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Unread 03-04-2012, 04:06 PM
IV
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Estimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 stars
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4 Won / 1 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.16/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.16/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.16/10 stars
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153 Won / 28 Lost
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3 Won / 0 Lost
Default Double Ŧ vs Verity (NON tourney battle)

Double Ŧ vs Verity


House rules apply. Any question, please ask.

Check ins are due Monday 5th of March at 11.59PM GMT
Verses due Wednesday 7th of March at 11.59PM GMT]


Line length; 20-60 lines
3-0 K.O or first to 5 votes

Subject chosen by Double; Surviving in the forest.


Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary
Topic/Meaning
Storytelling/Progression
Emotion
Imagery
Poetic Techniques
Ending


---------- Post added at 09:06 PM ---------- Previous post was at 07:13 PM ----------

Check mate.
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Unread 03-04-2012, 04:06 PM   #1
 
IV
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Estimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.73/10 stars
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4 Won / 1 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.73/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.16/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.16/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.16/10 stars
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153 Won / 28 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
3 Won / 0 Lost
 
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Default Double Ŧ vs Verity (NON tourney battle)

Double Ŧ vs Verity


House rules apply. Any question, please ask.

Check ins are due Monday 5th of March at 11.59PM GMT
Verses due Wednesday 7th of March at 11.59PM GMT]


Line length; 20-60 lines
3-0 K.O or first to 5 votes

Subject chosen by Double; Surviving in the forest.


Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary
Topic/Meaning
Storytelling/Progression
Emotion
Imagery
Poetic Techniques
Ending


---------- Post added at 09:06 PM ---------- Previous post was at 07:13 PM ----------

Check mate.
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Unread 03-04-2012, 06:04 PM
Double Ŧ Double Ŧ is on FIRE! 5+ wins in a row!
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 96
Mentioned: 3 Post(s)
Tagged: 2 Thread(s)
Estimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
4 Won / 1 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.44/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.44/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.44/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
81 Won / 23 Lost
Default

Hey you didnt have to go on the subject, just use da picture Verity. Checking in, about to drop.

---------- Post added at 05:54 AM ---------- Previous post was at 05:31 AM ----------

~Visual Guide~
~Visual Guide~


*MY* Topic *Survival In The Forest*

started as a "small thing", while staying "true to order"
i gotta "rise" like a "tall king" viewin all the *food n water*
who woulda thought the "~road im on was crystal clean~"
all the *little things taste good*, like the "mist on leaves"
i found !peace! and acceptence, this !life was too serene!
but in the back of my mind, !mother nature? WHO IS SHE!? (cough)
can SHE truly see that ~after 7 years~ in life its nothing NEW TO ME (cough)
i remember the FAKE look of the !CREATOR OF THIS!, but why (cough)
at the end of it all !mother natures! A BITCH... thats life (cough)
so with "~*one foot on the ground*~" n !bird songs like soft hymns!
i just "~*stood lookin out*~", with "~*one limb thats gone limp*~"
i "branch out" to new thoughts, ill *SOLVE THIS PROBLEM GOOD*
when i WITNESS THE CREATOR with a ~good HOLD ON SOLID WOOD~ (cough)
"*time seemed endless*" it just wasnt slow enough
asking myself questions like "~*is this where im growing up?*~"
i kept saying "*~im not lost~*", "*ive just gotta make it higher*"
at "*night ive got frost*", *im cold*, but "afraid of fire"
"*bugs start crawling on my skin*", "n i cant shake em off"
but i CONFORM to what it is, on my SPOT i STAY ON TOP(hiccup)
but because im ~young~, i "twirl in wind" and play instead
having fun with "*dirty skin*" cause i "*couldnt change my THREADS*",
so i concentrate on !stars!, watch them !shoot like a missle!
im through ~bein little~ theres the proof in my "*BRISTLE*" (hmm?)
what a !BORING PLACE TO LIVE!, i dont "~*want to be alone*~"
its not a problem to me though i guess the "*forest is my home*"
but whats this i finally see?, a ~little kid on his own~?
can he not stand the sight of this beast?, its interesting to know
i would *die to be free*, but this ~kid didnt even slow~
-sigh- the "life of a tree", still "continuing to grow"

Symbol Legend
"Hidden reference"
~Reference to the picture directly~
*Survival in the Forest*
"~*Reference to all three*~"
"~Reference to both the hidden reference or picture directly~"
"*Reference to the hidden reference or Survival in the Forest*"
!General nature topic!
CAPS? WHAT CAPS?

