[BFNE CEO™]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow: i gotta giv it to both on this one...
Vocabulary: Stee got this cat....but skills had some nice words in there also
Topic/Meaning: i gotta go with Skills wit da slight edge...even tho Stee's drop was very intellectual ... Skills story was just building to a greater ending
Storytelling/Progression: gotta go wit skills on this...he had the story goin forward better and it built up very nicely
Emotion: i gotta go with Stee on this.....felt the emotion coming from his use of vocab as well as the story....Eged it
Imagery: Skills.....he painted a very vivid picture with his drop was detailed i could put myself in his story......Stee's was very well put together also Skills eged it with more detail
Poetic Techniques: Stee...dude just came with some amizing poeticness in his drop...it was very welll put together from his use of vocab to the emotion behind it....it kept me reading.....Skills drop was very well put together also, just felt Stee's technique was more on point
Ending: goin with Skills on this all the way...the build up in his story was just awesome and it set that ending up very well...like i stated above i could put myself in to this drop alot more then Stee's...it keppt me wanting to know more about the story once i got to the end....this could damn well have been a short story...one of those that just drops you into the action

Good job from both. It was a really hard decision do to the difference in writing styles. i had to read through both 3 times just to be sure that i was making a thorough decision. I enjoyed both of these.
MVGT: Intricate Skills....your build up was great, the ending really set it off for me. It was just an all around good story. Steelio yours was great do to the fact that you have that mind that can use vocabulary well and put it into a story and also be able to rhyme it thats a very admirable skill....but where you lacked at was getting me into your story...alot of people that read are imaginative readers and enjoy putting themselves in the story almost more then actually reading it...im not hating on your drop by any means just a lil advice...if you can not only drop an intellectual topical like that but also get your reader into the story as if it was them they were reading about no one could stop you bro.......

[BFNE CEO™]

Rhyming Scheme/Flow: i gotta giv it to both on this one...
Vocabulary: Stee got this cat....but skills had some nice words in there also
Topic/Meaning: i gotta go with Skills wit da slight edge...even tho Stee's drop was very intellectual ... Skills story was just building to a greater ending
Storytelling/Progression: gotta go wit skills on this...he had the story goin forward better and it built up very nicely
Emotion: i gotta go with Stee on this.....felt the emotion coming from his use of vocab as well as the story....Eged it
Imagery: Skills.....he painted a very vivid picture with his drop was detailed i could put myself in his story......Stee's was very well put together also Skills eged it with more detail
Poetic Techniques: Stee...dude just came with some amizing poeticness in his drop...it was very welll put together from his use of vocab to the emotion behind it....it kept me reading.....Skills drop was very well put together also, just felt Stee's technique was more on point
Ending: goin with Skills on this all the way...the build up in his story was just awesome and it set that ending up very well...like i stated above i could put myself in to this drop alot more then Stee's...it keppt me wanting to know more about the story once i got to the end....this could damn well have been a short story...one of those that just drops you into the action

Good job from both. It was a really hard decision do to the difference in writing styles. i had to read through both 3 times just to be sure that i was making a thorough decision. I enjoyed both of these.
MVGT: Intricate Skills....your build up was great, the ending really set it off for me. It was just an all around good story. Steelio yours was great do to the fact that you have that mind that can use vocabulary well and put it into a story and also be able to rhyme it thats a very admirable skill....but where you lacked at was getting me into your story...alot of people that read are imaginative readers and enjoy putting themselves in the story almost more then actually reading it...im not hating on your drop by any means just a lil advice...if you can not only drop an intellectual topical like that but also get your reader into the story as if it was them they were reading about no one could stop you bro.......