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09-02-2011, 11:21 AM
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09-02-2011, 11:39 AM
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09-02-2011, 11:40 AM
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09-02-2011, 11:47 AM
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by the way, im second on Str8 up and last on tongue sick
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09-02-2011, 11:51 AM
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Straight Up - love the whispering intro...first person had nice energy - lyrics were crazy...could have been better at times, but still the shockfactor is there...hook was good - sounded like you stacked the vocals, that could have been lined up a tad better...second verse could have been better...felt the artist wasnt comfortable and the lyrics were missing some syllables so he hesitated to fill the voids...the "shotguns blow" part was a great change of pace...third verse was nice - few times the artst slipped up, but caught himself...more concentration on the syllable count will fix that....again, hook was great...really grabbed my attention...nice beat
Tongue Sick - right off the bat, your a tad off beat...not the biggest fan of this beat...really like the flow of the first verse, but i cant help but think that a better beat would have done you soo much more justice...good hook...second verse had great energy...towards the middle, the artist lost momentum...lyrics were good...third verse picked up where the first left off...nothing really to pick at here - just a case of more practice to define your skills...they are definitely present, just need to be polished a tad
your quality is pretty good...didnt take away from the songs at all so that was good...this isnt my type of music, but i can see myself listening to some wigsplit down the road....good job man
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Straight Up - love the whispering intro...first person had nice energy - lyrics were crazy...could have been better at times, but still the shockfactor is there...hook was good - sounded like you stacked the vocals, that could have been lined up a tad better...second verse could have been better...felt the artist wasnt comfortable and the lyrics were missing some syllables so he hesitated to fill the voids...the "shotguns blow" part was a great change of pace...third verse was nice - few times the artst slipped up, but caught himself...more concentration on the syllable count will fix that....again, hook was great...really grabbed my attention...nice beat
Tongue Sick - right off the bat, your a tad off beat...not the biggest fan of this beat...really like the flow of the first verse, but i cant help but think that a better beat would have done you soo much more justice...good hook...second verse had great energy...towards the middle, the artist lost momentum...lyrics were good...third verse picked up where the first left off...nothing really to pick at here - just a case of more practice to define your skills...they are definitely present, just need to be polished a tad
your quality is pretty good...didnt take away from the songs at all so that was good...this isnt my type of music, but i can see myself listening to some wigsplit down the road....good job man
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09-02-2011, 12:46 PM
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09-02-2011, 01:10 PM
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STOY - first one - incredible...if i recall, this is your brother right?...he did his thing...flow and momentum was perfect and he picked a perfect beat...lyrics were great and i could follow everything he was saying...second verse was bananas too...this instantly reminds me of eminem from his infinite days...lyrics were great, didnt waste a syllable...both brought it and complimented each other perfectly...love how the beat stops but homie keeps going, great finish
You People - picked up where he left off on the first song...assuming this is your brother too - homies got a real talent...his lyrics and flow are impeccible...lol let me find out this is you...love the energy he brings to this song
nothing to complain about with either of these tracks...they definitely deserve some playback love and are quite possibly some of the best songs ive heard on here (my opinion that is)...id love to hear more from him and possibly collab if hes willing....great job
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STOY - first one - incredible...if i recall, this is your brother right?...he did his thing...flow and momentum was perfect and he picked a perfect beat...lyrics were great and i could follow everything he was saying...second verse was bananas too...this instantly reminds me of eminem from his infinite days...lyrics were great, didnt waste a syllable...both brought it and complimented each other perfectly...love how the beat stops but homie keeps going, great finish
You People - picked up where he left off on the first song...assuming this is your brother too - homies got a real talent...his lyrics and flow are impeccible...lol let me find out this is you...love the energy he brings to this song
nothing to complain about with either of these tracks...they definitely deserve some playback love and are quite possibly some of the best songs ive heard on here (my opinion that is)...id love to hear more from him and possibly collab if hes willing....great job
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09-02-2011, 01:16 PM
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I Am Simba - love the beat...i think you need to fill in the beginning with some type of intro or something bc you come out of nowhere with all this energy and it takes the listener by surprise...a lot of standout lines here (touching kids, and specifically your opening sequence) but i think the beat needs turned down just a tad - it takes away from the flow of your verse...i like the energy you brought - thought there was one or two instances were you over-did it, but nothing too much...looking forward to the final piece
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I Am Simba - love the beat...i think you need to fill in the beginning with some type of intro or something bc you come out of nowhere with all this energy and it takes the listener by surprise...a lot of standout lines here (touching kids, and specifically your opening sequence) but i think the beat needs turned down just a tad - it takes away from the flow of your verse...i like the energy you brought - thought there was one or two instances were you over-did it, but nothing too much...looking forward to the final piece
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