You didn't make a punchline numb nuts, you made a Statement...
Constructive Criticism: no body ever get's better/improve's being molly coddled... You need bad points to be pointed out, so you can see em, and then say, damn aiight.. *back to the drawing board i go* an fix them... If its a smile and some pleasant conversation your looking for, use FaceBook... if its Battles and improving ya battle rap skills, your at the right place...
Just cos i aint gonna hold ya hand to cross the road, dont mean i wont help lead ya across..
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