All three had dope stories. Uncival I felt yours was the most unoriginal, simply because the drug/alcohol topicals are all over the place. The story itself was written out decently but it was a predictable story and has been done before a lot. And Padded Cell story was a little more original. I just felt there could of been more in between, like more details. I felt like it was skipping around a bit and some of the inbetween details could of been there. But it overall I was able to relate considering I'm going to be a military man myself.
M U G G Z had the most original, and well thought out story to me. Overall his piece just stuck out, had the right components, and it was something I havent seen before.
MVGT: M U G G Z
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