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Originally Posted by Itz Killz
that shit huff yo...
lol...
obviously a solid and well put together concept..only thing maybe is to emphasize that you are REITERATING that he aint clappin nothing. if the reader doesnt get that...it may seem like you are just saying it twice....although i get that you are emphasizing shit...maybe like, "..HAPPY MEAL!!...once again dont SAY YOU.."
small shit i know lol...but it could help
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Nah thanks for real its easy to forget lil bits of wording that polishes it off.