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I think its time, to stop giving a fuck, I could make a fucking livin' off this shit that I snuff.. the shit that I swallow - has given enough, strength, to be so damn dank - killin' this stuff.. and now we are livin' it up... fighting all the fuckers, that are willing to scuff.. enlightening motherfuckers that our skills are enough, its lightning, motherfucker, cuz you're feeling struck. King Kendrick? Will feel the buck fucking steal his nuts, hang em up at the dollar store, its the only time people will deal his stuff.. is this real enough? For a little bitch like you, dare mention? That people wanna fight you.. cuz their jealous? Nah, its cuz you claim to be pac in the flesh.. the king of this rap shit, top of the rest.. motherfucker you should just stop with your breath.. talking so fucking hard like you were shot in the chest, and lived of course.. now you're shoppin for vests.. but your caught in a mess.. like intercourse. So you can hide in your little fort.. made of sticks and semen... cuz you're a lil poor.. even though you say you killin more, then professionals do.. I could write my shit on crack and still be better then you.. how you expect me to do? How you expect me to act, your a lit-tel motherfucker start steppin it back. You want me to believe, that you are set with the crack.. got a Mack in your hand.. but aint ready to blast? Throw you in a shack or a van.. even the back.. seat.. will suffice, when this fucking heat end ya life... that's one way to put it.. my gunplay is hooded.. some days, I shouldn't... just play with bullets. Experience the excellence... man I'm spitting pestilence, you're talking shit, no evidence.. i make sure im never dense.. cleverness, staying real when i tell ya this.. i represent.. for all the fallen angels like I'm heaven sent. My shit is dope.. like the drugs that hit ya nose, slit your throat, with the notes... you better listen close.. ima takeDown weezy... he can let.. his fucking pistol go - I'll drop bombs like America does.. to almost every state.. only I'm a heavyweight... here just to set ya straight.. yes I'm great, but I know I aint worthy of Legend status.. but why did these two faggots even mention that shit.. I'll end the madness.. I don't even need weapons, cuz I don't mess with that shit.. I'll just end 'em in three sessions, when I set the rap shit.. ah shit.. I'm lending them each, seconds.. when they open their mouths, I'll stab em and drop em.. looking like there's coke on the ground. Take notes on my sound.. its the reason for your misery, I'm choking you down, make sure he is a mystery.. both.. kings have broken their crown.. their cheesy with delivery. Now their on their knees like they were missin' me... I'ma fucking BEAST on this lil man, like Henry McCoy... lemme destroy his motherfucking ego when i step on theBoy. I created my own path.. paved my own way, saved my old flame, from raping and old man.. cuz it plays its own games like it sedated a snorlax and gave him snore, mang, revamped the damn thing, gave him the sword play, taught him rave & the foreplay im just playing it your way.. I am the fucking anti Christ.. aiming at your brain.. man your half as nice as damn hermaphrodites, high on meth.. the crystal in their brain til they cry their breaths.. out.. are they dyin' yet? Pop a couple perkasets, you've done nothing to earn ya rep how the fuck do you deserve respect? Your words are wrecked. I'm a jerk at best, remove your fucking bladder.. until your organs splatter like disposing of matter ... or learning sex. Sometimes loading the pistol is all that's on my mind, man, my notes aren't simple, they just bomb ya rhymes.. that's why you should just follow mine, swallow nine, pills of ex, I'm still the best, when i brawl & fly wanna walk the walk? Then its time to die...
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Control verse [incomplete]
I think its time, to stop giving a fuck, I could make a fucking livin' off this shit that I snuff.. the shit that I swallow - has given enough, strength, to be so damn dank - killin' this stuff.. and now we are livin' it up... fighting all the fuckers, that are willing to scuff.. enlightening motherfuckers that our skills are enough, its lightning, motherfucker, cuz you're feeling struck. King Kendrick? Will feel the buck fucking steal his nuts, hang em up at the dollar store, its the only time people will deal his stuff.. is this real enough? For a little bitch like you, dare mention? That people wanna fight you.. cuz their jealous? Nah, its cuz you claim to be pac in the flesh.. the king of this rap shit, top of the rest.. motherfucker you should just stop with your breath.. talking so fucking hard like you were shot in the chest, and lived of course.. now you're shoppin for vests.. but your caught in a mess.. like intercourse. So you can hide in your little fort.. made of sticks and semen... cuz you're a lil poor.. even though you say you killin more, then professionals do.. I could write my shit on crack and still be better then you.. how you expect me to do? How you expect me to act, your a lit-tel motherfucker start steppin it back. You want me to believe, that you are set with the crack.. got a Mack in your hand.. but aint ready to blast? Throw you in a shack or a van.. even the back.. seat.. will suffice, when this fucking heat end ya life... that's one way to put it.. my gunplay is hooded.. some days, I shouldn't... just play with bullets. Experience the excellence... man I'm spitting pestilence, you're talking shit, no evidence.. i make sure im never dense.. cleverness, staying real when i tell ya this.. i represent.. for all the fallen angels like I'm heaven sent. My shit is dope.. like the drugs that hit ya nose, slit your throat, with the notes... you better listen close.. ima takeDown weezy... he can let.. his fucking pistol go - I'll drop bombs like America does.. to almost every state.. only I'm a heavyweight... here just to set ya straight.. yes I'm great, but I know I aint worthy of Legend status.. but why did these two faggots even mention that shit.. I'll end the madness.. I don't even need weapons, cuz I don't mess with that shit.. I'll just end 'em in three sessions, when I set the rap shit.. ah shit.. I'm lending them each, seconds.. when they open their mouths, I'll stab em and drop em.. looking like there's coke on the ground. Take notes on my sound.. its the reason for your misery, I'm choking you down, make sure he is a mystery.. both.. kings have broken their crown.. their cheesy with delivery. Now their on their knees like they were missin' me... I'ma fucking BEAST on this lil man, like Henry McCoy... lemme destroy his motherfucking ego when i step on theBoy. I created my own path.. paved my own way, saved my old flame, from raping and old man.. cuz it plays its own games like it sedated a snorlax and gave him snore, mang, revamped the damn thing, gave him the sword play, taught him rave & the foreplay im just playing it your way.. I am the fucking anti Christ.. aiming at your brain.. man your half as nice as damn hermaphrodites, high on meth.. the crystal in their brain til they cry their breaths.. out.. are they dyin' yet? Pop a couple perkasets, you've done nothing to earn ya rep how the fuck do you deserve respect? Your words are wrecked. I'm a jerk at best, remove your fucking bladder.. until your organs splatter like disposing of matter ... or learning sex. Sometimes loading the pistol is all that's on my mind, man, my notes aren't simple, they just bomb ya rhymes.. that's why you should just follow mine, swallow nine, pills of ex, I'm still the best, when i brawl & fly wanna walk the walk? Then its time to die...
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01-02-2015, 03:43 PM
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I know its hard to feedback a track.. without hearing it over the beat..but you can at least feed back the lyrics.
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I know its hard to feedback a track.. without hearing it over the beat..but you can at least feed back the lyrics.
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