expos:N these“slugs might just have a blast”and“have fun”in order to SEE IF“TIME FLIES”!!!.. - have a blast= have fun, from the saying ''time flies when your having fun'' - slugs making time fly.. // he'd be Bruce Willis 3,and “DIE WITH A VENGENCE”!.. - die hard 3: with a vengence // the“nina”discovers ya“waves”like CHRISTOPHER COLUMBUS!!!!!! - nina= nine, also one of christopher columbus's ships // rest is simple unless you ride a short ass yellow cheesewagon to one of those schools and have wheel-chair ramps all over the place... holla! (: Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-19 07:16:38

history has been made bitches. gb (: Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-19 07:19:45

Yessir, Good Battle ! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-19 07:20:43

how come every time i battle i get called a hoe lately? :( Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-19 07:22:35

LOL ! No Idea Haha (Probz Coz It Flows Better Dw :P) Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-19 07:23:24

OHH GEEBUS TO FUCKEN HEAD SPINING ILL VOTE LATER!! U BOTH SUCK :P Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-19 07:32:56

ILL RIP YALL BOTH LIKE A KIT-KAT ON A STICK SEND ME 8 or DONT IF YAH SCARED!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-19 07:50:10

LMFAOOOOOO!!! THiS NiGGLETS COOCOO FOR COCOA PUFFS.. ORTHADOX vs. RECTOM QUEEN COMiNG SOON TO A BEEF CiNEMA NEAR YOU;) Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-19 09:06:06

fv no h8 gb Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-19 09:21:47

ok expo!HE'S A NINE?RIIIGHT..i'll“a utograph bullets”just so HE IS SIGNED RIGHT..in THE CHEEK BOUT FIVE TIMES! he dont SEEM TO SHINE LIKE if his '86 Volvo BLINKERS SNIPED,TWICE!..N these“slugs might just have a blast”and“have fun”in order to SEE IF“TIME FLIES”!!!..{ this wuz jus DAMN! FUCKS A POOR VICTIM,if he wants“liberty” then imma CLUTCH THE TORCH,LISTEN!what im sparkin' uh stain ya LUGZ N YOUR DENIMS and since its “TIME TO EAT”he's dinner..so imma SHOVE THE FORK IN 'EM!!{ mAD shit! OR-THA-DOX ANOTHA'-WHORE-That-S UX'S ! SEE-HER ("him") ON-NUTS ! GOES-FOR-GUYS-Who-BU TT-FUCKS For ON-GOING-MONTHS ! DONE-OWNING-CUNTS nice PUNCHED-OUT-YA-LIGHT S Have Ya SPINNING-AROUND Like You're A "BALLERINA" CRUSHED-YA-BITES By Mak'en You ADMIT-You've-Been-"W INNING" Claiming You Got CROWNED Because You've Been Sucking Dick/Gett'en Beat Like "RHIANNA" After You've Been Lyrically-Killed Your "Riders" Will Ask: "HAVE-YOU-SEEN-HU' (Her) !?"//CRUSHED-THIS-HO E You're "Toilet Paper To Me" FLUSHED-FIRST-SO.. I'm The "Shit" That Went THROUGH ! You The "Stain" That Needs Ta' Be Cleaned Up FOO' ! (haha)//Shoot Till Your Go'en RED-LIKE-MATCH-STICK S So "Old" LIKE-ANTIQUES BE-SO-SICK That I'll Have Ya "SCRIPTS" RIPPED-TO-BITS Your "Nursery-Rhymes" SMOK'D-LIKE-YA-FOLKS //My BARS-HEAVY-LIKE-CONC RETE I-CAME-TA'-EAT ! antoha nice drop! fv is in low 10 to low 10 cuz i seen betta from both! no h8 expo is in aswell Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-19 09:39:10

both did their thing but had betta punchez no h8. fv VB Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-19 09:54:06

fv no hate vb Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-19 09:57:11

sick shit...vote it bak 1 Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-19 10:30:09

Nice shit deliverd on Both SIdez!!!!.....VOTE CONCEALED!!!! Fair Voter Clubs!!!! Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-19 12:07:32

tru Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-19 15:07:59

yo honestly I got mad respect for both of you, but K.O. got this. FV. Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-19 16:50:56

Wow awesome battle :) Hard pick.. REALLY HARD PICK.. but ima have to go with the latter.. Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-19 20:22:32

both were aight one was more consistent and had better flow wit a few punches being a tad played the other just had way too much filler and needs to up there flow and punches along wit there multis a lil bit overall the fair is in Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-19 21:37:06

Ill return with the fair. Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-20 10:21:47

No h8 Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-20 13:34:13

Fair one...high-high....f vc Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-20 20:38:54

Orthadox, I'm a little split on how good your verse was. Some of it was pretty dope, but I also didn't like other parts of it. YOur ideas are sort of dope, but you sort of had too many average lines. I wasn't crazy about the way it was structured, more a personal preference, but there was certainly nothing wrong w/the flow....I'm like 50-50 between an eight and a nine.. Time to eat like..it was okay. But I wasnt' crazy about much of it. The flow was choppy, broken, and just didn't work. It needs to be cleaned up badly. Um, the ideas I wasn't crazy about, but I was able to follow it, and rhyming, although broken was managable. It's not really a contest to me. Perhaps I"m being generous here.... Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-20 20:39:55

gud battle butcheck my battles out Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-20 23:07:56

pretty dope,.. Orthadox came nicely ..the concepts were nasty and nicely executed threw the punches... consistent too... eat came nicely too but didn't bring as much hype or complexity Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-20 23:08:32

