nice rhyme scheme Aryze. but ya punhes were either aight or mehh! or shit like is that tha punchline!. Shidd KOS went a lil to hard on'em in my book, but this is just my vote! my fair one is!. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-16 13:05:16

Material is def. gettin better against Sparta but he still is the KING. No h8. GooD BaTTLe. Stay up. 1 Revival of UE COMING SOON! Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-16 13:32:09

aryze was good but sparta nailed it with punches again.lol vb f Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-16 13:42:29

Fair Voters Club : IIght KOS did Ya Thing Again Pretty Flawless, Aryze You Was Nearly Flawless As Well But Your Punches And Set Up Lacked That WOW factor fv Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-16 13:46:06

"CHUCKIN" shouldn't be capitalized. That's a typo and not part of the multi. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-16 14:04:14

take a fuckin seat!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-16 14:06:36

Take A Seat Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-16 16:17:21

Shit was good.. i thought Aryze had it.. voted Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 00:04:53

lol Aryze was all multies for the first 3/4's , i felt nothign hit hard ... started to get Decent the ending though ... i liked that "'n iuno bout da CLAIMS BOUTCHA WEBSITE but certain its da SAME FA YER SEX LIFE . donno if it exist but its online!" ..... line , i lol'd .... KOS came consistant with the punches throughout .... & the wordplays .... he's almost a 9 IMO .... Fair vote .... i could Shit you out & Your joke's Still couldn't get "Aryze outta me" :eek: Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 02:08:32

Good Battle, I'll Leave A FVC Expo Tommorow. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 02:09:05

I got this 9-8 Sparta. Sparta's punches were hitting harder although Aryze did have a couple good ones in there. Aryze was pretty good with the multis but Sparta's verse was just better over all. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 02:54:25

One hit harder with punches but both had some good shit in there. Sparta: I'm CRUEL AS SOMETHIN HELLISH IN BOUTS, and Aryze? this NOOB'LL SUFFER MELANIN DROUGHTS when I "Tear his Flesh Off" and PULL HIS FUCKIN SKELETON OUT -Very sick line. I think this is what won me over. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 02:59:41

FVC: Aryze, When you rap bro, Try not to focus on how many words you can rhyme and make sense, but how many words you can rhyme that hit hard. I did like how you played off of his usual style talking about "using a spear tip..that is stupid" yada yada, that line was pretty cool. Sparta, I loved how in the beginning..."tryna "Clown my Style" but it won't be "FUNNY WHEN IT BEATS YOU"!!"..That was dope how you came back off what he said haha. You know what the deal is, the usual horrorcore shit and your multies, vocabulary, punches, personals, all that shit was on point in this battle. Dime Piece right here. Fair one has been dropped, please respect and return it. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 04:44:05

whoooa. both my favorite lines have been quoted previously, and the competition is definitely getting better, but i gotta give it to one by a slight margin.. FV Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 04:45:10

high to low Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 09:49:31

both deserve some mad props. Aryze..reading your verse, i knew this was going to be a sick battle..you had consistant punches, and stable flo, and an overall good verse..but if there was an 11 in the ranking box id hand it to KOS...sometimes i just dont know how you keep coming with these genius verses..its amazing..KOS had everything and more..very sick battle,...respect to both..fv Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 09:57:17

chea Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 16:52:58

Fair Voters Club: This is a hot ass battle.. for real.. Droppin the fairs!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 17:57:10

u both did good but aryze did better ...sorry Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 19:17:03

fv Voted: Aryze / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-17 19:21:31

I'm CRUEL AS SOMETHIN HELLISH IN BOUTS, and Aryze? this NOOB'LL SUFFER MELANIN DROUGHTS when I "Tear his Flesh Off" and PULL HIS FUCKIN SKELETON OUT!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 20:17:41

^^ that bar killed it, it was juss too raw, sparta came through as usually, good spit aryze though, no hate , fair , respect it Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 20:18:29

i..mean..after..all. .he..is..the..''king ''..of..sparta...... ..what..did..you..ex pect Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 20:36:42

