I'll critique your music.
 

Yeah drop links to music. I'm not going to vote on battles but I will check out some songs and give a slightly harsh critiques of em.

Beat i cooked up a while ago. The harsher the better lol

https://www.letsbeef.com/forums/proddetail.php?prod=859014-Rule-217
Last song i made, 8 years ago now (jesus).

Holla!

I don't like the sounds you are using in general they have a real midi feel like that snare sounds weird and so does the organ/piano

At 1:20 day turns to night an this shit actually becomes fire. I really do dig the rest of the beat and I wasn't expecting that at all from the start.

You can make dope beats. I don't like the kits and instruments you are using much. I skimmed through your other beats and that was generally what I felt on all of them. Dope beats maybe it's because you are using more piano's and organs and I like horns and woods more. The organ sounds inorganic and it's the same in the Enough for Me song which was also really dope but had a specific instrument I didn't like. Same with Sister tbh lmao wtf are those organs made from? Sounds like terminator babies crying or something.

@Phil Banks

@BizzyOne track :high:

I like this. This guy could probably give me tips on mixing and shit this sounds clean as fuck. Feel like I already commented on this somewhere though.

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lmao i'm literally the only comment on that song i'll give it another listen see how I feel 8 years later.

Appreciate it bro! Lmao at the organs etc.. they're some violins that come with Fl studio

yeah i re-uploaded lol

this is a real good initiative tbh.

Don't wanna drop here but I'll PM u a couple songs I recorded this past summer

Ok from the start I don't like this beat anymore. Pianos all over. You know you got bars . It holds up as far as the song, but i'd like to hear you on something that isn't so up tempo. Those bars with inner rhymes are my favorites and those just sound better on a slower joint. You switched schemes quite a few times my favorite was the very last part of you verse. You need to record more stuff its a shame this all u got out

Appreciate this Phil. Was never a fan of song making tbh but got the itch to put something together to have to look back on one day.

Thanks.

peep ma tracks bruh

It's different. That's for sure. Track could benefit from vocals being raised/mixed nicer and/or the beat being lowered. Certain parts of vocals jump. Hook is an odd one lol though altogether i kinda like this track, it's different and if engineered and mixed better could be a pretty cool track.

Didn't even know you made tracks. :high:

Did this lil while ago

Working on some new shit currently

This like Bizzy's song you guys could probably give me tips not much I can nitpick about shit I like. This is fucking dope you not doing more music is a damn shame bruh an i've said that for years.

Seeing people with talent no fucking idea what to do with it is a killer. People haven't become soundcloud rappers in like a decade. Go get your name out there on social media and YouTube and stop wasting what you have. Hell we've already seen an LB did do it.

@Phil Banks I appreciate that fam. Me and @BizzyOne working on a song now. You right though you been saying that for a minute. And I really do need to drop like 100 songs and go crazy one time for the one time.
@EtH you always been the homie cus you keep it real MOST the time lol but you right. Just had to find the love for this shit again. But ima give it a shot. Atleast for the love of it not fame etc

This is spot on

if your tryna make a name as a rapper you need to do music videos on youtube really.

The best format i think is like lady leshurr's queen speech series. 2-3 min bar cypher, simple music vids.

https://www.letsbeef.com/forums/proddetail.php?prod=905314-Set-368
There wasnt supposed to be no real structure, written freestyle-esque. Let me know what you think big homie

I like the delivery an lyrics for sure, but you need to watch some mixing videos. On a scale of 10 you probably lose 3-4 points off the production value. I can really relate have the same issues. This was dope but super short. But I would say off this small sample size you should def be recording A LOT more often. Keep em comin even if you can't get the production value that much higher keep droppin shit because you have potential and with a little extra polish could be something special.

Send em to me I wanta hear might throw it on the LoD mixtape.

My last track I made from back in December. Shit quality tbh, I mixed everything myself, freestyle & all. I'm working on much better shit and will be getting better equipment and whatnot but check this shit out I guess.

Even if you don't wanna go as far as a music video, you can just make some lyrics video and reach out to be involved in the YouTube cyphers.