I rocked the 86' volvo for many years, and my blinkers were usually out so lol at that Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-20 23:22:41

very close, I read em both twice, one had better multis, one edged the punches though, both high 9's Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-20 23:26:54

WOW simply raw.... fv as always Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-21 00:21:22

real talk both were sick but one edged in my opinion FV is in VBF on battles an check cyphers LB SCHOOL DISS an "THE KILLER VS FLIP" peace Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-21 00:50:31

clash of the titans Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-21 04:11:46

Good Battle Both...0rthadox: Your opener didn't hit hard, I understand it, just, the concept is simple, the punch was played, and frankly, the multies were soo fucked up that the flow was choppy, like shit, I read it 4 times and I still don't understand the fucking flow. Second line made no sense, "Time ISN'T Defective", is saying that he isn't broken, and you made the metaphoric reference to an alarm clock, I kinda understand the punch, but, unless it was a typo, it's not a good line at all, because it fucks up the flow, the syllable count, Concept, Punchline, and if it is a typo, still not a good line, because the punch is weak, Concept is less then decent, and the flow is fucked up. Third line, not much can be said, it's not bad, but it's less then decent, the concept is sick, but the execution into a punch is shit, the punch sucks, the flow sucks, and the multies suck, once again, the line is too fucking basic, Fourth line, too fucking basic, I get your punches, and thats the problem, your putting not enough punch in your concepts and punches, and focusing more on your multies, but it's fucked up, because usually multies help your flow, but all your line except for this one have severely fucked up flow, it's not entertaining to read when someone can't fucking flow too it. Fifth line, kinda played, but overall, your best line so far, perfect multies and flow, nice concept and decent punch, and not AS fucking basic as the rest, sixth line was good, not as good as your last line, but still good, right away, I noticed something...you started like...this dude uh get HOGTIED,i FEED EM BURNERS..he be on FOX FIVE LEAKIN WORSER ... which has a good rhyme scheme going, good flow, then you fuck it all up, how? Changing the fucking rhyme scheme ... SHOTS FLY,MOMS CRY ... why the fuck? Anyways, the pucnh wasn't really there, saying , and the concept was good, could've been worded alot better, saying your gonna kill him, isn't a punch, last line, has to be a filler, or else I lose ALL respect for you, you should NEVER put fillers in your verse, because 99% of the time, it will do nothing but bring your verse down, not a good line at all, no punch, weak concept, shit multies, shit flow....Overall: Low 7, your main problem is that your too basic, and if your too basic, then the reader (me) feels retarded reading it and the punches seem duller and (sometimes) the flow is choppier, because too be basic, you either have to be REALLY dumb, or you have to try to be basic, which means wording it so it doesn't work with the flow, half way through you did get your flow on track, but still, nothing special. .................... Time: Bland opener, what I mean by that, is that it wasn't intresting, it was a decent punch, okay flow, nothing else is really worth mentioning, and thats kinda sad, second line, I get it, but calling someone ugly, is probably the most played punch in the history of my exsistence on this site(I don't wanna go any farther, because I have only been here 3 years, lol) plus the line made no sense, how can Shampoo be afraid of Tattoos??? Third line, made no sense, I was absolutly lost, it's not complex though, it's just, awkward, firstly, the flow is terrible, all over the place, you'll be going into really good flow, then you'll make a transaction to a different flow, mid-line, like what the fuck dude? Secondly, the punch was terrible, NEVER strech a line, and give it a terrible punch, it's just a dissapointment, because the reader waits all that time, expecting a good punch, because of a long set-up, then BLAM! Shitty ass punch. Thirdly, Worse concept ever, 'nuff said, like shiiit, Fourth line, Shit flow, weak punch, stupid concept, and weak multies, I really despised this line, I really didn't like it, not entertaining at all too, and I'm not one of those muhfuckas' who think reading in general is boring, Fifth line, probably your best line, no hate, but it's true, good punch, on-point multies, decent concept, and good flow, it'll take a miracle for you too top it, Sixth line, YOU FUCKING SWITCHED THE RHYMESCHEME?? Okay, that is one thing you NEVER wanna do, if you switch the rhyme scheme mid-line, at least make something there rhyme with it, don't just insert it w/ a different rhyme scheme as the rest, and give it nothing to rhyme with, it fucks up the flow so badly, you can't even fucking imagine. Seventh line was gayyy, "I'll CUM-On-YAH-MEAT".... ..uhmmm, Dick on Dick? Wtf? It's "insulting" yourself saying your gay, and the reason I put insulting in quotation marks is because, now-a-days, calling someone gay in a rap battle, is like saying your gonna kill 'em orrr, calling them ugly, even if it's a perfect line, it will suck 100% of the time...Final line, sucks, the concept isn't good, Checkmate isn't when you get all the peices, it's when the king can't move without being killed, so that fucked it up, the execution was terrible, (Yeah, terrible execution for a terrible concept, what can you get?)...soo yeah, Overall: VERY low 6, nothing special, it seems like your not focusing on your rap, or your not trying hard enough, or, trying too hard, because I did see those bursts of nice multies, but then failing to make those into good lines............... ..Battle Overall: 7-6, One focused to much on multies/ flow, the other, didn't seem to really focus at all. Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-21 10:42:55

*looks at votes*, I'm too harsh. :S Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-21 10:44:12

Compexity n clever punches took this.fv's concealed.return it..im blocked 9-8 ortha.no h8 Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-03-21 10:55:11

both sick idk how to even pick a winner Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-21 13:44:00

fv Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-21 21:18:49

fv.one was just more consistant.noh8 Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-21 21:21:34

fv Voted: 0RTHAD0X / Time To Eat
Posted on: 2010-03-22 01:09:49