I'm trying to write a nostalgia song..." A Warmer Breeze " but i'm getting a writers block...don't know how to scrutinize it....heres the thing i wrote...its basic thou...
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I’m rolling, the fact that I’m scrolling-flowing,
To get me on the track controlling-knowing,
Contemplating on ma past, slowing it’s snowing,
I’m at the drop of a hat, to enjoy thing & keep going,
I can’t stop thinking about the things that we had,
We used to sit on our zone making rings n then add,
Fuels to the burning woods, & all sings on the track,
& one by one deliver the naughty jokes n we laugh,
We used to gather & globe-totter from place to place,
Homies blazed the blunt n flied high in the space,
Eve teasing and spanking hips while walking on way,
Girls used to abuse famz & mock on what they say,
The time full of fun & full enjoyment,
Now the responsibility is like a employment,
But we can’t back down we need to deploy them,
Coz the planted roots are developing into steam.
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As the enjoyment was going, new friendship evolved in,
We used to hook up with them, like a trend to involve in,
Very activities & occasion to gather at their house,
When their fountainhead rolled-out we used to revolve in,
what next...?
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Check it out ...
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this is the beat i selected...
http://www.shadowville.com/1263/genr...-warmer-breeze
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One day they invited their friend to introduce her to us,
I don’t know why that happened Why ? did I dropped the rush,
but the result paid off, & she travelled back in bus,
we used to have phone calls every day and the night,
I used to text her shining the ray of the light,
We had a deep friendship, completely white,
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eXpo :
I dropped the rush : i proposed w/out knowing her,...
paid off : She said yes
she travelled back in bus : and she got back to home
shining the ray of the light : in the moon light & ray is a signal...
completely white : Very clear in heart with no filthy & negative
thoughts..
EDITING IN FEEDLINK:
http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/showthread.php?t=100034