::Moses Rap School:: Weeks 1-4

[Obey]

*Over loudspeaker* Excuse me, class.. this is your Principal, Mr. Belding.. It seems Professor Moses was in a serious toboggan accident off the coast of India again. Lets all keep him in our thoughts and prayers, thank you.

[Obey]

*Over loudspeaker* Excuse me, class.. this is your Principal, Mr. Belding.. It seems Professor Moses was in a serious toboggan accident off the coast of India again. Lets all keep him in our thoughts and prayers, thank you.

[Erupt da Monsta]

Yeah the coach smokes too much ha grades will be up 2mrw along with week two

[Erupt da Monsta]

Yeah the coach smokes too much ha grades will be up 2mrw along with week two

[Manhattan]

Thanks Teach....To much smoking in the boys room

[Manhattan]

Thanks Teach....To much smoking in the boys room

[Phracture]

Guess today was no school .....

[Phracture]

Guess today was no school .....

I'll be holding a class on hustlenomics after this...

I'll be holding a class on hustlenomics after this...

[Erupt da Monsta]

Week 1 Grades

1.@Xplissit-
2.@Dissizit-76%
3.@cakedout-60%
4.@The Art of War-73%
5.@Agonize-72%
6.@Black Book-69%
7.@Snoopy316-52%
8.@Manhattan- 75%
9.@JimmyDean-80% + (5) = 85%
10.@prospektJS
11.@XplicitKontent
12.@Fidel Z
13.@The Law-67%
14.@TiG-Z- See me after class... 33%
15.@Violent Scripture- 59%

Week One Bar of the week

This weeks Bar of the week goes to @JimmyDean

If you notice the build was relevant, he also had a decent punch leading into the final punch and followed the rules... The use of multis is almost at heavyweight level aswell , there were hardly any gaps inbetween multi sets without relevant multis

I prolly 'Got him sweating' like he BEEN in A FURNACE- Cuz if I find out he had inTENSIOns TA FLIRT WITH my CHICK, on HER WORK SHIFT. Then Clips'll meet this geek, just to 'sweep him off his feet' like this KID was OBSERVIN a TRICK that WAS GORGEOUS!



*Also I dont see anyone else taking the time for a class so I would appreciate you all being patient with the breakdowns this is alot of work, I'm doing music, audio topicals, work, and LIFE, while breaking down 10-15 members bars. The grades are in, the breakdowns will be in FULL I am done with half of them, dont worry about that, this is alot of work though being that you all are at different levels and have diff. things to work on, I will be posting the full breakdowns in here in the morning. Week 2 will start after the breakdowns have been dropped and we discuss what it is we can improve on as a whole. No need to rush perfection, feel free to discuss what you feel eachother can work on and help eachother , this is a learning enviornment, the bulk of you could start by looking at the bar of the week and taking a page out of his book with the multis, structure, the bar wasnt the best punch , but he used the topic, multis, and structure to create a very solid bar.

Dont fret over the scores, they are judged from 1-10 10 being heavyweight and damn near perfect. I was prob a lil generous tbh but I dont see the need to be overly critical

---------- Post added at 04:24 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:21 PM ----------

[/COLOR]I will be working with some of you via PM , because we have alot of work to do.

[Erupt da Monsta]

Week 1 Grades

1.@Xplissit-
2.@Dissizit-76%
3.@cakedout-60%
4.@The Art of War-73%
5.@Agonize-72%
6.@Black Book-69%
7.@Snoopy316-52%
8.@Manhattan- 75%
9.@JimmyDean-80% + (5) = 85%
10.@prospektJS
11.@XplicitKontent
12.@Fidel Z
13.@The Law-67%
14.@TiG-Z- See me after class... 33%
15.@Violent Scripture- 59%

Week One Bar of the week

This weeks Bar of the week goes to @JimmyDean

If you notice the build was relevant, he also had a decent punch leading into the final punch and followed the rules... The use of multis is almost at heavyweight level aswell , there were hardly any gaps inbetween multi sets without relevant multis

I prolly 'Got him sweating' like he BEEN in A FURNACE- Cuz if I find out he had inTENSIOns TA FLIRT WITH my CHICK, on HER WORK SHIFT. Then Clips'll meet this geek, just to 'sweep him off his feet' like this KID was OBSERVIN a TRICK that WAS GORGEOUS!



*Also I dont see anyone else taking the time for a class so I would appreciate you all being patient with the breakdowns this is alot of work, I'm doing music, audio topicals, work, and LIFE, while breaking down 10-15 members bars. The grades are in, the breakdowns will be in FULL I am done with half of them, dont worry about that, this is alot of work though being that you all are at different levels and have diff. things to work on, I will be posting the full breakdowns in here in the morning. Week 2 will start after the breakdowns have been dropped and we discuss what it is we can improve on as a whole. No need to rush perfection, feel free to discuss what you feel eachother can work on and help eachother , this is a learning enviornment, the bulk of you could start by looking at the bar of the week and taking a page out of his book with the multis, structure, the bar wasnt the best punch , but he used the topic, multis, and structure to create a very solid bar.

Dont fret over the scores, they are judged from 1-10 10 being heavyweight and damn near perfect. I was prob a lil generous tbh but I dont see the need to be overly critical

---------- Post added at 04:24 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:21 PM ----------

[/COLOR]I will be working with some of you via PM , because we have alot of work to do.

