[BFNE CEO™]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow::EDGE Ver's line where a little lengthy...it still flowed well, but Edge's flowed smoother
Vocabulary::TIE was close not alot of large vocab, but they both had a lil and the skill was equal
Topic/Meaning::EDGE this was a tough cat to vote on...but edge was just in another place with his meaning
Storytelling/Progression::VERITY this plot was just awesome. i loved the progression in his drop it lead up to a great ending....edge didnt progress very well even though his story was great as well i couldnt put myself in his story as well as i could Ver's
Emotion::VERITY i could feel what the mother felt in his...i got where edge was going with his but again i couldnt put myself in it....but very hard to choose in this cat also
Imagery::VERITY again i could put myself in his story...he painted a very good picture of how this story was going from begining to ended. it was a very well written drop
Poetic Techniques::EDGE hands down got this category...as good as Ver's was edge was giving a whole nother level with his...i mean the dope head mother killin her kids and all was just crazy and grotesque, but it has happened and its a touchy subject to get on i applaud you sir....
Ending::TIE i loved the build up in Ver's and i felt the ending, i was digging the realism and streetness of edges and his ending was very fitting to his story,

i dont know if we can giv tie votes if we can my vote is a TIE
but if we cant im sorry i have to flip a coin on this one......

and the vote goes to.......(drum roll)

VERITY good job both i really enjoyed reading both of your drops......

[BFNE CEO™]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow::EDGE Ver's line where a little lengthy...it still flowed well, but Edge's flowed smoother
Vocabulary::TIE was close not alot of large vocab, but they both had a lil and the skill was equal
Topic/Meaning::EDGE this was a tough cat to vote on...but edge was just in another place with his meaning
Storytelling/Progression::VERITY this plot was just awesome. i loved the progression in his drop it lead up to a great ending....edge didnt progress very well even though his story was great as well i couldnt put myself in his story as well as i could Ver's
Emotion::VERITY i could feel what the mother felt in his...i got where edge was going with his but again i couldnt put myself in it....but very hard to choose in this cat also
Imagery::VERITY again i could put myself in his story...he painted a very good picture of how this story was going from begining to ended. it was a very well written drop
Poetic Techniques::EDGE hands down got this category...as good as Ver's was edge was giving a whole nother level with his...i mean the dope head mother killin her kids and all was just crazy and grotesque, but it has happened and its a touchy subject to get on i applaud you sir....
Ending::TIE i loved the build up in Ver's and i felt the ending, i was digging the realism and streetness of edges and his ending was very fitting to his story,

i dont know if we can giv tie votes if we can my vote is a TIE
but if we cant im sorry i have to flip a coin on this one......

and the vote goes to.......(drum roll)

VERITY good job both i really enjoyed reading both of your drops......