I think KoS and I fundamentally disagree on battle theory. To be quite honest, I preferred Aryze's style much, much more. Rhyme schemes that are kept for a longer time, more of a story-like element, I dig it. Aryze, you would have gotten my vote. I say would have because of the excessive use of slant rhyme in your verse. "HAVENT IMPROVED YET" is in the same scheme as "RANKED TO SUZUKIS". I mean, come on. The vowel sounds of the first stressed and the last unstressed syllables just do NOT match. At all. You were close to beating him in my opinion. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 21:01:33

sparta whooped his ass Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-17 22:27:43

iight sparta came a lil harder no h8 dudes good battle Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-18 09:41:35

fv Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-18 11:21:32

cool Voted: Aryze / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-18 12:27:00

fv Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-18 12:31:27

NEVA H8 GB Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-18 18:04:10

fv no h8 close 1 Voted: Aryze / KingofSparta
Posted on: 2009-07-18 18:55:07

gb Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-18 20:41:16

FVC Expo: Aryze- yer aint eXACTLY DA RUDEST, BRAGGIN IS USELESS! huh? what'cha CRACKIN EM SKULLS WIT??? an axe, a sword, a spear? DAT SHIT IS STUPID sad part is he actually thinks DAT SHITS DA'COOLEST. Okay, Liked How You Attacked His Horrorcore Style But It Was Basic Still. so talkin bout da LANGUAGE HE USES? shakespeares' HAMLET'LL SUIT IT thinkin its BANGIN N RUTHLESS, but FAGGOT DA TRUTH IS you HAVENT IMPROVED YET eva since shaq was ACTIN IN MOVIES, dumb move he made? dats also how yer RAPPIN' IS TO ME Since You Mentioned Shakespeares Languange I Expected More Complex Rhymes Then That. And That Punchlines Old-Dated. me to u? s'like how ferrari's RANKED TO SUZIKIS yer wackness inspired dis verse, THANKS TO U TRULY. SNAP? NOW U MOODY? haha. he ain even got an adams "apple" but dis CATS SOUNDIN' "FRUITY" Okay Punches, Multies Were A Little But Off. yer whole star trek collection got ALL'A DEM THINGS DONT'CHA? his rooms prolly fulla LAWD'OF DA RINGS POSTAS or wait! actually ALL OF N'SYNC POSTAS!! Get With The Times Really, I'm Sorry No Hate But Outdated Material. Maybe Hanna Montana Or Something Like That. ha! AWW, GET DA HINT, POSER? somebody teach this LAME HOW'TA TEXT RITE 'n iuno bout da CLAIMS BOUTCHA WEBSITE but certain its da SAME FA YER SEX LIFE . donno if it exist but its online! Since I Know He Had A Website This Didn't Work To Me But I Could See How It'd Be A Mediocore Punchline. BOZO WID'IS SHIT raps a NONO YER DIMWIT! GO PRO? YER WISH KID! the crowd be like "please, please.. NO MO OF DIS BITCH!!!" .. him got skills? same as expectin em HOBOS TO B RICH or expectin em SLOW-MO'S TO B QUICK. Had An Okay Concept Expected More. Just Very Basic Decorated Lines, No Hate. hes a FUCKIN FAG YO, JUST BET! coz he only be "as slick" as dem TONGUES IN CRACKHOLES 'N YES he "couldn't stay up" like a FUCKIN' AFRO THATS WET...! Eh, Okay Line. he GEEK-ISH? PROBABLY, DUH! yer punches aiiite but "played doe" oh, weren't you into GREEK PHIL-OSOPHY, HUH?! PEEP HIS FALLACY, BRUHS he'ont do cheques or em doughs but erytime he "get on his toes" its coz HE'S A BALLER? .... RINA?! 