KEEP DIS SHIT FAIR....and give some feedback....on tha lines.....'BaM' Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-04-05 18:52:35

one was a bit too basic with the rhyme scheme, pretty decent horrorcore shit but you need to up ya game in alot of areas......other one make sure you don't put too much emphasis on the rhymin cause it will take away from content, pretty straight just work on bringin harder hittin punches.......droppe d a fair folks return one Voted: HIGHxVOLTAGE / GrEaT BaMbInO
Posted on: 2009-04-05 19:00:45

i'm crazy i'll kill innocent people like tha usa did to afganistan//run ya ass over like u.s soldiers did to kids in tha sand//........i feel on that shit...much respect to both...but highxvoltage you gotta work on structure just a little advice theres alwayz room to learn more i'm new to tha text side of letsbeef and i'm learning to so don't take this as hate...just friendly advice..keep it up..peace to both of you...... Comment Only
Posted on: 2009-04-05 19:11:52

you gone need 'hope-fa-self' and i'll have you 'close-ta-death' like tha VERGE OF DYING i don't fuck wit 'queer-guyz' and you'll notice 'clear-skies' like BIRDS ARE FLYING(heaven talk...you dead) who dis NERD KEEP EYING??? wat you got a 'waist-purse(fanny pack' my text hitcha 'face-first' like tha CURVE WHEN SLIDING(eww) and you aint 'part-of-g's' but i'll 'slit-ya-arteries' like NERVES DIVIDING(get it...think) and you bust jawz!!! plzz!!! dis ain't a 'physical-mission' but dis 'critical-condition' like twisting HERB WHEN DRIVING(who damn!!!)!!!! and BaM 'bust-jawz-and-twist -chinz' and 'crush-all-and-shit- wins' cause ya RATING A BOOZER and why you DATING A LOOSER!! really!!! and you don't 'buck-white' but ya girl say yall 'fuck-fight' like MATING A BRUISER(damn dats hott!!!) and ya "behind me" like CHASING A CRUISER(a car)---okay you str8 from the SEWER stink ass nigga clean your SELF take a SHOWER and actually wash your SCALP you got so much DANDRIFT looks like you got LICE its like you got HANDID a full disease in 1 NITE but i gota solution that will destroy you n them bugs in one TRY its when i rip the skin off your DOME pull it from your chin to the back of ya SKULL an take a machette to slice thru your THROAT takin that head off your SHOULDERS like im the headless horse man smellin the flesh i can sense that ODOR im a engine nigga kinda like the hemi MOTOR your the broke down piece of shit wit no ROADOR so your ASS wont LAST im crazy ill kill innocent people like the USA did to AFGANISTAN run ya ass over like US soliders did to kids in the SAND that war was bullshit like you cuz the army was invading their LAND HIGH You Did not really impress me to much but had like one good line BAM You had several good lines but a bit played but all around you came nicer my vote is fair Vote It Back ~One~ Voted: HIGHxVOLTAGE / GrEaT BaMbInO
Posted on: 2009-04-05 19:23:26

fv is in, return it Voted: HIGHxVOLTAGE / GrEaT BaMbInO
Posted on: 2009-04-05 19:28:36

horrible by high voltage took it Voted: HIGHxVOLTAGE / GrEaT BaMbInO
Posted on: 2009-04-05 19:54:39

GB got this one here... better punches and multis.. HV didnt have multis and his rhymes and flow seemed outta place.. no flow at all.. no hate yawl... GB 8-6.. VB!!! Voted: HIGHxVOLTAGE / GrEaT BaMbInO
Posted on: 2009-04-05 20:17:44

fv's in vb dair folks.. Voted: HIGHxVOLTAGE / GrEaT BaMbInO
Posted on: 2009-04-05 20:26:35

the one wit interconnectin MULTIS inside multis rhyme scheme to set up some decent punches ,, def knocked their opponent out for the win, and the winner also had fresher lines and better structure!!NICE SHIT no hate ...F air as hell V ote... VB Voted: HIGHxVOLTAGE / GrEaT BaMbInO
Posted on: 2009-04-05 20:30:12

good battle Voted: HIGHxVOLTAGE / GrEaT BaMbInO
Posted on: 2009-04-05 22:14:35

pretty clear.... take easy Voted: HIGHxVOLTAGE / GrEaT BaMbInO
Posted on: 2009-04-08 17:51:17