I read this several times.. over a course of a few days.. This was a amazing battle imo.. Both conveying their image well. One usin a very poetic, well worded, non traditional approach.. The imagery was present and the flow was top notch.. the vocab was untouchable.. but it demands a reread from the average reader.. alot goin over heads on the first read.. I wouldve loved if you had taken a more narrative approach... . while the other kept it traditional and very lyrical.. A wonderful mixture of poem and verse.. The story was a great read, and flowed nicely.. Loved the plot.. Who doesnt love a crazy chick story.. haha.. Very narrative, and presented a nice image... This was the better of the two, imo.. So...
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Great entries guys...
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