READ IT TWICE


---------- Post added at 07:04 AM ---------- Previous post was at 05:54 AM ----------

Expo
I am rapping from the eyes of the kid, as if he is lost in the forest, and at the same time from the eyes of a tree.
Bristle: What happens when you dont shave, also the hair that are found on a plant.
"One foot on the ground" Trees only have one foot on the ground. And so does the kid in the picutre. When taken from a survival in the forest point of view, im saying i broke my leg.
"Good hold on solid wood" The creator that made me has a good hold on solid wood, the picture has a walking stick, also i just solved that broken limb problem.

That should point out how complex some of my metaphors were. Nuff said, not tryna sway. Jus trying to reiterate this verse isnt what it seems upon first read.
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Last edited by Double Ŧ; 03-04-2012 at 05:39 PM. Reason: Typo, and added bold on one line
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Unread 03-04-2012, 06:04 PM   #2
 
Double Ŧ Double Ŧ is on FIRE! 5+ wins in a row!
Estimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.18/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
4 Won / 1 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.18/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.44/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.44/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.44/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
81 Won / 23 Lost
 
Join Date: Apr 2008
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Tagged: 2 Thread(s)


Default

Hey you didnt have to go on the subject, just use da picture Verity. Checking in, about to drop.

---------- Post added at 05:54 AM ---------- Previous post was at 05:31 AM ----------

~Visual Guide~
~Visual Guide~


*MY* Topic *Survival In The Forest*

started as a "small thing", while staying "true to order"
i gotta "rise" like a "tall king" viewin all the *food n water*
who woulda thought the "~road im on was crystal clean~"
all the *little things taste good*, like the "mist on leaves"
i found !peace! and acceptence, this !life was too serene!
but in the back of my mind, !mother nature? WHO IS SHE!? (cough)
can SHE truly see that ~after 7 years~ in life its nothing NEW TO ME (cough)
i remember the FAKE look of the !CREATOR OF THIS!, but why (cough)
at the end of it all !mother natures! A BITCH... thats life (cough)
so with "~*one foot on the ground*~" n !bird songs like soft hymns!
i just "~*stood lookin out*~", with "~*one limb thats gone limp*~"
i "branch out" to new thoughts, ill *SOLVE THIS PROBLEM GOOD*
when i WITNESS THE CREATOR with a ~good HOLD ON SOLID WOOD~ (cough)
"*time seemed endless*" it just wasnt slow enough
asking myself questions like "~*is this where im growing up?*~"
i kept saying "*~im not lost~*", "*ive just gotta make it higher*"
at "*night ive got frost*", *im cold*, but "afraid of fire"
"*bugs start crawling on my skin*", "n i cant shake em off"
but i CONFORM to what it is, on my SPOT i STAY ON TOP(hiccup)
but because im ~young~, i "twirl in wind" and play instead
having fun with "*dirty skin*" cause i "*couldnt change my THREADS*",
so i concentrate on !stars!, watch them !shoot like a missle!
im through ~bein little~ theres the proof in my "*BRISTLE*" (hmm?)
what a !BORING PLACE TO LIVE!, i dont "~*want to be alone*~"
its not a problem to me though i guess the "*forest is my home*"
but whats this i finally see?, a ~little kid on his own~?
can he not stand the sight of this beast?, its interesting to know
i would *die to be free*, but this ~kid didnt even slow~
-sigh- the "life of a tree", still "continuing to grow"

Symbol Legend
"Hidden reference"
~Reference to the picture directly~
*Survival in the Forest*
"~*Reference to all three*~"
"~Reference to both the hidden reference or picture directly~"
"*Reference to the hidden reference or Survival in the Forest*"
!General nature topic!
CAPS? WHAT CAPS?

READ IT TWICE


---------- Post added at 07:04 AM ---------- Previous post was at 05:54 AM ----------

Expo
I am rapping from the eyes of the kid, as if he is lost in the forest, and at the same time from the eyes of a tree.
Bristle: What happens when you dont shave, also the hair that are found on a plant.
"One foot on the ground" Trees only have one foot on the ground. And so does the kid in the picutre. When taken from a survival in the forest point of view, im saying i broke my leg.
"Good hold on solid wood" The creator that made me has a good hold on solid wood, the picture has a walking stick, also i just solved that broken limb problem.

That should point out how complex some of my metaphors were. Nuff said, not tryna sway. Jus trying to reiterate this verse isnt what it seems upon first read.
__________________

Last edited by Double Ŧ; 03-04-2012 at 05:39 PM. Reason: Typo, and added bold on one line
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