Originally Posted by Moses

Week 1 Grades

1.@Xplissit-
2.@Dissizit-76%
3.@cakedout-60%
4.@The Art of War-73%
5.@Agonize-72%
6.@Black Book-69%
7.@Snoopy316-52%
8.@Manhattan- 75%
9.@JimmyDean-80% + (5) = 85%
10.@prospektJS
11.@XplicitKontent
12.@Fidel Z
13.@The Law-67%
14.@TiG-Z- See me after class... 33%
15.@Violent Scripture- 59%

Week One Bar of the week

This weeks Bar of the week goes to @JimmyDean

If you notice the build was relevant, he also had a decent punch leading into the final punch and followed the rules... The use of multis is almost at heavyweight level aswell , there were hardly any gaps inbetween multi sets without relevant multis

I prolly 'Got him sweating' like he BEEN in A FURNACE- Cuz if I find out he had inTENSIOns TA FLIRT WITH my CHICK, on HER WORK SHIFT. Then Clips'll meet this geek, just to 'sweep him off his feet' like this KID was OBSERVIN a TRICK that WAS GORGEOUS!



*Also I dont see anyone else taking the time for a class so I would appreciate you all being patient with the breakdowns this is alot of work, I'm doing music, audio topicals, work, and LIFE, while breaking down 10-15 members bars. The grades are in, the breakdowns will be in FULL I am done with half of them, dont worry about that, this is alot of work though being that you all are at different levels and have diff. things to work on, I will be posting the full breakdowns in here in the morning. Week 2 will start after the breakdowns have been dropped and we discuss what it is we can improve on as a whole. No need to rush perfection, feel free to discuss what you feel eachother can work on and help eachother , this is a learning enviornment, the bulk of you could start by looking at the bar of the week and taking a page out of his book with the multis, structure, the bar wasnt the best punch , but he used the topic, multis, and structure to create a very solid bar.

Dont fret over the scores, they are judged from 1-10 10 being heavyweight and damn near perfect. I was prob a lil generous tbh but I dont see the need to be overly critical

---------- Post added at 04:24 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:21 PM ----------

[/COLOR]I will be working with some of you via PM , because we have alot of work to do.

@Moses you didn't get back to me. Can I hop in? Promise I'll be a perfect student

Originally Posted by Moses

Week 1 Grades

1.@Xplissit-
2.@Dissizit-76%
3.@cakedout-60%
4.@The Art of War-73%
5.@Agonize-72%
6.@Black Book-69%
7.@Snoopy316-52%
8.@Manhattan- 75%
9.@JimmyDean-80% + (5) = 85%
10.@prospektJS
11.@XplicitKontent
12.@Fidel Z
13.@The Law-67%
14.@TiG-Z- See me after class... 33%
15.@Violent Scripture- 59%

Week One Bar of the week

This weeks Bar of the week goes to @JimmyDean

If you notice the build was relevant, he also had a decent punch leading into the final punch and followed the rules... The use of multis is almost at heavyweight level aswell , there were hardly any gaps inbetween multi sets without relevant multis

I prolly 'Got him sweating' like he BEEN in A FURNACE- Cuz if I find out he had inTENSIOns TA FLIRT WITH my CHICK, on HER WORK SHIFT. Then Clips'll meet this geek, just to 'sweep him off his feet' like this KID was OBSERVIN a TRICK that WAS GORGEOUS!



*Also I dont see anyone else taking the time for a class so I would appreciate you all being patient with the breakdowns this is alot of work, I'm doing music, audio topicals, work, and LIFE, while breaking down 10-15 members bars. The grades are in, the breakdowns will be in FULL I am done with half of them, dont worry about that, this is alot of work though being that you all are at different levels and have diff. things to work on, I will be posting the full breakdowns in here in the morning. Week 2 will start after the breakdowns have been dropped and we discuss what it is we can improve on as a whole. No need to rush perfection, feel free to discuss what you feel eachother can work on and help eachother , this is a learning enviornment, the bulk of you could start by looking at the bar of the week and taking a page out of his book with the multis, structure, the bar wasnt the best punch , but he used the topic, multis, and structure to create a very solid bar.

Dont fret over the scores, they are judged from 1-10 10 being heavyweight and damn near perfect. I was prob a lil generous tbh but I dont see the need to be overly critical

---------- Post added at 04:24 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:21 PM ----------

[/COLOR]I will be working with some of you via PM , because we have alot of work to do.

@Moses you didn't get back to me. Can I hop in? Promise I'll be a perfect student

[Erupt da Monsta]

Also @Manhattan @Dissizit @JimmyDean all scored over 75% for this week so one more bar like that and they graduate to sophomore .. early.

---------- Post added at 04:36 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:35 PM ----------

Yeah @Nicholas I will add you in place of one of the members that didnt show up for this week.

[Erupt da Monsta]

Also @Manhattan @Dissizit @JimmyDean all scored over 75% for this week so one more bar like that and they graduate to sophomore .. early.

---------- Post added at 04:36 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:35 PM ----------

Yeah @Nicholas I will add you in place of one of the members that didnt show up for this week.

[X-Calibur]

And you know im in on week 2 me and @Nicholas like the exchange students ... Be nice class mates

[X-Calibur]

And you know im in on week 2 me and @Nicholas like the exchange students ... Be nice class mates

[Erupt da Monsta]

Originally Posted by X-Calibur

And you know im in on week 2 me and @Nicholas like the exchange students ... Be nice class mates

No doubt, replaced the students that didnt show last week with you two, early,I'm off to work tho, gotta do this night shift shit.

[Erupt da Monsta]

Originally Posted by X-Calibur

And you know im in on week 2 me and @Nicholas like the exchange students ... Be nice class mates

No doubt, replaced the students that didnt show last week with you two, early,I'm off to work tho, gotta do this night shift shit.