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Unread 12-04-2013, 11:48 AM
ELOH STACKz
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10 Won / 2 Lost
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132 Won / 38 Lost
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3 Won / 0 Lost
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I agree with @Dissizit... Punchlines are important, they bring the ohhhh's & ahhhh's. But you need to set them up with good Multi-rhyme schemes. It's about creativity & complexity. Me & Diss just had a battle, both came with hard punch lines but his Multi's were more complex. I got lazy towards the end going for comedic bars & it may end up costing me the win. We'll see how things shake out in a day or two...

Btw: I appreciate the vote in that battle @sax0joe
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I'm so old i have trouble holding my poop in when i fart.......Hows that for imagery?
Might be a bit premature, but... Quote of the Year? Lol
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Unread 12-04-2013, 11:48 AM   #5
 
ELOH STACKz
Live Battler
Estimated Skill in Audio: 8.06/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.06/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.06/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.06/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.06/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.06/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.06/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.06/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.06/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.06/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
10 Won / 2 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 8.06/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.06/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.06/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.06/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.06/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 8.06/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.75/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.75/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.75/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 6.75/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
132 Won / 38 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
3 Won / 0 Lost
 
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I agree with @Dissizit... Punchlines are important, they bring the ohhhh's & ahhhh's. But you need to set them up with good Multi-rhyme schemes. It's about creativity & complexity. Me & Diss just had a battle, both came with hard punch lines but his Multi's were more complex. I got lazy towards the end going for comedic bars & it may end up costing me the win. We'll see how things shake out in a day or two...

Btw: I appreciate the vote in that battle @sax0joe
__________________
Your Punchlines? Miss me with that Bullshit...


ELOH_STACKz - "Money Callin": http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/prodd...2116-Money-663

Quote:
Originally Posted by ET the Refugee View Post
I'm so old i have trouble holding my poop in when i fart.......Hows that for imagery?
Might be a bit premature, but... Quote of the Year? Lol
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