'n we can also LABEL FOLK da "desert sand" coz hes close to bein' a CAMEL TOE. I Didn't Really Get This One, Would Of Liked An Expo Of Your Own To Clarrify This Out. jus cut the BABBLE YO dont LIE ABOUT IT u read "darwin's survival of da fittest" 'n proceeded to puttin on da "TIGHTEST OUTFIT!!" Finisher Was Okay, Overall Your Verse Was A Decorated Basic/Mediocore Verse That Lacked Structure, Better Updated Punchlines, Multies Were Okay, And Just Everything. You Should Work On All Of This. KingOfSparta- Who the FUCK IS ARYZE? It's JUST A DISGUISE wrapped with BUNCHES OF LIES, tryna "See if there's Dirt on Sparta" when I'm "CHUCKIN DUST IN HIS EYES"!! Dope Punchline. Good Concept And It All Connected Together. I'm MONEY TO THIS WEAK DUDE using CUNNING TO DEFEAT FOOLS tryna "Clown my Style" but it won't be "FUNNY WHEN IT BEATS YOU"!! A Little Bit Played But Still Good. Cuz I'm Violent! I'm CRUEL AS SOMETHIN HELLISH IN BOUTS, and Aryze? this NOOB'LL SUFFER MELANIN DROUGHTS when I "Tear his Flesh Off" and PULL HIS FUCKIN SKELETON OUT!! Skin Concept/Punchline Was F'ing Dope. I'm DUMPIN THIS LAME cuz he lacks the PUNCH IN HIS GAME and only "Keys an A" when he types the *FRONT OF HIS NAME Good Line Right Here, I Would've Done Something A Little Different For The First Part Though. I DEFINED THE SOUL BENDERS` and `LIKE RETIRED GOAL TENDERS` you should get "FAR FROM THE NET" cuz ya HARD TO RESPECT but I'll have you "Pipe Down" when I stab a "SHARD THROUGH YOUR NECK Good Line Liked The Double Punchlines On This One And Multies On Point. That's just PART OF THIS TEXT since you're HARDLY A VET but if you SPAR WITH THE BEST? I'll show you're "Killin Beats" when I expose ya "HEART ON YA CHEST"!! Nice Again But This One Would Of Sounded Better In Audio. You'll ASK TO DROP THE FAIRS as I GRASP TO STOP YOUR AIR, bitch you couldn't "Roll on Boards" if you "SAT IN ROCKING CHAIRS Nice, Liked The Internet Concept. Seemed Kinda Shady Since It Said Boards But I Got It And I Researched It So I Wasn't Bitten. I BRAWL TO BEAT THIS GUY till he BAWLS AND WEEPS HIS EYES cuz this Battle's like "Survivor" - I'm "ALWAYS EATIN (RYZE)"!!(rice) Lol ! I Liked This Line & The Concept. So what if I'm CHOOSIN THE AXE? Its YOU THAT IS WACK! I'll `CHOKE AND RATTLE YOU 'RYZE` why'd you `POST THE BATTLE *TWO TIMES*`? Well the TRUEST OF FACTS is that I Scared ya *Half to Death* *Twice* - you should be *DOIN THE MATH*!! This Line Was Good Even I Didn't See The First One. This FRUIT IS JUST ASS only fills his "LOOMS WITH SOME TRACKS" I'm leavin WOUNDS IN HIS BACK, said your "Delivery is Sharp"? Yeah, with your "WOMB GETTIN STABBED"!! Dope Again, Like The Consistancy Of Good Punchlines Throughout Your Verses. I SEVER CHILDREN'S SPINES cuz I'm the BETTER KILLIN KIND who'll "Beat you the Fuck Down" till you "NEVER WILL *ARYZE*"!!~ ..R.I.P.. Good Finisher, Overall Good Verse I Liked The Structure, Consistant Punchlines And Multies Were On Point. No Hate To Both, Voted Fair With Unbiased Judgement. -TheStudent Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-18 21:19:24

SICK Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-18 23:27:27

you sux Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-19 04:41:36

GBNH Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-19 10:32:31

Pretty good battle Both vote it back Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-19 12:30:01

Man KOS is insane. The "Funny when it beats you" line was crazy. Aryze had some good stuff but like has been previously said, just lacked that WOW factor. FV guys. Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-07-19 13:02:29

KingofSparta Voted For Himself So He Gets Auto-Loss. -Student Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-10-14 00:31:58