Dr. Killz

[Phoenix]

Originally Posted by ViTRiOL

Dude, I wasn't taking the piss out of you, I was just curious. I could tell that you aren't a natural english speaker... You're doing very well so far, you just got a few definitions wrong.

They ARE English words, yes, but they don't make sense in the context of the sentences that you are constructing...

Lol I wasn't mad or something...and I'll re-write these lines.

[Phoenix]

Originally Posted by ViTRiOL

Dude, I wasn't taking the piss out of you, I was just curious. I could tell that you aren't a natural english speaker... You're doing very well so far, you just got a few definitions wrong.

They ARE English words, yes, but they don't make sense in the context of the sentences that you are constructing...

Lol I wasn't mad or something...and I'll re-write these lines.

[Phoenix]

I know I use This Thread Alot But I'm Working On This Shit..Thanks For This Thread Here An Another Verse I've Worked On Being Clear.

@Itz Killz

This Faggot Ain't Winning With That "Faliure Style"It's Like A SPECIOUS SWAGGER And His "Irrelevant Statements" Is Foolish That Why We Call Him A THESIS RAPPER And This Bastard Wouldn't Be A "Heavy Hitter"If He Was A GRIEVOUS BATTER!Steelo Would Only "Pull A Nine" When He FORCING MAGS And The Only Time This Dude "Reach The Fame" When He Is SURFING ADS And This Faggot Winning This Battle ? He Should Stick To NURSING NAGS cuz I'm "Too Freshen" For Him And He Wouldn't "Deliver Punches" If He SERVING JABS!I'll Leave You "Out Of Trial"Like FABRIC RAIL and "Confinned Up"The Only Time This Fag Celebrating In St.PATRICK DAY!

This a 8 liner I've sent to steelo right now.

[Phoenix]

I know I use This Thread Alot But I'm Working On This Shit..Thanks For This Thread Here An Another Verse I've Worked On Being Clear.

@Itz Killz

This Faggot Ain't Winning With That "Faliure Style"It's Like A SPECIOUS SWAGGER And His "Irrelevant Statements" Is Foolish That Why We Call Him A THESIS RAPPER And This Bastard Wouldn't Be A "Heavy Hitter"If He Was A GRIEVOUS BATTER!Steelo Would Only "Pull A Nine" When He FORCING MAGS And The Only Time This Dude "Reach The Fame" When He Is SURFING ADS And This Faggot Winning This Battle ? He Should Stick To NURSING NAGS cuz I'm "Too Freshen" For Him And He Wouldn't "Deliver Punches" If He SERVING JABS!I'll Leave You "Out Of Trial"Like FABRIC RAIL and "Confinned Up"The Only Time This Fag Celebrating In St.PATRICK DAY!

This a 8 liner I've sent to steelo right now.

[Just C]

Since I'm bored n can't post battles on my Pod.

Just posting this bar I just thought up n jotted.

Go head 'shoot from the mouth' n talk 'WILD, I'LL PULL IT' , 'revolve the chamber'
then 'unload the pain ta' make ya 'bite ya lip' when ya 'BITE THE BULLET!'

@Itz Killz

[Just C]

Since I'm bored n can't post battles on my Pod.

Just posting this bar I just thought up n jotted.

Go head 'shoot from the mouth' n talk 'WILD, I'LL PULL IT' , 'revolve the chamber'
then 'unload the pain ta' make ya 'bite ya lip' when ya 'BITE THE BULLET!'

@Itz Killz

[Krhyme Killz]

dope concept...but i hate when a word is used twice in line lol...just a pet peeve.

decent imagery though

[Krhyme Killz]

dope concept...but i hate when a word is used twice in line lol...just a pet peeve.

decent imagery though

[Revan]

This fag's boyfriend has aids & u DEEP IN THE VERMIN THO? Shit its like his "Plane Was Cancelled" the way he SLEEPS IN THE 'TERMINAL'!!!

[Revan]

This fag's boyfriend has aids & u DEEP IN THE VERMIN THO? Shit its like his "Plane Was Cancelled" the way he SLEEPS IN THE 'TERMINAL'!!!

[Krhyme Killz]

gross yo...lol.

a lil forced...i could go into the details, but i'm hetero soo....nah

[Krhyme Killz]

gross yo...lol.

a lil forced...i could go into the details, but i'm hetero soo....nah

[Just C]

This 'guy a lier' tryna act like his CLIPS AL DUMP when his PISTOL PUMPS cuz every threat to dead a guy is 'FICTIONAL'/ so COME ON K QUIT/ u never been PICTURED ONCE GRIPPING TO FIRE, just heard u SNITCH 'THROUGH THE WIRE' on SOME 'KANYE SHIT' that's how he knows your 'SCRIPTING BUNK'

[Just C]

This 'guy a lier' tryna act like his CLIPS AL DUMP when his PISTOL PUMPS cuz every threat to dead a guy is 'FICTIONAL'/ so COME ON K QUIT/ u never been PICTURED ONCE GRIPPING TO FIRE, just heard u SNITCH 'THROUGH THE WIRE' on SOME 'KANYE SHIT' that's how he knows your 'SCRIPTING BUNK'

[Ruthless_One]

"your flow is softer than a FATTY LADY'S ASSCHEEKS,yet you ACTIN CRAZY while ya RAP WEAK,well i'm 'spawnin from satan' and you act 'hard while you playin' like MASTERBATING WHILE LAUGHING!"
have at it,be honest w/ me

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I got a few....
"yo you 'BE TAKEN APART', though you claim you a *BLAZE BLOWER*,but you're 'WEAK FAKE,DON'T START' PLUS YOU COULDNT '"CRE-ATE A SPARK"' weildin a *FLAMETHROWER!*"

---------- Post added at 01:39 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:36 PM ----------

you never 'packed a challenge' or 'had talent'so listen and *FOLLOW BITCH I'LL BASH YA*,and i dont need to be 'pushin this far' cause you 'wouldn't be hard' if you *SWALLOWED TEN VIAGRA!!*

[Ruthless_One]

"your flow is softer than a FATTY LADY'S ASSCHEEKS,yet you ACTIN CRAZY while ya RAP WEAK,well i'm 'spawnin from satan' and you act 'hard while you playin' like MASTERBATING WHILE LAUGHING!"
have at it,be honest w/ me

---------- Post added at 01:36 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:34 PM ----------

I got a few....
"yo you 'BE TAKEN APART', though you claim you a *BLAZE BLOWER*,but you're 'WEAK FAKE,DON'T START' PLUS YOU COULDNT '"CRE-ATE A SPARK"' weildin a *FLAMETHROWER!*"

---------- Post added at 01:39 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:36 PM ----------

you never 'packed a challenge' or 'had talent'so listen and *FOLLOW BITCH I'LL BASH YA*,and i dont need to be 'pushin this far' cause you 'wouldn't be hard' if you *SWALLOWED TEN VIAGRA!!*