Both stories were cool. One took a literal approach while the other took a more original approach. Uhmazing's rhymes were a little more difficult to follow. I myself was able to see it but to other users it might be a little harder. The overall story was good but felt a little predictable in a sense. The imagery was good, the vocab was average, but the story itself was decent.
Mcjewfro's flow was a lot smoother due to his rhyme structure. His story was more original to the topic, I enjoyed the angle he took. In terms of story I think it was a little more rounded than Uhmazings which is why im leaning his way.
MVGT: Mcjewfro
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