very good reads on both parts, always fair. peace Voted: FiNALWoRD /
Posted on: 2010-03-22 17:44:35

zzz's on a hot ass battle Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-23 14:39:33

one had a better flow and better punches. FV. Voted: FiNALWoRD /
Posted on: 2010-03-23 19:41:49

Wow.. very good read.. Both came hard in some areeas but had them weak spots.. One Came with that extra fire though.. Voted. Voted: FiNALWoRD /
Posted on: 2010-03-24 03:41:16

hard 2 tell this one pretty close but im my opinion jack o edged this battles FV is in VBF on battle wit da kid cancer madverbs and macdaddysmith peace out Voted: FiNALWoRD /
Posted on: 2010-03-24 09:59:27

df?... its still classick Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-24 11:34:13

i think both were good Voted: FiNALWoRD /
Posted on: 2010-03-24 16:50:54

What the god dayum fuck? ^^ Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-24 22:15:19

both were aight one was just hitting harder for me the fairs in high to low Voted: FiNALWoRD /
Posted on: 2010-03-25 02:25:01